After I Transmigrated into a Book, I Became the White Moonlight of the Lovesick Heroines

First, I would like to give five stars for the plot before chapter 128. It is quite enjoyable to read the first 128 chapters of this book without thinking. Now let's talk about the plot of Chapter 128. It's really the kind of poison that kills people. What do you mean by the male protagonist's pretense to seek perfection after knowing that the female protagonist is a yandere? "Everything I said before was all angry words" "Things are over, let's go back to the way we were before." No buddy, it really made my head twitch when I saw it, as if there was a bamboo pole-like transvestite in my mind, wriggling around and saying such weird things. In the end, the male protagonist failed to escape and became a licking dog. [Spitting] To be honest, I had to undergo vomiting surgery, and I was forced to take love potions before. The heroine didn't let me drink it, so I just drank it. In the end, the heroine went to help me, but I didn't want to help, so I didn't want to help. In the end, I got into trouble and was caught. Then the male protagonist was pure I am a weak-footed shrimp. I can't do anything. I really accomplish nothing. I want to make trouble. If I mess up, I have to solve it myself. If I can't solve it myself, I just become a dog licker. I thought this should be a cool article. What kind of performance art are you doing for me? Is it really good to write about an incompetent husband? I really can't read it without some poison resistance (after 100 chapters). I strongly recommend that the author read through his articles every time he finishes writing a chapter and wants to upload it, and taste it for himself. I really don't want to be a divine farmer anymore, and I don't want to see such a good subject become a roadside thing 🍉

It's okay, but I'm curious, if Weekend One is the original person, how could there be any regrets in Week Two? After all, whether in fiction or reality, that person in Weekend One deserves it. Let's see how you fill the hole.

How honorable, how honorable. I don't know how to praise this kind of book, which is not uncomfortable to read. Generally speaking, you can write a lot about finding faults in a book. So far, there are no evil points in this book, and at most there are some doubtful points or foreshadowings that the author will describe later. The update speed has improved, and it is a good book. It belongs to the first echelon in my bookshelf. There is no inexplicable yandere transformation, the heroine has a reason why she is a yandere. It's a common fault of Eun-Jiang to say that the female protagonist really likes the physical protagonist or the spiritual protagonist. However, the author's description and treatment are very smooth and there is almost no such point. What I say is just a common problem of not showing off in the early and middle stages of the article. It depends on how the author handles it later. By the way, please update. It has been updated and everything is available.

I hope the protagonist is the second character and just lost his memory. Otherwise, what I really like is not the current protagonist.

So far, the overall feeling is very good. The author's writing skills have improved a lot compared to the previous book, but the story is not as compact as the previous one. Overall, it is still a good book. The author should work hard. Female writers can also write good male pornographic articles [Top post][Top post]

Still very interesting In fact, I have seen this book in the recommendation list before, but when I saw the title, I felt a bit poisonous. The problem lies in this "second week", because I can't understand whether it is to directly take over the original body and do the second week, or have already experienced it once. I didn't find the answer to this question in the introduction, but then I clicked in and read it, but there was no book to read. I endured this uncomfortable feeling until I saw the author's official response that the male protagonist had gone through the first week of the game, and the poison in his heart had been resolved. It was a reassuring match. The ending, the ending of the harem in the main text, is completely fine, but unfortunately I didn't see any big-scale 🙂. It can be seen that there are ideas but they are controlled by invisible hands. There is also the problem of if lines. When I saw Xia Sangsang's if line, I saw that the author seemed to have a single-girl ending for each line, and I felt bad. And after reading these plots of Xia Sangsang, I instantly felt like the sky was falling. This single-girl plot didn't seem to be quite right. The reason why the male protagonist has feelings for her comes from her other self, which is okay. But after reading the end of the main text, and then looking at the if lines, I felt that this was the right thing to do. I took out the male protagonist and wrote it as a new individual. Oops, I made a mistake. As for the first point I made, it's probably not the title of the book, but the "second chapter" mentioned in the introduction. Then I also found out that the author was actually the author of that love story, which was a coincidence. . If I had known I wouldn't comment so much, that book would be a good read too

The writing is very good and there is not too much of a poisonous point. The part where the Chinese medicine and the heroine are having a bit of a tangy feeling is too much. @ Suddenly Seeing Yangliu Author I am very curious whether the protagonist will end up with a hatchet in the end, right?

Yandere per capita is very delicately written, but it's a refreshing novel. It's still a bit flawed, but it's still quite good if you think about it for a while. It's worth looking forward to continuing to write at this pace.

Teacher Yang Liu's schoolbag is awesome. Just trust me and it'll be over, okay? It's so beautiful and no one sees it? Sesse and writing coexist 😢

It looks good. Although I am speaking from a human computer, it looks good.