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The very realistic national team may have disappointed us, but I still hope that reality can also bring back a few such talents. I want to see Olympic gold medals.

The writing is very good in basketball articles, but the writing on life, contracts, and relationships is too sloppy and unreasonable. Of course, I don't like the Spurs either, but the writing of the first show is exciting enough, and it feels a bit like Lin Hai Ting Tao! I hope you can keep updating, come on💪

Very good. I've seen too many people who directly enter the NBA and play as a substitute. I'm tired of seeing it.

A cool article that follows the growth step by step. It can also be fun

I have read several basketball-themed books. The beginning of this book is very novel, and the rest is worth looking forward to. I have a weak question, why is the rating so low? Big cheers for the author!

So far it looks pretty good, it doesn't overwhelm the protagonist's strength, I'll see how it's written in the later stages.

Very well written. But joining the NBA's Spurs...

I like reading, I hope the author can write well, support

The book is very good and the system has a relatively low sense of presence. Don't know why the rating is so low. I think if a book wants to be successful, it must write something of its own. I hope the author will not be too disturbed by some people's negative reviews. I just read Chapter 109, I hope I won't become invincible too soon

The author's writing is very good, and the details are better than other authors. I still hope that the author will develop a single female protagonist and choose Yang Chaoyue. I think Popovich is pretty good and there is no need to change him at all. Please ask the author to let Lin Yan go to the Rockets. I really like the Rockets. Last but not least, could the author write faster? It's really beautiful!

Can see. I just don't know if the author's life is too privileged or if he lacks common sense in life, such as living in a 90-square-meter house for four people, or having a sloppy contract.

It feels very storytelling

Is the Yucheng the author is talking about Yancheng? [Crying] It would be great if Yanzhong could really break into Naigao

It's not easy to write a book, so I won't give you a point, but I won't be upset if I don't complain. First, the emotional drama is not well written. There is only one girl, not multiple girls, not multiple girls. The writing is very confusing. Second, what era is it? An 18-year-old player who is not very good at English trains his own agent who is not very good at English to play in the NBA. He has to build his own company before entering the NBA. Third, the national team's suspension can be thought of as going to the NCAA, but March Madness is suppressing it to prevent them from winning the championship. Shuangwen must look like Shuangwen. There were some minor addictions that I managed to survive, but I just couldn't survive March Madness. Free novel I hope the author will get better and better!

The writing is good, and the dialogue is very American. There are no foreigners using random idioms, which would be too inconsistent. The pace of the game is smooth. Pushing the girl is too slow and needs to be strengthened. Overall, it's a good NBA article.

It's okay, why is the score so low?

Not bad in basketball articles

A novel and satisfying genre of writing

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It would be nice if the update could be faster. I watched it after half a month of watching it

Awesome, very beautiful, good luck to the author

It's pretty good. I'm tired of reading basketball articles that start with being invincible.

The book is very good, but can it have only one female protagonist? [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

The author writes very well

Thank you very much for your efforts

Not bad, not too bad

Good, logical and reasonable

Not bad, good, good-looking

Well, it looks pretty good from the front.

It would be perfect if it can be paired with pictures of beautiful girls [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]