Weird Erosion: the Awakening Time Is Suspended at the Beginning

Why join the organization? You have designed the lone wolf skills I thought it was because Outline joined the organization, but you held a vote and turned against the readers😅 It's a bit rebellious 26.5.5 Brothers, I have read it again due to book shortage, and now I have seen the end of the book in the cinema. It's still very nice, and the rating has been changed from 2 to 5. Although the protagonist has joined the organization, it is still absolutely self-interested for now. If there is a national war or holy mother behavior, I will change it back. If it's not 100%, I'll give the author a reward and arrange it. 26.5.5 Stop writing about your real-life plot. If the copy is good, write more. Make the most of your strengths and avoid your weaknesses. If you think about it carefully, every time you lose followers, it is definitely caused by real-life plots. It's not that it's rare or not, but it's just that you want to beat up the Japanese when they come here 😅 It's weird for you to open a hot pot restaurant and insist on making hot pot and ice cream without paying for it.

So far, the writing is really good. The highlight is that the protagonist is decisive in killing, egoistic, smart, and the basic logic is okay. The most important thing is a little bit of humanity. I hope it can be maintained in the future. Even if it is a dark novel, I hope the protagonist is a human being, not a monster in human skin.

It's suspenseful and weird, with twists and turns. If the author can keep thinking about not looking for writers or AI, it will definitely become popular, but it will definitely be restricted because the national policy is to limit the current. These suspenseful stories

The old bookworm thinks it's good, I like this kind of IQ, logical and exciting ghost, but the first copy is a bit too long, more than 80 chapters are not over yet, I hope it will be proportional to the protagonist's gains, otherwise I will be too tired [face covering]

It's okay, it's very well written. There are only cheats, but it doesn't reduce the tension. The protagonist can also use them, and he uses them very handsomely. The copy is also very weird and powerful, but I don't know what the final ending will be like. Come on, author!

It's looking really good now, the copy is really well written. Shi Zhenghua's writing was very good, but I didn't expect him to die so quickly. Was it a real death and a fake death? 😦

It's very good-looking. I feel like I wouldn't be able to survive even a day if I went in [laughing and crying]. Don't read the negative comments. Your writing is very good. I feel it has the potential to get a 9-point rating. As long as you update more.

It's good-looking, has a strong sense of immersion, and is thrilling. When I watched it, I felt creepy and scared (óò｡). But it's still very interesting. The more I watch it, the more I want to watch it (*╹▽╹*)

The rating is low, it should be above 9 points The first dungeon is good, but the second dungeon is just a piece of shit. The blood pressure of those watching it soars. There are so many brainless villains.

The sense of despair written in this novel is definitely enough. For the description of ghosts in some copies, it is really good. The character of the protagonist is also in line with the appetite. To survive, there is no need to be ruthless. Unlike other novels, in the first copy at the beginning, the man dies and the woman lives, or It's just that the writing is weird, and the reading is weird. I obviously feel something is wrong, but I can't put it into words. In this novel, I can read it smoothly. In short, I personally feel that this novel gives me a very good impression. The score is indeed low. I give this book five stars [laughs] The reason for the low score should be related to the comments in the book [Exploration]

The writing is quite good. I only read the abilities of a loser and a d4c for novices. I slowly unlocked them in the later stages. The author can be regarded as a pioneer. After all, Araki's imagination in Jo is really big. The author also borrowed this ability into his own writing, which is a good integration. It's almost finished. It's interesting before the first level in the early stage. After the advanced level, it becomes semi-invincible. However, the author forced to suppress the combat power and add an extraterritorial boss in order to create a bit of suspense. After the second level, in order to create my own invincibility, I used cause and effect in the surface world. I didn't mention the talent but only explained it to the third level. Only the fourth level can crack it. For the sake of mystery, I added it and had to expose it myself. Adding the agent can only be said to be a failure. The transition was too blunt. If it didn't work, I deleted the surface world. Focus on the protagonist himself and don't think about developing his power. It feels impossible to write. As for the boss, we can learn from the predecessors and make a big integration with a little touch.

There are 100 chapters in the novice copy. What does the author plan to write next? . I don't know what the point of joining the official is. If you say that joining is just to get information and don't do anything, you will set up your own organization and be the boss, but you won't wipe the butt of your subordinates. I believe no one will criticize you. Are there many benefits to joining the official? It's a lot of bullshit.

Chapter 62 is very nice and decisive in killing. This quality is very rare in survival/supernatural literature.

It's quite interesting. The protagonist should be self-interested.

There are no big poison points, which feels good. The ghosts are the kind of mysterious resurrection that cannot be destroyed and have killing rules. Although a dungeon has more than 100 chapters, it is relatively long, but it is acceptable. The main character is very powerful. Unless there are some people with this level in the back, it will be a bit super model, but there are limitations and it is not brainless.

For a copy, the plot is too lengthy. The plot direction is relatively reasonable, but some of the protagonist's behaviors are too human-machine... I have seen more than 80 chapters and read the comments. The first copy has more than 100 chapters. Forget it, let's keep it for now. I hope I can still remember the plot by then, and I hope I will still be interested in reading this book! [Smile]

Overall, it's pretty good. In the first dungeon, the plot seemed incoherent and confusing. The protagonist knew how to proceed, but I didn't know from God's perspective. The second is that the dungeon is too long at 100 chapters. If the goal is clear, the plot is tight and exciting. It would be better to add inversion. Come on, author!

The book is okay, but the first copy is too long

So far it seems to be okay. It's just that the dungeon is a bit long. The first one has more than a hundred chapters. It depends on whether it collapses later. After all, it's a long-term thing like this. Basically it breaks easily.

It's a bit interesting. The description of the environment and the pedestrians on the roadside through the weather forecast give people an immersive feeling. This is a bit interesting. But having said that, is the intensity of the first dungeon that high? [Shocked] It looks like the whole city is being distorted

I originally wanted to give it 4 stars, but Chen Tao is great. This cowardly and not particularly smart man, after experiencing death, finally burst out with great courage, I can completely imagine his inner journey. Again, the hymn of mankind is the hymn of courage.

It's okay. Many people think that the first dungeon is too long. The first dungeon has 100 chapters, but the second dungeon only has 40 chapters. Most of the entries in the novice dungeon belong to the highest difficulty level of the first-level dungeon. There are only three-level dungeons in total. It's not very bloated, and it feels okay. Although the golden finger is very open, it is not against the sky. At the same time, the IQ is online, which balances cool writing and brain. Keep up the good work.

The settings are pretty good, and I feel like there's nothing wrong with it.

There are not many poisonous points, the pace is slow and the writing is okay. It is a book that people can read. Alas, I just hope the author can persevere and try to write it to the end.

The quality is high. I would like to suggest that each copy be shorter. I was tired of reading the first copy and I haven't finished it yet [laughing and crying]. The plot needs to be more compact, and it is best to have a sense of suspense and tension throughout. Of course, this requirement is relatively high, but it is already very good. The story structure is complete and the imagination is great. Come on, I am going to read the second book.

It was mainly the title of the book that attracted me, mainly because the abilities were similar, but there weren't many elements, and I felt like I was being cheated, but the writing was okay. I've read a book about ghost stories with rules that has the ability to stand in for characters before, but I can't find it, which is a pity. After reading the first chapter, the world structure and power system that the author wants to describe are still relatively large, and I am a little worried about whether the author's writing skills are sufficient.

The first dungeon was amazing. It was the best-written horror dungeon I have ever seen. Unfortunately, the rest was not so good.

Is the author new? The writing is quite good, and it ranks high among all the supernatural novels I have read. Based on my years of experience in reading, if it can be completed normally, it will be comparable to masterpieces such as House of Horror and Mysterious Resurrection.

After reading the first copy, let me give a brief evaluation. I personally think it is very exciting. This is the first time I have read this type of novel. It is very attractive to me and I like Jojo very much. The author has done a good job in balancing Jojo's stand-in ability with the difficulty of the copy in the first copy. I look forward to the author's subsequent plots. Come on, author!

It's good to read. It's the same feeling as when I read decrypted horror novels before. It's very interesting. I just want more.