[A refreshing, unconventional power fantasy] [Very little of a golden finger] [Slow burn] [Plot] [Atmosphere]
If you're going to write about a swordsman, you should write about his sword and about him.
Write of him laughing over a cup of rough wine amid the humble world of mortals; write of him moving through a forest of blades, his sword falling like a lone swan.
Write of him watching the cold currents, hidden through the passage of the seasons; write of his sword rising over the Long River, the vast world stretching on without end.
The swordsman traveled through lands in every direction, seeing endless forests and the biting northern winds, red suns over the desert and misty rain in the southern isles.
But what he remembered most were the people.
In this world, he saw outlaws risk their lives for justice, men in white robes rise to glory, a sword prodigy live his whole life without a sword, and a Buddha Child struggle through sorrow.
He saw a young general's bow bring down the vermilion standard, and a handsome butcher's knife carve up a coiling dragon.
He saw a divine maiden fly from a mural, and an immortal above the clouds make a move on the board.
The ink may run out, but the story's meaning never ends. Yet sadly, the swordsman's tale can only span a hundred years.
Because a hundred years later, it will be the story of a Sword Saint of the mortal world.
And so, when he sheathed his sword and suddenly looked back, the mountains and seas were still boundless, and the lights of mortal life remained as they had always been.
Not bad, both the artistic conception and the technique are top-notch. The only problem is that the shaping of the character relationships is still a little less descriptive, maybe because the content is a little less. The life experiences of most of the Lin family came to an end before the causes and consequences were explained clearly. This makes the review of the whole story after the fire a little abrupt, but it is understandable, after all, it is to speed up the main line. All in all, it is a pretty good novel, and one of the best among the novels I have read recently. The author will be very popular if he keeps up the quality.
Let me be objective. I wrote it myself, so of course I know where there are problems. However, a book of this style is easily influenced by everyone's comments. Often, it is easy to make malicious speculations about the motivations of the characters due to the influence of preconceptions. However, for the sake of the smoothness and completeness of the article, it is impossible for me to analyze everyone's thought process. Rhythm. I want to say that this is indeed a slow-burning book. I don't want people to rush to criticize me after reading it for 30 minutes, because I can't see any signs. The content of the first chapter of this book can only be regarded as foreshadowing, and the story will not really develop until Yicheng. Morality. I won't explain this, and I don't want people to take it out of context. Literary youth. The first chapter is more serious, but the description of the environment is basically just a transition, and large sections will not appear frequently. Not cool enough. After all, it is a slow-burning book. Although the development of the protagonist is slow, I have never written any vulgar and routine content to stimulate everyone. It can be regarded as half a red dust book. Not the same as the default. This is indeed my fault. The title is meant to attract traffic. This is actually an article with a slow-paced artistic conception, not a cool article. But the entry is still very important, it is an important supplement outside the main line.
A very good book, although it is still small, but it is very good just for its short length. It's not brainless, the plot is okay for the time being, the characters are not inked, and they don't randomly recruit girls (I prefer a single female protagonist, and it seems to be Lin Wenqing at the moment) The main plot is currently advancing very fast, and I hope to see the development of the relationship between Shuang Lin in the future.
It's a good work worth reading. I personally like the author's delicate descriptions and gentle narrative style. The early part is short and the plot is compact. It's a pity that many parts are not explained clearly. The sense of substitution is not enough, as if you are reading someone else's self-narration, so the overall taste is light.
Jian Lai Feng, you can read it when you don't have any books, don't have high expectations, usually the author of 300,000 to 400,000 words will just run away.
Finally found a fairy tale novel that is not so invincible
There is still a big difference between the introduction and the content in the book. I thought it was a bit funny, but when I saw Lin Chao offline like this 😢. But it's an unexpected surprise. The writing is really picturesque.
I felt so good watching it, the climax of those chapters gave me goosebumps 🤔
It can be written better than most martial arts artistic conceptions.
A little different from what I thought (๑--๑)