Pokemon: From the Start, Shinji Makes Me His Big Brother

To be honest, your writing is good, but there is no need to pursue the female too much, just let nature take its course. If you want to evolve into a magpie, your Yusanjia, I advise you to change your gender, otherwise I doubt you will lose popularity. If you mean that like Alola, the Yusanjia in the region can still understand the Hezhong's Cleaning Sword Ghost, then there is no way. Boys are more suitable to know, right?

Not bad, the rhythm is okay, but it's a pity that Ibrahimovic is not his partner, everything else is passable

If the character of the protagonist is like this, it would be good if he is neither a good person nor a bad person, has no benefits, and is definitely not nosy. Sending a few elves to his girlfriend is not considered licking the dog, but he cannot be led by a woman. The character should be stronger. In the Pokémon world, polygamy and a harem are allowed, and there is no problem, but the protagonist The attitudes of these women should not be weak. These women should at least be obedient and obedient. They should not let them dictate everything. The same goes for their families. Every time the protagonist faces Mei and Touko and their mother, Higurashi Moe, the protagonist looks humble. This makes me very unhappy. Their family is rich and the protagonist's status is not bad. Why is he so humble in front of their family? The protagonist should be neither humble nor overbearing when facing his girlfriend's family. Especially the protagonist Higurashi Moe should have his own ideas and not be led by her in everything. He should face her in a manner that is neither humble nor overbearing. As the head of the family, the girlfriends in the harem should listen to the protagonist and be obedient. Even Sirona is the same. It's cool to watch like this. You can't be led by these women in everything. As the head of the family, you should have a tougher attitude. Do you understand the author? The last thing you want to see when reading a Pokémon novel is that the protagonist participates in some gorgeous competition, which is a waste of time. Challenging the alliance conference is the real thing. Winning the championship is almost the next step. Challenging a few regions and winning the championship is almost enough, so don't challenge other regions. The same plot is boring over and over again. Next, challenging the stronger Four Heavenly Kings is the real thing. And about super evolution, only one elf can be super evolved in a game. This should be set up like this, otherwise all the elf can super evolve, and the elf without super evolution cannot win at all.

Why is such a beautiful novel removed from the shelves? I'm waiting for your update every day. Why should such a beautiful novel be removed from the shelves?! What a beautiful novel, author, why did you take it off the shelves?? Tell me why?

It's so beautifully written, so beautiful

Excellent, beautiful, and very immersive.

Very good very good

It's really well written. Come on!

@ Suixin looks good

No more eunuchs, come on