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This book is really, when writing about Harry's collapse, I feel particularly immersive. The books about Harry's self-collapse are particularly well written. I think it is the best Tomato book so far.

The emotional description is very three-dimensional, and Harry's suffering is vividly described. Of course, I hope Harry lives a happy life from the bottom of my heart. I can't bring him into his perspective. I have never experienced these and I am not qualified to do so. This is simply the most beautiful book I have ever read, and it beats the HP books.... Black Bat and Little Stag must live a happy life....🥰 (It should be that there is no cp, right? It doesn't seem to be written in the introduction I think the reason why no one reads it is because of the AI-generated cover and the too straightforward name. Many people hate this kind of AI cover. With this kind of name, many people may subconsciously think that this is a bad article. In addition, there are only a few people who read it, so there is no rating. If the introduction can be improved, maybe someone will read it.

It's particularly good-looking. In fact, I feel that most of the protagonist's characters are divorced from the original work, but there are no loopholes. It can be seen as a parallel time and space of the original work. Especially the description of Harry's heart is really good. I feel that the author must have experienced mental illness before or has someone close to him who has this problem because it is so close to reality. Whether it is flashbacks, somatization, or emotional feelings, it is infinitely close to reality. It feels like looking in the mirror. It is really empathetic.

Amazing writing power! Amazing writing power! This book is like writing out the worst consequences of Harry staying at his uncle's house. Harry's emotional portrayal is so beautiful. He is obviously wary and suspicious and wants to force himself to give up, but he can't help but want to get closer to Snape's kindness. The author must have read the original work. The Harry in the original work has a bit of a venomous character. He is normal on the surface when it comes to his uncle's family, but his inner thoughts have drifted to Siberia. Because of the lack of psychological description, the Harry in the movie looks more like an innocent and silly child, and his character will definitely be a little flat. I think the description of Snape is pretty good. When I first saw his transformation, I thought it might be a bit OOC. But when I saw the description of Snape later when Xiao Ha lost his temper because of eating, my heart dropped to my stomach. It seems that in Harry's dream, he stabbed someone with a knife? I feel sorry for Xiao Ha, I haven't seen the start of school yet, and I'm curious about how it will develop in the future [blowing kiss]

I discovered this book last night and finished reading the latest chapter at noon today! I cried from the subway to school, and the school also watched me cry. Oh my god! The author's writing is so great! \^O^/ It's beyond description! ! I discovered a new author. I was originally thinking, how could I not have read the article about Snape? It turned out to be a new masterpiece! Oh my god! Oh my god! I am so happy! I hope the author will write faster and more. Although it is already very fast, I really don't want to see this shitty yellow update button~

Harry in this book is a very sensitive character, so when he was loved for the first time, he showed the stress reaction of a child who has been abused and bullied for a long time. Fortunately, he had Severus, and under his care and efforts, Harry's wounds were slowly healed, and his physical condition was getting better and better. The interaction between the two people is very touching. The author must be a delicate person, otherwise "love" cannot be described in such a perfect form.

Among so many fans I have seen, the ones that look the most like them😍😍😍😍

It's really, really beautiful😭Harry is so pitiful that I cried to death😭 The author's writing style is also very nice and delicate ❤️, but the ending was a bit rushed, and he didn't write clearly when the Horcruxes were destroyed, but it was really beautiful.

Maybe it's a little OOC, I kept crying from the beginning, but it's good to watch

This is a rare love story between Sri Lanka and Harry! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] Some ooc but within the acceptable range. [OK] It's worth watching. The inner drama of Harry's collapse is well written.

. The emotions are very delicate, and although it's a bit OOC, it feels like the fanfic is quite normal. The only drawback is that it feels a bit short, and it's all concentrated on one emotional line. Although Jade is also a line, most of the times he appears are in memories, but it cannot be said that he has truly integrated.

It's pretty good, but the early stage is quite hazy. It's actually okay if you pay attention to the timeline and perspective (? Fire Tongs Liu Ming

The writing is really good, and the author's writing style is also very good [Adoration]

The Harry described by the author is so pitiful, but also very strong. The emotional expression of Harry's character is particularly delicate, which completely shows the inner reaction of being bullied. Sometimes I couldn't stop crying while watching it. Professor Snape is a soft-spoken person. Overall, I feel very healed after reading this. The description of Harry's defensive psychology always seems to poke my own emotional reaction. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Looking forward to college life at Hogwarts Who is the heroine?

So wonderfully written! Continue to update every day, the author is great!

It's so beautiful, and the relationship with SS is so cute, so I really care about whether there is a female protagonist in this book, whether Harry will get married, and who he will marry in the end😱 To be honest, at first I thought the name on the cover was bad (Guo Me), but it's actually really good. It's considered to be of very high quality and ranked among the top ten among Sri Lankan fan fictions. I almost got delayed because of the name.

There are a lot of emotional and psychological descriptions. It's so good. I'd love to see the teacher write more. That's what I love to read!

I read it in the middle of the night, and it showed me the daytime. I was so moved, and the description of emotions was so delicate. It was the first time I read a novel about the redemption of Harry and Snape.

Dad, why did you enter the dark roomε(┬┬┬┬)3

You must stay happy [crying] If you're not a buddy, why did you take it off the shelves? [Pouts]

Super pretty! Just one word, look!

Very nice HP fanfic!

Very beautiful, the psychological description is very delicate

The descriptions of emotions and inner feelings are very delicate. This is the kind of family love I want. [Crying] [Crying], it's terrible. When I first read it, my tears didn't stop [Crying], but the author's writing is really good. Come on, author [Sending Hearts] I look forward to the author's next book [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts]! !

Snape and Harry's family tribute is so delicious [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart]

I like it, cheers for the author

It looks great. When you think about Snape and Harry living under the same roof, you can think of what Snape is like.

If possible, I hope everyone can have a good ending, everyone.

Why was such a good number removed from the shelves?