Senior Sister, You Can't Escape

It is a well-deserved five-star masterpiece. The words and sentences are very ancient and fairy-like. It is full of sugar and the characters are very three-dimensional. I like Lily's no-brainer. I really like the part where the protagonist goes drinking. Knowing that he has no bright future, he goes to meet ordinary people to drink and have fun. He drinks two bowls of wine at the same time and doesn't care if his collar gets wet. In an instant, a bold and open-minded image emerges on the page. The protagonist met the senior brother, who told her that Junior Brother Zhou was besieged. I was still thinking "the classic plot is coming", but the next second Junior Brother Zhou was killed on the spot, and his head was hung up in public... Suddenly the world became real, and the cruelty of the world of immortality was vividly displayed. The expressiveness of each realm is worthy of the realm. The protagonist who builds the foundation will accidentally trip over a branch, and has no ability to resist when facing the junior sister who transforms into a god. It is natural and fits people's impressions. This is quite rare in female channels (it is a female channel, I don't know. The first impression is a female channel). The young couple is having pure love! There is no weird play like holding in urine or incontinence, so it is highly praised. The only thing I am not satisfied with is the introduction. It is too ordinary and I have no desire to click in. I almost missed this book... The last thing is personal preference, but he said forcefully in his heart: "This kind of sentence pattern is so uncomfortable to watch. It's awkward beyond description. It feels so stiff. I have to be controlled every time I see it. I don't know if anyone has the same feeling as me."

As a veteran bookworm of this genre, I rarely give a rating to a book unless it is really attractive. The plot of this book is compact, and there are no such boring chapters. I think some people say that the escape chapters are overly written, but this is not the case. The escape plot is the climax of the current 54 chapters. It has a depressing but forbearing feeling on the eve of the climax. I estimate that all the plots of this book should be completed within 200 chapters. The author's writing is very good, except for some details that are not designed well, but overall this book is the best among the two girls. Highly recommended. I hope the author can update it soon

This book is still very enjoyable to read, except for the part where the two heroines quarreled after coming out of the underworld. The quarrel was written a bit stiffly so that I didn't feel uncomfortable. This is the biggest flaw of this book. Sometimes the parts that make me laugh are the kisses, whether gentle kisses, punishing kisses or violent kisses. Sometimes it really makes me feel hard to break down [laughing and crying]. Other than that, there is nothing else. This book is a good book that makes me feel empty after reading it [Like]

Nice! The characters' emotions are very delicate and the article is very interesting [laughing], but I'm still a little bit sad to see the end of the book that I have been updating chapter by chapter [almost crying]. After all, this is the first time I have seen the end of a book that I have been updating, but it is still very sweet and interesting. I hope that in the parallel world, Su Fox and Qing can be together for hundreds of years, and Xia and Ji [laughing], Master and Geng Fox will also be together for a long time [laughing]

After reading it for several days, I suddenly noticed the author's name and found that it was you [Inquiry]. The Lily novels I saw were almost always those written by the author I had read before [Full]

The author's writing is very good, and the forced love writing is also good, but judging from the progress of these two people, it is a bit biased. After all, one of them always wants to escape. But the other person didn't want her to leave and imprisoned her. To be honest, the two people's personalities are not compatible. Will there be any results between them in the future? Author? I want to know Now I just think they are so sweet

It's okay, but I feel that the senior sister is too weak and lacks a bit of temperament.

It's not bad. It might be a little too paranoid at first, and it's a little depressing. Maybe I don't like being so paranoid. The rest is okay, but it's still acceptable. It'll get better over time. It's very sweet and beautiful. Please support me.

Personal opinion: Five stars, the flaws do not hide the advantages. As a theme with two female protagonists cultivating immortality, both Su's control and Shen's escape are well written. In fact, when reading this type of yandere control novels, most of them focus on emotional changes and lovers finally getting married. The protagonist escapes again and again, each time with an emotional change, whether it is pressure from the heroine or due to inner fluctuations. Escape is not betrayal, it is a natural outcome of high pressure. The protagonist understands the heroine's love in his heart, and then chooses to accept it naturally. However, it is a pity that the heroine does not know his fault (after all, he is a yandere, so he cannot be too harsh). Shen went from doubt and fear to accepting this suffocating love step by step. How deep the pain is, and I only know one of them, you are tired. As for Su, being timid is your background. The conflict is only with one person. This journey is not easy, but don't lose your judgment due to fear. You need to remember. Speaking of which, in the past when the two were not honest, I thought about many possibilities for reconciliation, each of which was more or less to my liking. Maybe my understanding of you was one-sided after all. Now that the author has written it down, after thinking about it, it may be the case, but there are still flaws. I don't want to mention the flaws again, but a book review needs to be written anyway. Readers criticized the plot of the Ghost Bride quite a bit. Reconciliation is inevitable, breaking up and then building up again is also a good method, but it is not necessary to make a sudden turn in order to pursue his wife, and the heroine even breaks off her love. The relationship between the two is as hot and bright as the sun, and cannot be easily dissipated. But in this way, a description that is neither slow nor slow is acceptable. Shen Yanqing, what you said should not be taken lightly. Su Youli, I am so sad that I cannot leave you. The two are so cute, my heart almost melts when I see them, haha. Even if there are all kinds of difficulties and dangers, we can't separate. Not to mention letting down the readers, we can't let you down each other's hearts. As a review, this one is not a good review. It should be treated as just my gossip and pouring water on it. But this book is indeed worth five stars and worth reading.

So at this moment, another old man asked 🤔 Brother Yang Brother 😍, how did you develop your skills 😳, so good, old man 😎, I tell you 🤫, there are some things that people have as soon as they are born 🤑, if you are born without 😱, it will be difficult to have them again in this life 🤓, hello everyone, I am the last golden gun king in Liaoning Province 🧐, and also your male god 💀 The sharp blade emerges from the cold winter. I listen to the old man knocking the clock. The legendary immortal pine is facing the wind coming from the snow. The tall buildings in the distance are too prosperous. Countless people are climbing up. They use greedy and selfish steps to clean their claws. Half of the sky after the struggle is still filled with biting smoke. Some people are standing on tiptoes behind. Look at the figure in front who dares to take the lead. The hungry tiger climbs out of the hole. Look at the injured snow weighing thousands of pounds. The pain of cracked teeth after throwing food. It's better than a yellow-liang dream. Winter flowers float to the north, stopping the trekking bandits. The expanding gunpowder blows up the barriers and blows up the complicated hearts. There must be light behind the blizzard. I shoulder the gun like a hunter, and my chest rings hard. In the noisy world, you have to be tough.

Very beautiful, very immersive Especially the plot of you chasing me and escaping is very interesting. The pace is slightly brisk and also humorous The character creation is also very good. Come and watch it, everyone [crying]

If you keep thinking about it, there will be an echo. If there is no echo, there will be an injury. I can't even imagine how desperate You Li felt when she knew Yan Qing was lying to her. Is this really he? Why do I feel that they are inevitably heading towards be? Don't expect that after Shen Yanqing left Su Youli, Youli's heart was broken and her cultivation level dropped even lower than that of Yan Qing. Then Yan Qing came back to take care of Youli. Gee, the writing behind it is so embarrassing. I don't want to read it, but I feel uncomfortable not reading the ending. This plot, considering my shallow love experience, I think it's quite reasonable, but it's just too uncomfortable to watch. Thanks to the author, I'm finally back on track and comfortable.

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Overall, the book has nothing but sweets. It just doesn't fill in the pitfalls of the senior sister's parents. I still hope to find it. The world view is small and it is easy to read. I feel that the supporting characters appear a little late. The supporting characters' emotional lines take up many chapters of the protagonist, which leads to a tearing and uncomfortable feeling in the later period. It is a pity that the supporting characters and the protagonist's emotional lines are not combined in one story. The ending also feels too rushed... However, the characters of the two girls, especially the senior sister's character, are well crafted. It is a very interesting book.

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It's very beautiful, and I think Shen may feel Su's sincerity later, and then be happy together, or treat us to a knife. Anyway, it's either happiness, or a knife |•'-'•)و

I always feel panicked and afraid of knives when reading his books. I don't have this feeling in other books. Only this author gives me this feeling, so I will give it a four-star rating and give it a five-star rating.

Super beautiful, I like forced love the most

The writing is very good and the rhythm is brisk [please update]

If you especially like forced love, you can watch it I have read more than sixty chapters, and all I can say is that the ending was good. I don't know what the feelings of the junior sister are. Anyway, this kind of emotion makes me suffocated, as if the senior sister is her possessions. I only recommend it to people who like to be forced to love.

The emotions are fast-paced and very immersive, so you won't give up because you feel bored! ! ! I suggest you strengthen your senior sister!

Writing novels means writing about contradictions and conflicts, so everyone likes to see the plot of the dark room, and more than half of this article is about the plot of the small dark room in the world of immortality. It is so exciting that it can be regarded as the ceiling of similar plots. Then there is the controversial quarrel plot. In fact, it can be seen that the author is foreshadowing and thinking deeply, but even if he spends a lot of pen and ink, it is difficult to conceal the deliberateness. Perhaps at this time, it would be better to make it more plain. Taking this as a turning point, the subsequent plot is a bit like what I will talk about later. I can give 99 points in the first part, and about 85 points in the second part. I also started to write group portraits, but this is basically a necessary and satisfactory ending. It is difficult not to care about certain two deus ex machina plots. Overall it is highly recommended.

The writing is good, the writing style is okay, the characters are three-dimensional, the plot is quite exciting, and there are a lot of plots that are ahem. There are also many shortcomings. In the beginning, there was forced inequality, from physical abuse to heart-wrenching sweetness, and some plot twists and excesses were a bit blunt. All in all, it's flaws can't be concealed.

Not enough, author, author, not enough [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile] May the clothes wear flowers, may the years be peaceful. I wish that "good wine can light up my coat, I can run around with a lamplight on my back, and have no worries in my life." I wish that rivers can be crossed and lonely wine can be drunk. I hope there will be fog lights in the mountains and fields, that I can return to my boat even if I wander, that everything I encounter will be kind, and that all my journeys will be smooth. May everything go as planned and everything be happy. May everywhere you go be a warm land, and may everyone you meet be kind. I am willing to give as much as I can, and be happy with what I receive. May everything you like and love be at your fingertips, may your journey be filled with flowers and your future be bright. I am willing to ride the wind and waves and return home with a full load.

It's very interesting, the weak senior sister and the strong junior sister, the author understands me so well [Adoration][Admiration]

The author is very literary, his wording is mostly in an ancient style, and his literary quality is very high. At the same time, it also describes the characters and the environment in great detail. After reading so many novels, the cultural accomplishment reflected in this one is indeed very high. The length of what I read is not very long, but the story is still very logical at present. As a yandere junior sister, she has not lost her human character. She is still very good to her senior sister. There is no plot of bullying her senior sister or not treating her as a human being (I will review it later if there is any) Imprisoned [petrified], it seems that he plans to be locked up for the rest of his life.

The plot is compact, not many knives are used, and it's sweet. It's a very good novel. Especially the author's writing style and description of details are not bad at all. It is written with a yellowish heart and also integrates the characteristics of a fairy tale. Even if you throw away the emotional line and treat it as a fairy tale, it is better than many literary novels. The only flaw is that it is a bit monotonous. The story is too compact and almost all revolves around the two heroines. The supporting characters have a low sense of existence. Many places can be expanded and written as branch lines, but they are all taken away by one stroke.

It feels pretty good, my junior sister is very yandere, I like it very much It's very beautiful, the writing is very delicate, and the content is also good. I highly recommend it.

The rating is too low to deserve it. It's very well written and definitely deserves five stars.

I really like [Adoration] [Adoration] is what I love to read, and the content is unexpected by me. I like it very much. I don't mind the author updating 10 chapters a day [Making faces] [Making faces]