I Used Our Brains with Lao Sai, and Lao Sai Connected with Me Heart to Heart

The content is very good, very innovative, and the various strategies are also very good, but there are too many supporting actresses. If the author hadn't repeatedly said that the supporting actresses are only needed for the plot, I might not be able to read it. Also, the appearance of the girls should be less described. Just give a general feeling. I can't stand it anymore. I guess I'll write another harem novel. Bai Feng's writing is too cheap. You can read the one about Asara's restricted area. As long as the woman appears, the poison will be over and she will slip away.

The subject matter is novel, and the theme of the game is still revealed. The protagonist has a good grasp of the balance between being the leader of Asara and the GTI operator. The writing is quite touching, and some of the game content has been rationalized. The text content is obviously outstanding compared to similar books, and the author of the Riddler is a professional one. I personally don't like the author's way of writing about female characters on this subject. It makes people feel that the world is full of lust, and they have such descriptions when they are in trouble. It's very uncomfortable to watch. One star deducted for personal reasons

Love to watch It's just that we hope there can be less of that kind of obscene plot. Watching too much of it can be a bit uncomfortable. Although it may be more realistic, I still hope there can be less w. Also, I hope there won't be a female protagonist who is with the protagonist. I'm totally fine with the appearance of other female characters with descriptions (although the Bai Feng makes me a little scared) What I want to see more is Asala and Lao Sai getting better and dipping their beans. After all, freedom belongs to Asara Just to mention it, there are too many wavy lines. However, there has been some improvement recently, so I'll just mention it www I hope the author can write better and better The other thing is Not enough Come on I believe that dear author you can update 10 times a day

First of all, the plot is really coherent, with very few poisonous points and logical fallacies. Secondly, the writing style is humorous and there was nothing that I wanted to skip. In the end, the author was really obedient and polite. He also carefully reviewed the image of the protagonist and attached a topographic map. His writing attitude was very good. Maybe the only thing that makes me feel uncomfortable is the portrayal of Luo and Bai, but after all, Chapter 100 is just the beginning, there is nothing much to say. Qi Hong's portrayal is not about love, and the supporting actresses are not stereotyped. To be honest, it is much better than other cool novels. At least the author has his own ideas and does not directly apply the conventional cool novel template. Oops, why did the author go astray? Your career line is really good. It is more creative than other books of the same type. Why did you write it as Huang Wen later? And I was very embarrassed after reading those chapters😓 I basically won't touch it in the future. I'll come back and take a look when I have time. You better change it seriously and don't let new readers suffer from this, and the book's grades will not be bad. But your writing attitude is really good, so I won't lower your star, you bastard🐀Tail juice [I'm about to cry]

It is a very good Delta fan novel. It has a rich world view and strong logic. The supporting characters are basically flesh and blood. It is also interesting that the protagonist leads Asara to become bigger and stronger. It is just that several original female characters are compared with other supporting characters (even original male characters of the same level). Color) gives people a much different look and feel, but the overall development of the main plot is still very good, and the career line is also very clear. If you want to read this book, remember to skip the emotional scenes in the chapters, and it will be more comfortable to read. I have not found a novel of the same type to replace it. Come on, come on The plot of the heroine is extremely sinister, check out the first half, and the heroine is online in the second half. Don't watch it if the emotional drama is strong. In addition to adding to the protagonist's harem, the author is committed to giving other characters a CP. The article also draws a red line for Wu Ming. Some other original characters also have emotional lines. If you can't handle it, it's better to run away.

[Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] IQ is online. I personally feel that it is very exciting among the delta. The change of identity and the sneak attack of Lao Liu are very interesting.

I made a derivative based on the delta. The logic settings are very good. The combination of materials in the delta is quite interesting. From Asara's perspective, I guess there may be a knife later [thinking] The biggest problem now is that it is too short [eating melon]

It's a very good book. I like the obscene Assara very much. The brotherhood between Said and the protagonist is well described. The double identity of the protagonist is okay. The only problem I think is that the protagonist is a bit lustful. It is human to be lustful. However, the book focuses too much on the protagonist's lustful aspect, which may make some people's reading experience uncomfortable (including me). I hope the author can reduce the ink on the lustful aspect and improve the description of Asara and Said [Thoughts]

Overall, the writing is quite good, and the character descriptions are also quite good. However, the emotional line is a bit toxic. I didn't hold back after seeing the explosion of White Bee's M attribute. It's considered a good book. (Personal opinion)

Okay, this is still a common problem among Delta fans. The world view has been as perfect as possible, but there is a problem because of joining the entire world. There is only one Lao Sai. Even if he does it without sleeping, it will only take tens of billions to encounter one situation. It can be said that in this world view, there are tens of thousands of games opening at the same time every second. How does he manage to be matched with a wave of people every time? There are too many pitfalls, but overall it's pretty good to watch and the plot is interesting. I recommend watching it. Just as I imagined, I gave an explanation later. After all, it is such an obvious pitfall, and it is relatively easy to fill.

The author has a unique understanding of the plot, and the activities and story lines are well integrated. The characters of the operators and bosses currently appearing are also excellent, and they are more vivid compared to the official settings, and they are not offensive. I read the first twenty chapters very quickly. I originally read them as a fast-food novel. Later I found that the plot was really good, so I slowed down and read it. I was afraid that there would not be enough updates [Star]

It's good to watch, but due to personal preferences, I can't stand this kind of hidden harem plot, so I quit here. However, the book is a good book. If you don't mind reading the hidden harem, I highly recommend it. Of course, you can also read it first and show it in the middle. The plot is pretty good, and there is not much written about the hidden harem. Everyone has their own preferences. Some people like to watch certain plots while others don't. It's impossible to let the author write according to his own ideas. If you have to back out, just back out. Don't be too drastic when you back out. Just give the plot what it deserves and then delete it, or delete it directly without hurting each other. Of course, I have only read half of it, and I don't have much time to read it. I haven't read the follow-up. No guarantee. As the saying goes, back off when you have to, take a step back, don't force yourself, and don't criticize others. Stay well. If you look for this book, you have already found platinum in the sand. Why not do it once and find your own real gold. (The child has read more than a thousand books, and there is actually quite a lot to read. However, it may be because the child is omnivorous and reads all genres, including male novels and female novels)

The author's imagination is very good. There are currently no setting or logic problems (maybe I didn't pay attention 😂). The new chapters can be very reasonably related to the game activities. There are no problems except for the classic 1.2 Innocuous little sugar man plots by the novice author. It is a good delta book.

It's very interesting to watch. It's self-made and very creative. Some of it is very good. There are also some opinions from the audience. I think it's 10 points good to watch.

The plot is rich, the characters are highlighted, and the emotional descriptions are also rich.

I feel like the writing is a bit too good. I just finished two Tang books and I'm really not used to reading this [face covering]. The characters are very well-developed, each one has his or her own unique side, and the plot is both tender and humorous without being too toxic. It really is the fine chaff among the fine chaff. The protagonist is not invincible, but has both shortcomings and advantages. The setting of the book also has great potential. Overall, the pace is very balanced. It is neither too brainless nor too complicated. It is considered a masterpiece.

This novel is pretty good among the novels in Delta that I read, very good, but I didn't dare to finish it. When Shen Miaohong came out, I came back and read the book reviews. It seemed that there was a harem in the back or something. I wasn't sure, and I didn't want to read it. The previous author's writing was really good, very good, and everything about strategy and IQ was online. The previous section about Lao Sai seemed to have sold a pair of men. I saw some people were complaining about it. I felt good at that time, but when I saw Shen Miaohong later, I felt something was wrong. I came back and read the book reviews, and sure enough. I don't have much to say. The early strategy and other aspects of this book are really good. Just skip the ones with female characters. When it comes to the female characters, the writing plummets. But overall it's a good book. I give it four stars. I'm serious, don't scold me. The author has given up on female readers. When I was drinking with Lao Sai earlier, I thought it was good. Well, I wish the author success.

It's a very good book. I read it in one sitting. I'll take care of it for two days. Good luck to the author👍

It's beautiful, I love reading it, I hope the author doesn't write so much that he pulls his crotch at the back [Adoration]

It's beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, I love reading it, and the author will update it soon.

I think this book is okay. One thing I hate the most is that it contains a lot of descriptions of women, and things like having a harem. Although the author writes less, the vocabulary has a very obvious bro flavor, which makes me feel a little nauseous while reading it. If any sisters read this review, please pay attention o>_<o

It's so shameless, so shameless. It's just that the author didn't add too much () and it's not enough to read [laughter]

The writing is very good, the ideas are fresh and clear, and the characters are flesh and blood. After reading it, I don't want to go to Dam Zero to rob the people of Asala for their daily necessities.

It's so good. I love watching people like this in the Delta world. The protagonist is very smart. He is one of the smartest among the Delta books I've read. So far, there doesn't seem to be a female protagonist, nor does he consume CP. It's so cool.

The fan novel adapted from Delta that I have read so far is quite good.

It is a fanfic without losing its creativity, and it is a cool article without losing its humanity. It really shows the background of the Delta. I chose the Asara camp probably because the author saw the shadow of old China in Asara. He was also worried that readers would not know some locations, so he specially included pictures. He is a good author, and it is also a good article!

Although I haven't read much so far, the author's descriptions are still very good, and the plot is also well grasped. The other characters and protagonists are also well created, but the female characters are not well grasped. This is probably a common problem of Tomato novel authors, but it doesn't matter. Come on, author, I believe it will get better and better.

This book is quite good. Although I haven't read it for a long time, Bai Zhouzi can be seen in many comments [face covering]

It's very interesting, the kind that Delta fans like to watch.

A very nice Delta-like novel, quite attractive.