Senior Sister, You Can’t Escape

It is a well-deserved five-star masterpiece. The words and sentences are very ancient and fairy-like. It is full of sugar and the characters are very three-dimensional. I like Lily's no-brainer. I really like the part where the protagonist goes drinking. Knowing that he has no bright future, he goes to meet ordinary people to drink and have fun. He drinks two bowls of wine at the same time and doesn't care if his collar gets wet. In an instant, a bold and open-minded image emerges on the page. The protagonist met the senior brother, who told her that Junior Brother Zhou was besieged. I was still thinking "the classic plot is coming", but the next second Junior Brother Zhou was killed on the spot, and his head was hung up in public... Suddenly the world became real, and the cruelty of the world of immortality was vividly displayed. The expressiveness of each realm is worthy of the realm. The protagonist who builds the foundation will accidentally trip over a branch, and has no ability to resist when facing the junior sister who transforms into a god. It is natural and fits people's impressions. This is quite rare in female channels (it is a female channel, I don't know. The first impression is a female channel). The young couple is having pure love! There is no weird play like holding in urine or incontinence, so it is highly praised. The only thing I am not satisfied with is the introduction. It is too ordinary and I have no desire to click in. I almost missed this book... The last thing is personal preference, but he said forcefully in his heart: "This kind of sentence pattern is so uncomfortable to watch. It's awkward beyond description. It feels so stiff. I have to be controlled every time I see it. I don't know if anyone has the same feeling as me."

As a veteran bookworm of this genre, I rarely give a rating to a book unless it is really attractive. The plot of this book is compact, and there are no such boring chapters. I think some people say that the escape chapters are overly written, but this is not the case. The escape plot is the climax of the current 54 chapters. It has a depressing but forbearing feeling on the eve of the climax. I estimate that all the plots of this book should be completed within 200 chapters. The author's writing is very good, except for some details that are not designed well, but overall this book is the best among the two girls. Highly recommended. I hope the author can update it soon

This book is still very enjoyable to read, except for the part where the two heroines quarreled after coming out of the underworld. The quarrel was written a bit stiffly so that I didn't feel uncomfortable. This is the biggest flaw of this book. Sometimes the parts that make me laugh are the kisses, whether gentle kisses, punishing kisses or violent kisses. Sometimes it really makes me feel hard to break down 😂. Other than that, there is nothing else. This book is a good book that makes me feel empty after reading it 👍

Nice! The characters' emotions are very delicate and the article is very interesting [laughing], but I'm still a little bit sad to see the end of the book that I have been updating chapter by chapter 🥺. After all, this is the first time I have seen the end of a book that I have been updating, but it is still very sweet and interesting. I hope that in the parallel world, Su Fox and Qing can be together for hundreds of years, and Xia and Ji [laughing], Master and Geng Fox will also be together for a long time [laughing]

It's not bad. It might be a little too paranoid at first, and it's a little depressing. Maybe I don't like being so paranoid. The rest is okay, but it's still acceptable. It'll get better over time. It's very sweet and beautiful. Please support me.

The author's writing is very good, and the forced love writing is also good, but judging from the progress of these two people, it is a bit biased. After all, one of them always wants to escape. But the other person didn't want her to leave and imprisoned her. To be honest, the two people's personalities are not compatible. Will there be any results between them in the future? Author? I want to know Now I just think they are so sweet

After reading it for several days, I suddenly noticed the author's name and found that it was you 🧐. The Lily novels I saw were almost always those written by the author I had read before [Full]

It's okay, but I feel that the senior sister is too weak and lacks a bit of temperament.

Personal opinion: Five stars, the flaws do not hide the advantages. As a theme with two female protagonists cultivating immortality, both Su's control and Shen's escape are well written. In fact, when reading this type of yandere control novels, most of them focus on emotional changes and lovers finally getting married. The protagonist escapes again and again, each time with an emotional change, whether it is pressure from the heroine or due to inner fluctuations. Escape is not betrayal, it is a natural outcome of high pressure. The protagonist understands the heroine's love in his heart, and then chooses to accept it naturally. However, it is a pity that the heroine does not know his fault (after all, he is a yandere, so he cannot be too harsh). Shen went from doubt and fear to accepting this suffocating love step by step. How deep the pain is, and I only know one of them, you are tired. As for Su, being timid is your background. The conflict is only with one person. This journey is not easy, but don't lose your judgment due to fear. You need to remember. Speaking of which, in the past when the two were not honest, I thought about many possibilities for reconciliation, each of which was more or less to my liking. Maybe my understanding of you was one-sided after all. Now that the author has written it down, after thinking about it, it may be the case, but there are still flaws. I don't want to mention the flaws again, but a book review needs to be written anyway. Readers criticized the plot of the Ghost Bride quite a bit. Reconciliation is inevitable, breaking up and then building up again is also a good method, but it is not necessary to make a sudden turn in order to pursue his wife, and the heroine even breaks off her love. The relationship between the two is as hot and bright as the sun, and cannot be easily dissipated. But in this way, a description that is neither slow nor slow is acceptable. Shen Yanqing, what you said should not be taken lightly. Su Youli, I am so sad that I cannot leave you. The two are so cute, my heart almost melts when I see them, haha. Even if there are all kinds of difficulties and dangers, we can't separate. Not to mention letting down the readers, we can't let you down each other's hearts. As a review, this one is not a good review. It should be treated as just my gossip and pouring water on it. But this book is indeed worth five stars and worth reading.

So at this moment, another old man asked 🤔 Brother Yang Brother 😍, how did you develop your skills 😳, so good, old man 😎, I tell you 🤫, there are some things that people have as soon as they are born 🤑, if you are born without 😱, it will be difficult to have them again in this life 🤓, hello everyone, I am the last golden gun king in Liaoning Province 🧐, and also your male god 💀 The sharp blade emerges from the cold winter. I listen to the old man knocking the clock. The legendary immortal pine is facing the wind coming from the snow. The tall buildings in the distance are too prosperous. Countless people are climbing up. They use greedy and selfish steps to clean their claws. Half of the sky after the struggle is still filled with biting smoke. Some people are standing on tiptoes behind. Look at the figure in front who dares to take the lead. The hungry tiger climbs out of the hole. Look at the injured snow weighing thousands of pounds. The pain of cracked teeth after throwing food. It's better than a yellow-liang dream. Winter flowers float to the north, stopping the trekking bandits. The expanding gunpowder blows up the barriers and blows up the complicated hearts. There must be light behind the blizzard. I shoulder the gun like a hunter, and my chest rings hard. In the noisy world, you have to be tough.