Hungry for a Mother's Care

It's okay. The plot is explained very clearly, with good reason and context, but the author needs to learn how to segment it. Reading such a long sequence makes the eyes tired and makes it uncomfortable. In addition, the age of the child is not clearly explained. How old is it? She can speak so clearly and stand up. How long can a child in her belly live? I still have to praise the author for his imagination. It's very novel. It's the first time I've seen this kind of story about Alpha's pregnancy. And the settings in the article are very novel. The plan and the wording of actions feel very profound. Overall, it's good. Some small details were not handled well, but the changes made it a more perfect article.

It feels good. Zhuang Wei and the three babies are very cute, which is what Lester hated in the early stage.