HP: Start with Dementors

As I read, I felt something strange, but I couldn't put it into words. I saw that so far, every character has a shining point. What is strange to me is that the system will have corresponding emotional expressions according to the heroine. The initial setting is that the usage regulations are many and very clear, so the system should have its own background system. Does it feel human to be panicked and anxious because of the heroine? And there are a lot of psychological descriptions of the heroine, but the birth setting of the heroine is that she should not be more eager for strength and emotion. Here we only write about the emphasis on emotions, such as the difficulty of saving. The heroine's feelings for the characters in the original world also feel quite abrupt. She inherits the emotions of the original owner and sets that she has not forgotten her own experience. It does not make sense. It feels like knowing the plot but entering the plot world and inheriting everything from the original owner without letting go of her original self. She also has a very abrupt pity for the familiar and unfamiliar original characters. The learning system is a good medium to become stronger, but in order to save Yi Nanping, she temporarily gave up an opportunity. When she was in the third grade, she entered the situation at the beginning and did not have enough strength. It was assumed that she only had the knowledge and strength of the first grade at that time. She had to change the original development, but she still knew that there would be no fatal consequences. There are prerequisites to participate... Another thing is that I went back and looked up who the CP is. So far, the peach blossoms are blooming, and Snape has not made any movements. Of course, this is normal, but I don't see the characteristics of Slytherin, and isn't Slytherin's friendship based on interests first? This feels a bit like Hufflepuff. Finally, the shining points written by the author are also great, including Snape's hard-spoken and soft-hearted, Malfoy's tsundere, Pansy's friendship, McGonagall's feminine charm, the family relationship between the two sisters Daphne, and Hermione's sense. Well, Ron is just like a villain at the moment, so I won't mention it.

I am a loyal Snape fan and read this. I hope that the heroine will be stronger and gain friendship, love and salvation in her studies [cool]. The most important thing is that the wedding message must shock all the classmates and let everyone praise you, NB! Head of Slytherin can do it!

It's very interesting, because when I clicked on the name, I found that it is a long novel, and Lila has the help of the system, but many things depend on the heroine herself. She knows the plot, but many things cannot be changed by one person. The professor has no OOC, and I hope School Deng can have a good ending. When I read the original book, one of my favorite characters was Principal Dumbledore, but the pace is a bit slow. I look forward to the subsequent plot development. I hope my wife will not be fooled and pay attention to the balance between work and rest, because it is a long novel and requires a lot of effort.

This book is the most realistic of all the HP fanfics I have read. There are many questions that I have never thought about before. The various things with deep thinking value in it are really refreshing to me. I am very grateful to the author for allowing me to read such a deep book. It is very immersive and it also triggered my thinking about certain things and human nature. It is really well written. I like it very much. Come on, author, you are really awesome [Blow kiss]

Really good looking. The author really clearly dealt with these plots carefully and patiently understood the characters in the book. Some may say this is not a cool novel, but it is definitely better than most HP fanfics because it has a careful author who takes the book seriously. To be honest, Peter's chapter shocked me greatly. I can say that I have read all the HP fanfics. At least so far, I have never seen any other author write Peter so vividly, or even write a few chapters of his autobiography for him. Every step of the protagonist is carefully calculated, because she is just like us ordinary people, who will make mistakes and be afraid that the actions she takes because she knows the future may bring irreparable consequences, but she will bravely denounce Dumbledore's unequal treatment (this has always been my dissatisfaction with Dumbledore, because I have experienced it in real life, so I hate this behavior) The author did not discredit any of the characters. The trio she wrote were not as reckless and rogue as in other works where the protagonists were Slytherin. Snape's acumen as a double agent was also well portrayed, and Dumbledore's kindness was also in line with the original work, etc. And what I like most is that the author will interact with readers, but it is not a simple "Thank you for your support." She really responded to everyone's comments attentively, and also explained in detail the reasons why she wrote what she said to those who had different opinions. I always feel that the author has a charm that keeps me reading. Because I know that with such a dedicated author, this book will definitely not be bad. All in all, this book is really worth reading. Readers who like fast pace will definitely not be able to stand it. But other readers, please don't jump to conclusions. It's not too late to take a look and make a decision.

Very pretty, highly recommended! I feel that many of the characters are more fleshed out, and many of them are from angles that I have never seen before. I have been searching for new books in the square for a long time. I originally just wanted to find a cookie about falling in love with the Sri Lankan teacher. I missed it n times because of this title and didn't click on it. I didn't expect it to be such a treasure novel. It made me sore and made me want to pee. I felt very gentle and powerful inexplicably. The author is so powerful! ! ! Looking at it, I no longer care about when I can talk to the Sri Lankan teacher. Hahahahaha. Fred is also very friendly! And is he going to have a happy ending?

It's really good-looking, and it ranks among the top Harry fanfics I've read. Everyone is written very vividly, and the identity of the system feels very special. Yes, it feels like a relative of the heroine? After all, the system doesn't know the existence of the plot. The writing of Snape is really good, it is the image of Snape in my mind. The emotional lines are written very delicately I really don't know how to write book reviews, but it's really good!

It's pretty good. It's not a story about a major heroine, but a story about the heroine's growth~ and the characters are generally not too different~ I hope the heroine can speed up her pace and make progress. I feel like even if Peter dies, Lao Fu will still be resurrected next year [facepalm] It's too miserable to have passed through it only in the third grade [laughs]

How come such a good literary score is so low! The writing is great. Si Jiao is very, very, very consistent with the original work. There is no OOC at all. The Si Jiao who is strong, cares without showing it, and "laughs" like the original is so charming. After reading Chapter 80, I successfully dreamed of Si Jiao. Woohoo! Many of the details written by Da Da feel like they have been thought through deeply. I feel that Da Da loves every character and each character is portrayed in great detail. Moreover, the idea of ​​the goblin rebellion is really wonderful. I am terrified when I think about it [Salute]. However, the pace is really very slow. I am very much looking forward to the plot of Lao Fu's resurrection in the later stage [Sending my heart]

It's really beautiful. I've started to read many parts over and over again. The author, please don't get tired, but don't stop either! ! ! ! ! !

After reading Chapter 402, Laila was once again discovered by Nott. She has always been a very kind girl. I know that she wants to save everyone. This is actually a bit naive and reckless. In front of me who agrees with egoism, it actually seems too idealistic. She is also tough and courageous, and she is willing to make all efforts for her pursuit. Her thoughts are indeed like Slytherin's. , But her behavior is always close to that of Gryffindor. I always hope that she can grow up faster (not knowledge, she has worked hard enough in this regard). She has obviously experienced a lot, but she has a clear mind but has always been too naive. There has been no progress in Laila's behavior. She has ideas but is always pushed away. She is burdened with such a big secret but is too easy to understand. It feels like it is time to become more comfortable.

It looks good and I hope the author doesn't cheat. I will always be there. [Adoration][laughing][Admiration][laughing][Admiration]

The plot is creative and reasonable, and it's really good to watch. It's my favorite so far. The author has a tender feeling of love for all the characters. Please keep writing more.

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Great book

Hiss, the writing is really good. The author's writing is really captivating, and you can even imagine the scene. And then the sense of oppression it brings. Especially Professor S. S. I can feel his majesty, wisdom, and strength. And bring out that sense of oppression. It was as if his figure appeared in front of me, that kind of tall intelligent creature.

It's super, super good-looking, and every character is very vivid. I feel like Laila has been growing up, and Si Jiao is not OOC. The character traits described by each character are also very good. It is a very good work, and it has just been updated to the fourth grade. It is about to be completed, and there are still less than a thousand chapters to go. I look forward to it [Blow Kiss]

It's a very good novel. To be honest, I've read a lot of Harry Potter fanfics recently. This one can be ranked in the top five among the twenty or thirty books I've read. However, this novel needs to be read slowly. The protagonist's inner changes, Pansy, Daphne's changes, Harry, Hermione and other characters all have their own personality changes. The author has broken down the facial makeup of the characters and has his own ideas on the analysis of the original characters. It is very impressive to read and think about it in depth. Come on, author, don't give up. I don't want to be the victim of a trap. Write well and finish well.

It's really beautiful. As a time traveler, every action of Laila is reasonable. So many reasonable actions have an impact on the original characters. It's really beautiful and amazing.

See Chapter 35 to rate. The reading experience is good so far. Language pass. The plot is logical and reasonable. Excellent values!

It feels like the author added AI and wore a leather cover to speak.

A must-eat list, it looks good and I love watching it

It looks good, please cheer me up [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Why is it so beautiful! ! ! [Laugh]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Beautiful, very detailed, and very close to the characters

I like the teacher's writing very much. I have experienced and polished it carefully! I'm curious about how many more things the teacher will finish, and I'm really itching to wait [shy]

It was so scary. I cried while watching half of it. I cried for a long time after watching it. I couldn't stand it anymore. I'm going to go see something else to calm down [face covering]