Savior Game: From the Start, I Owe Tens of Thousands of Points

It's okay, but the story is too long and a bit boring. The Riddler analyzed that the opponent has spatial abilities and found bugs. It's obviously beyond the scope of Special Branch. Why not call Heaven to take over? I've been locked in a different space for more than half a month. Is there any way to save it (waiting for you). The man who was killed by the homeless man, the train driver, can anyone give me peanuts?

After reading fifty chapters, I still feel that it is almost boring. After reading your words in Chapter 50, I finally found out what the problem was. That is what the relationship between Teko and Shuangbeilian is. Generally speaking, both organizations are decent. You also said that recruiting people in Paradise is basically poaching. Then both sides should be on the same road. At best, the eldest brother (Heaven) has a very different and eclectic style of acting. The younger brother (Teke) insists on justice and is rigorous in doing things. Then why did you think of asking Teko to provoke Paradise to create something exciting when you said the article was not interesting? What about your villain? What about the serious villain who has nothing to do? There are only a few chapters in the fifty chapters, and there is no description of the key points. A savior organization, but no world-destroying villain. This is the reason why it's not fun. The villain is causing trouble, but my little brother is still unable to defeat him even though he tries his best. At this time, the big brother came out and solved it with just a few clicks of his fingers. Isn't this just a little bit more fun? Another biggest problem is that the police have no ability to protect themselves. See for yourself how many police officers have been sacrificed for just a few things. There is no problem that ordinary people can't handle these things, but there is a high probability that the first person who encounters this kind of thing will be the police. It's understandable that the police don't know anything, and it's understandable that they have no effect, but they can't die in vain. If you find that the case cannot be handled by ordinary people, then you won't handle it. Why did they do the bridge bombing when they knew it was the work of those organizations? You also brought the bodies back, knowing that they were not ordinary people, what could you detect. In the end, so many people died at the base camp. These organizations and people with special abilities have appeared for more than a day or two. Why don't ordinary people have any ability to protect themselves when facing these things? Are there even stupid sacrifices? Finally, I hope these words will be helpful to the author.

The plates are big, there are very few things, and there is basically no sense of style. All the work is done by high-level people. It feels like a cannon firing plastic bullets. I do a lot of meaningless things.

It's okay, but the only thing that can be added is peripheral. What you create is the game played by the protagonist. Those heroes are added from the outside, such as official personnel and people from other places. They can only be outsiders and cannot touch any secrets [Chigua]

All the important characters who appeared previously are women, except for the protagonist

All female.

Why did you recruit that woman at the beginning? Isn't it an organization that has no one available at the beginning, and recruits government personnel to let the government install spies for free?

It's very interesting. As a boss, the protagonist doesn't know many things but his subordinates don't even suspect them. It's a bit buggy.

It's a bit messy to read, the shop is too big, the main character is not strong enough, and now all the characters are female.

There is something extraordinary, but the description is quite ordinary. There is also the main line. In Chapter 77, the main plot begins, followed by all the branch plots.