Unfavorable Entry: All Women Have a Bad Opinion at the Start

Not bad, both the artistic conception and the technique are top-notch. The only problem is that the shaping of the character relationships is still a little less descriptive, maybe because the content is a little less. The life experiences of most of the Lin family came to an end before the causes and consequences were explained clearly. This makes the review of the whole story after the fire a little abrupt, but it is understandable, after all, it is to speed up the main line. All in all, it is a pretty good novel, and one of the best among the novels I have read recently. The author will be very popular if he keeps up the quality.

Let me be objective. I wrote it myself, so of course I know where there are problems. However, a book of this style is easily influenced by everyone's comments. Often, it is easy to make malicious speculations about the motivations of the characters due to the influence of preconceptions. For the sake of the smoothness and completeness of the article, it is impossible for me to analyze everyone's thought process. Rhythm. I want to say that this is indeed a slow-burning book. I don't want people to rush to criticize me after reading it for 30 minutes, because I can't see any signs. The content of the first chapter of this book can only be regarded as foreshadowing, and the story will not really develop until Yicheng. Morality. I won't explain this, and I don't want people to take it out of context. Literary youth. The first chapter is more serious, but the description of the environment is basically just a transition, and large sections will not appear frequently. Not cool enough. After all, it is a slow-burning book. Although the development of the protagonist is slow, I have never written any vulgar and routine content to stimulate everyone. It can be regarded as half a red dust book. Not the same as the default. This is indeed my fault. The title is meant to attract traffic. This is actually an article with a slow-paced artistic conception, not a cool article. But the entry is still very important, it is an important supplement outside the main line.

A very good book, although it is still small, but it is very good just for its short length. It's not brainless, the plot is okay for the time being, the characters are not inked, and they don't randomly recruit girls (I prefer a single female protagonist, and it seems to be Lin Wenqing at the moment) The main plot is currently advancing very fast, and I hope to see the development of the relationship between Shuang Lin in the future.

It's a good work worth reading. I personally like the author's delicate descriptions and gentle narrative style. The early part is short and the plot is compact. It's a pity that many parts are not explained clearly. The sense of substitution is not enough, as if you are reading someone else's self-narration, so the overall taste is light.

I felt so good watching it, the climax of those chapters gave me goosebumps [Thinking]

Finally found a fairy tale novel that is not so invincible

The author writes well

A little different from what I thought (๑--๑)

It's okay. The writing is quite fluent, but the author likes to use hair knives.

Jian Lai Feng, you can read it when you don't have any books, don't have high expectations, usually the author of 300,000 to 400,000 words will just run away.

It can be written better than most martial arts artistic conceptions.

There is still a big difference between the introduction and the content in the book. I thought it was a bit funny, but when I saw Lin Chao offline like this [crying]. But it's an unexpected surprise. The writing is really picturesque.

Not bad

It's not bad. It would be nice to have fewer knives [grievance] [grievance]

Beautiful, worth seeing

Yu Qi's portrayal is very good

It's pretty cool, but it keeps digging holes. Really awesome

Not bad. I give you a five-star review and hope you can get through this difficult time.

It's interesting. It's very attractive to me. At least I like to watch it.

A very nice book recommended

Brothers, I won't say anything else. It looks really good. The smell of cultivating immortals is almost coming out. The writing style is also very good.

The content is quite good, there is a sword coming to the wind, micro group elephant, but the update is too slow. If you have the patience to read it carefully, as long as you sit still and don't watch it, I think the achievement will be very high in the later stages of this book.

Raising books will help you die