Crisis on All Sides: Season One

As the first person to write a book review, I first saw my wife promoting the book she wrote online. Then I was curious because I also like this kind of book. After reading it, I really didn't believe it was written by a junior high school student, because I didn't have such writing skills at the time. I really admire this. Well, you may not be able to read it at first, so my suggestion is, well, you can almost have the perspective of a decent person or a villain in the front, otherwise, there are too many things, and you may not know who the protagonist is. To be honest, I have read a lot of books with good writing skills, and I have also seen many books that are also good in writing. At least at first glance, it is not written by AI, because AI writing has a human-machine flavor 🤦Although the number of words in each picture is quite small, they are quite interesting to read. I feel that if Da Da posted it like this, it might be because he wrote on the tablet first and then moved it to his mobile phone. Anyway, come on Da Da. Well, you have to write at least about 20,000 words to get recommended by the official platform, and then you can send gifts 💕

Come on, your writing is good and your imagination is good! I can feel that the author wants to write something very powerful, but he is still a little impatient and needs more practice. But as a new author, he can do it, and he is still a junior high school student! However, there is a bit too much content about Lin Yue in the foreshadowing volume. When I mention the other people later, I can't remember who they are. You can try to add some content about other people or reduce Lin Yue's role. If you give up, you will get something! Don't be reluctant to delete it (of course, if you can't change it, just pretend I didn't say it. I think we can try to integrate the elements of high school, kingdom, and immortality better later, and add some background. After all, when it comes to high school, we do think in a more modern direction, and the kingdom and immortality are not only separate but also belong to the ancient times. Personally, I am lacking in the logic and plot details of the story, but everything else is okay. I am a new author after all, so I encourage you! Don't rush to write so fast, stock up on manuscripts, and polish it! I believe you!

Very nice, author, I will always follow you

I have read nine chapters so far, and I find it very interesting. The author's writing is really good, and it has been completed. You can see the end. I hope the author will release a second season later.