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The setting is very good. The heroine travels to the second game to replace the original heroine to complete the game plot. The background of the world makes me want to continue watching. I have read 7 chapters so far, and the author's writing is quite humorous. I have a problem. ① The setting is that the heroine is in the last game she played, but I feel that in the plot, the heroine has no idea about the plot of the next game. Could it be said that the heroine only registered an account and read the introduction? ③The second male protagonist showed danger, at least the female protagonist felt the danger. After the second male protagonist killed the "big cockroach", the female protagonist slapped the second male protagonist. Although the intensity was very light, I think the slap was insulting. When the female protagonist felt in danger, could she really "attack" a powerful and dangerous sentry for a person of the opposite sex whom she had known for less than a day? Isn't she afraid of being retaliated by the sentry?

I want to eat meat, I want a lot of cars, the author cheers up ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah [crying almost] [crying almost] [crying] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy]

It's rare to see a yandere story about a guide and the regret of the original heroine. I read the introduction and came in. I thought it was about hating the sea, but I didn't expect it to be a funny story. Hahaha. When I read Cockroach at the beginning, I wanted to run away, but the writing was so cute that I stopped running. It's sweet and funny. I don't like this kind of writing. I can see my aunt laughing. When I saw 19, it would be great if the heroine didn't lie about people's feelings. This is too poisonous. (I probably got to about chapter 19 and stopped reading. I can't stand the heroine going around cheating on people's feelings. I really have nothing to read. I'll look for it again.)

After reading it so far, I want to praise the author. It is very readable and flows smoothly. Each character has flesh and blood and a strong sense of story. The characters are full and have different styles. However, the author still controls the pace of the article very well and is fascinating. I like many details and foreshadowing, such as Jiang Dingkun's suit, Hei Qi's appearance, etc. The gradual development of the main line and branch lines really feels like entering the world of B games. The author is very powerful and controls the whole scene (I look forward to the 21 bans in the future, after all, everyone is a yandere)

It's okay, the writing is good, the content is rich, the heroine is very cute, she has a sexy heart but not a bold heart. I can't do it anymore. Just like me, I have a lustful heart but no lustful courage. I get interested in lust, but when I get to that point, I shrink back and don't dare. Then my sense of self-protection suddenly overtakes my lustful heart [cover face] [cover face] It's too abstract.

It's very interesting after reading it. Although she is not a strong girl, I still hope that my sister will not be so passive. I hope that the author can make her a little stronger later, but never abuse our heroine. I hope that the author will not let that bad woman Paige take away our sister. I will write this bad woman to death in the future.

Fairy goods, fairy goods! Surrounded by male sex, the male mother's black skin facial cleanser and other stimulations, all the male protagonists who appear are really liked, the female protagonist is also very good in character, she can coax people to learn ing, does the author Dahongbai have a side job, I feel that the omitted part is very delicious... I am following up!

It was a pleasure to write. It's very, very, very beautiful. It's so fragrant. It's delicious. It's delicious. It's delicious. It's delicious. It's delicious. It's delicious. I want to follow the author forever. [Lick screen] [lick screen] [lick screen] [lick screen] [lick screen] [lick screen]

Guide, good-looking, not enough

It's really good-looking, and the writing is very good. I think it's the best Sentinel Guide article I've ever written. I highly recommend it. The plot is also very good, not boring at all. It's really good-looking, I like it very much😍

I really like it, it's super invincible and beautiful. The author should keep updating it [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [heart-warming] [heart-warming] [heart-warming] [heart-warming] [heart-warming] [heart-warming] [heart-warming] [heart-warming] [heart-warming] [heart-warming]

Nice! I feel like the author is getting better and better as he writes, and the latter part is particularly beautiful.

It's pretty good. My sister's green tea feeling is very interesting [laughs] I'm not particularly spoiled, so I feel pretty good watching it without thinking too much.

Wow, come on, it's so beautifully written. Those men are so attracted by the younger sister that they'll turn their mouths.

My mom is so pretty

It's really super, super beautiful [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Very good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It looks good. I like it [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Good-looking, really good-looking

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Don't poke or poke, come on, author 👏

Fortunately, it's just that the female coagulation is serious.

Awesome, no need to say more

Very good, hope to write more

It suits me very well xp. The author please update more [love] [love]

Very good, white and black, both brave and cowardly [laughing]

Found another treasure article, hehe

The only drawback of this book is that it is not enough to read! ! ! It's simply not enough! ! !

Great writing! ! Fairy Maid Articles 🥺🥺

It's so good to read, cheers for the author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]