Devouring the Heavens with Insects: Starting at the Locust God Temple

Can't the protagonist be more cruel? , Such as finding someone to lead the way, and when it comes time to kill the person, it would be better to have things thrown at you and search for the soul or something.

Writing style: 4.5/5 The writing power is very good among Tomato novels, but it feels a little lacking in the description of the characters' inner thoughts and emotions. Plot: 4.5/5 The plot of multi-world travel is novel, the strength of the golden finger is reasonable, and the two bright lines are very clear: 1. Travel through various worlds to obtain the inheritance of the ancient Worm Sect. 2. The continued search for the "True Dharma of Yuanxue" in the main world. However, the plot lacks a bit of ups and downs of excitement. I blindly guess that the author is preparing a small copy of the main world as a small climax. Writing rhythm: 5/5 The most comfortable paced book I have seen on Tomato so far. The connection between multiple worlds is not laggy, and there is no boring feeling like "eating white rice". Characterization: 2/5 The characterization of the protagonist is not very good. Currently, the protagonist is portrayed as a hypocritical villain. Cultivation is neither righteous nor evil enough. In the main world, when in a hurry, one will directly absorb the blood of innocent people and attack the enemy. In the other world, they will covertly replace it with the blood of death row prisoners/celestial demons/people who have just died. I didn't see the protagonist's struggle, but I felt like I saw the author's struggle. I felt that the author couldn't bear to let his character use evil powers, but he had to use them uncomfortably. There is a lot of indecision in the Maitreya world, and I read the reviews, which is why most people gave up early on in reading the book. My opinion is that the protagonist can of course have shortcomings, but there needs to be a process of change and an inner scene of struggle. Overall Rating: 4/5 It would be a good book if the lack of inner emotional drama could be solved and the protagonist's character could be made more distinct.

The author writes very well, but the rating is a bit too low, which is unfair. As a novel about cultivating immortals, this book has both traditional routines and innovative designs. The plot is a bit slow in the early stages, but the protagonist also grows later, which is very good.

The writing is quite good, with a clear main line, but the protagonist has little inner activity, and sometimes seems a little contradictory, but it's okay, no big problem, and he is very careful in shaping the worldview. The text has the flavor of Journey to the West, which is interesting 🤭

Good book, good book, raising insects in this world, traveling in the sub-world, Dharma Gate and Yangshen and other novels are linked together, it is really exciting, the protagonist kills and implicates ordinary people, although he feels guilty, he does not regret it, the main character kills, so what? 🤭

The writing is very nice and I really like the interspersed story telling. The characters are well created and I really like Fan Dali. The protagonist's cultivation of immortality is also step-by-step. I like this rhythm [sending my heart]

The author's writing is sophisticated!!! The writing style is refined and the ancient rhyme is compact. Recommended reading for book friends who have read it!! I am short of words and can only say that your writing is great!!!! It's hard to imagine that it's the Tomato platform, but I'd like to thank the author for choosing Tomato and letting me see it. It feels like it's exactly the starting point The author's words are concise! In just a few strokes, a strange world of cultivation is drawn. If you insist on being picky, you can add more segments as suggested by previous book friends.

This book is well-organized, the plot is smooth, and the writing is good. The only criticism is that there are too many rare words, which makes me look uneducated 😄😄😄

Insect cultivation is sometimes good and sometimes bad, and demon cultivation does not mean that it must be bad. The author has a solid foundation, and the small contrasts in the article make it interesting to read. It is a new generation of writing.

It's okay, but I'd like to give you a suggestion. Some big scenes are described too little, and the content of the first 15 chapters is too brief.