The Age of Machine Girl: My Durians Are All World-Class

This is the first continuation novel I have read... There is zero connection between the original work and the continuation. I came here after reading the original work. The original work is full of flavor, but the description of key scenes is still a bit pale, and almost all the characters are a bit OOC, but it does not affect the perception very much. At most, the characteristics are not so distinctive. In addition, some paragraphs are a little deliberate, and a few plots are a bit abrupt. Excluding the stereotypes of the original work, I can give this book about 8.5 Points (not that it is bad, I personally hate some of the relatively watery parts of the original work, such as often being wordy after a famous scene. I would give the original work about 9 points). However, it is not easy for a new book to reach this point. I give it full marks here, and I hope the author will keep up the good work! ! ! Ps: The author is very imitating the original work, but don't lose his own style~

I hope the author can work hard. I have read all the chapters so far and they are very good. But personally, I don't really like to watch the skill battles of some machine girls. I would rather see the description of the magician's techniques and operations (not that the author's writing is not good enough). The regretful ending of the previous book made me very sad. I hope the author can write this book with our hopes. As I said at the beginning, I hope the author can work hard [Like]

See the feeling now In terms of writing, the author is definitely more like Penguin, including all the details of language and setting, and also has a few more elegances unique to high school students (after all, I am also a high school student, so I can relate to it). But there is one thing that is different from Penguin, that is, the pace is too fast Penguin either writes about daily life or outer space between the two games, but the author just throws out a setting between the two games, as if he is focusing entirely on writing about the game, giving people the illusion that... He is trying his best to prove himself. Overall, my thoughts are very good. You are fine. Don't worry. Don't worry yet.

I saw the previous version of Ji Niang on Douyin. It was really good-looking, so I downloaded it just to watch the follow-up. When I saw the discontinuation notice a year ago, I was in a daze. I felt like I had lost something important. I would watch it every night at that time, and it has become a part of my life. Now I am also a high school student. Like the author, I am taking 12 days off and 2 days off. I still live on campus. I finally have a vacation. I plan to do something on the plane otherwise it will be too boring. I think of reading novels, but I only downloaded Pomodoro just to read a novel. I want to read it again, but I am afraid that I will become addicted and feel uncomfortable when I see the completion notice. But when I saw the follow-up, I was really excited. I have been reading it for the past few days and read it again in order to keep up with the plot. The author is really amazing. I hope the author will get better and better! Come on! ! ! ✊ I'll send you a knife again [smile]

This is the best continuation I have read. It can be followed up with this book. Five-star support. Come on, author.

The author's writing style is indeed good. Although it is a continuation, it also has its own characteristics. Due to the author's time problem, the content of one chapter has been shrunk a bit, but it is already quite satisfying. It's just that the details need to be polished and the plot can be more detailed. I hope the author can continue it well [please savor it]

It's great to continue writing like this! Other people's continuations can't read this feeling, and they give up after writing dozens of chapters... I still hope the author can persevere and don't give up! I will keep waiting. I wish the author good luck in the college entrance examination [laughing][laughing][laughing] (Damn it! I just discovered this sequel to this masterpiece today! At the same time, I am also a little curious about how the author will write the mecha part later? I really can't imagine...)

I read the original text this year, and found this one within 3 days after the original text was cut off. Overall, this continuation is basically in line with the original work, but after all, the author's changes will still have some differences in writing style from Penguin's original text (this is not a problem). In short, as a high school student (should be a quasi-college student at the time of editing the review), it can be used as a first continuation novel. I hope the author can continue to finish the story of Su Nian and the Durian King. Come on

Continuing the writing style of Penguin, I can finally continue to watch Su Nian convey his faith [Like]

It's nice to be so careful, although the writing style is a bit immature. But it does imitate a serious style.

The connection is very good, and those who have just finished watching the original work can watch it directly. The update speed should be improved after a year or so.

I hope I can make up for my regrets, come on [please update] Can you please stop following the outline given by the original novel? It's too harsh [face covering] Keep my fire Eden [crying]

The continuation is very good, very Penguin style.

The continuation is very good, it has the same flavor as the original, and it makes up for the regret.

Come on, come on, it has the flavor of the original book [Like][Like][Like][Like]

I collected it first and looked at the general table of contents. It was after the Winter Games. I came back to watch the second part, Su Chen's. I watched them running in the mysterious realm. I only knew it was the background of the national competition. I'm looking forward to the story of Emperor Mausoleum and Zidian. Come on, author.

I really like this novel and hope the author can update it more. I look forward to your updates every month when I am in my senior year of high school.

The character and plot analysis are very good [laughs]

It's wonderful, I'm looking forward to it. I wish the author academic progress, and I wish this work will come to a perfect conclusion [Sending my heart to you] I have been following it for almost a year. The author was busy with his studies and was slow to update. However, the writing style is really very artistic and the atmosphere of the scene is fully rendered. It is worth commenting on the reading comprehension. It blends the emotions with the scene and the scene [smirk] [smirk] [smirk]. Moreover, as a sequel to the chapter, the characters are vivid The character is almost perfectly reproduced, which is much better than those sequels where the character collapses in just a few chapters. It's a fine chaff. The shortcoming is that one chapter is too short and it's not enough to read [fear][fear][fear], please give me more updates. Is there any [please give me more updates][please give me more updates][please give me more updates]

You must write it down

How many days does this author update?

Very interesting and good content. Support the author.

It's super nice [Adoration][Adoration] I just finished reading the previous book. The connection is perfect. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

This is the sequel that is closest to the original work that I have seen. The author wrote it with all his heart and regretted the unfinished work. He praises the Durian King [please ask for more updates][please ask for more updates]

Anchor, anchor, you must write it down [almost crying]

Come on, come on, come on!

Is there someone who will succeed Penguin?

It's super good-looking. I'm both a senior in high school. It's very difficult for the author. Come on.

I fell in love with this sequel when I first saw it. Personally, I thought it was pretty good.

It looks great, it looks great, cheers up.