Villain in the Book: After I Died, They All Turned Dark

First, I would like to give five stars for the plot before chapter 128. It is quite enjoyable to read the first 128 chapters of this book without thinking. Now let's talk about the plot of Chapter 128. It's really the kind of poison that kills people. What do you mean by the male protagonist's pretense to seek perfection after knowing that the female protagonist is a yandere? "Everything I said before was all angry words" "Things are over, let's go back to the way we were before." No buddy, it really made my head twitch when I saw it, as if there was a bamboo pole-like transvestite in my mind, wriggling around and saying such weird things. In the end, the male protagonist failed to escape and became a licking dog. [Spitting] To be honest, I had to undergo vomiting surgery, and I was forced to take love potions before. The heroine didn't let me drink it, so I just drank it. In the end, the heroine went to help me, but I didn't want to help, so I didn't want to help. In the end, I got into trouble and was caught. Then the male protagonist was pure I am a weak-footed shrimp. I can't do anything. I really accomplish nothing. I want to make trouble. If I mess up, I have to solve it myself. If I can't solve it myself, I just become a dog licker. I thought this should be a cool article. What kind of performance art are you doing for me? Is it really good to write about an incompetent husband? I really can't read it without some poison resistance (after 100 chapters). I strongly recommend that the author read through his articles every time he finishes writing a chapter and wants to upload it, and taste it for himself. I really don't want to be a divine farmer anymore, and I don't want to see such a good subject become a roadside thing [eating melon]

It's okay, but I'm curious, if Weekend One is the original person, how could there be any regrets in Week Two? After all, whether in fiction or reality, that person in Weekend One deserves it. Let's see how you fill the hole.

How honorable, how honorable. I don't know how to praise this kind of book, which is not uncomfortable to read. Generally speaking, you can write a lot about finding faults in a book. So far, there are no evil points in this book, and at most there are some doubtful points or foreshadowings that the author will describe later. The update speed has improved, and it is a good book. It belongs to the first echelon in my bookshelf. There is no inexplicable yandere transformation, the heroine has a reason why she is a yandere. It's a common fault of Eun-Jiang to say that the female protagonist really likes the physical protagonist or the spiritual protagonist. However, the author's description and treatment are very smooth and there is almost no such point. What I say is just a common problem of not showing off in the early and middle stages of the article. It depends on how the author handles it later. By the way, please update. It has been updated and everything is available.

I hope the protagonist is the second character and just lost his memory. Otherwise, what I really like is not the current protagonist.

So far, the overall feeling is very good. The author's writing skills have improved a lot compared to the previous book, but the story is not as compact as the previous one. Overall, it is still a good book. The author should work hard. Female writers can also write good male pornographic articles [Top post][Top post]

The writing is very good and there is not too much of a poisonous point. The part where the Chinese medicine and the heroine are having a bit of a tangy feeling is too much. @ Suddenly Seeing Yangliu Author I am very curious whether the protagonist will end up with a hatchet in the end, right?

Still very interesting In fact, I have seen this book in the recommendation list before, but when I saw the title, I felt a bit poisonous. The problem lies in this "second week", because I can't understand whether it is to directly take over the original body and do the second week, or have already experienced it once. I didn't find the answer to this question in the introduction, but then I clicked in and read it, but there was no book to read. I endured this uncomfortable feeling until I saw the author's official response that the male protagonist had gone through the first week of the game, and the poison in his heart had been resolved. It was a reassuring match. The ending, the ending of the harem in the main text, is completely fine, but unfortunately I didn't see any big-scale [smile]. It can be seen that there are ideas but they are controlled by invisible hands. There is also the problem of if lines. When I saw Xia Sangsang's if line, I saw that the author seemed to have a single-girl ending for each line, and I felt bad. And after reading these plots of Xia Sangsang, I instantly felt like the sky was falling. This single-girl plot didn't seem to be quite right. The reason why the male protagonist has feelings for her comes from her other self, which is okay. But after reading the end of the main text, and then looking at the if lines, I felt that this was the right thing to do. I took out the male protagonist and wrote it as a new individual. Oops, I made a mistake. As for the first point I made, it's probably not the title of the book, but the "second chapter" mentioned in the introduction. Then I also found out that the author was actually the author of that love story, which was a coincidence. . If I had known I wouldn't comment so much, that book would be a good read too

Yandere per capita is very delicately written, but it's a refreshing novel. It's still a bit flawed, but it's still quite good if you think about it for a while. It's worth looking forward to continuing to write at this pace.

Teacher Yang Liu's schoolbag is awesome. Just trust me and it'll be over, okay? It's so beautiful and no one sees it? Sesse and writing coexist [crying]

It looks good. Although I am speaking from a human computer, it looks good.

It's really good. I don't know why the rating is so low, but it's really good.

I've read the beginning, combined with the title, and the idea that the protagonist will run back to reality with three million to finish the plot. This book will not end with the protagonist finishing the plot. The heroines have almost all the things they should flirt with and then go back directly. This place is collectively blackened, and the system will come out to spawn the existence. Help them collectively kill the main world of the protagonist [face covering]

The author's chapters 50 and 49 are really good. Such a memoir can explain more clearly why Er Zhoumu likes the male protagonist.

Very good plot development, and did not deliberately make trouble with the original protagonist.

Overall, it's good. It doesn't have such an old and painful plot. The happy ending is also very good. Except for the time-travel card drinking system that I dug up before, everything else is okay. It's worth watching.

It's good to read, I'm a fan of Sister Liu's books

The author's writing style is very good, especially the detailed descriptions of various scenes. Unlike other similar novels by Tomato, other novels often brush off the grand scenes, conflicts, and disputes. However, the author's detailed descriptions in this book are deeply rooted in people's hearts. My heart skipped a beat when I read it. Highly recommended! !

The author understands that I haven't read a good book for a long time, but I found this one, and it's you again. The previous Lian Zong book was really good, and I read it bit by bit. I personally liked the later book, but it was a pity that I cut it in half. I picked up this book again today, and I was really surprised after reading it.

What a shame! I didn't have too much entanglement with the real young master, and the real young master didn't come over to cause trouble.

The old routine, time travel, all the female protagonists fall in love with the male protagonist for no reason. The male protagonist is Asasi. He doesn't eat meat and engages in ambiguous affairs. He may be YY. A very good system, all tasks only have penalties for failure. However, the author's writing method is quite novel. If you have not read similar works, it is still very good.

I hope the ending will have multiple heroines, and they will be together with these people, and they can go to foreign countries to get married, and foreign countries can have polygamy.

I have read the author's first two books for a while, they are quite interesting [Learned]

I see that so far, I actually don't feel that there is anything poisonous about it, but I didn't continue reading. I think the first time should be given to the daughter of the Xia family. Although there is some foreshadowing, I feel like a yandere was deliberately created to let the daughter of the Lu family take the lead.

I've read 20 chapters so far and it's really good. I've read no less than 30 novels of this type. This one seems very attractive to me so far. I hope the author can continue to write in this novel, fresh and refined writing style.

The emotional description is delicate. Although the logic seems inconsistent at the moment, the author has not finished writing it yet. It is currently five stars.

Yes, it's pretty good-looking, and the emotional lines are quite rich. It's suitable for boys, but I'm not sure about girls.

Not bad but there is a question, how did the male protagonist clear his name? Just relying on your feelings is not enough.

It's ok so far, but there are a lot of minor issues

I think the eldest young master is really good. He doesn't deliberately seek revenge. He is wary of other people's malice. He does what he should do.

It's beautiful, the rating shouldn't be so low