Why did I write this story? To be honest, I wasn’t satisfied with the second book Erqi started writing, so I decided to give it a try. I hope I can write the ending I want. Of course, everyone has their own tastes, so if this isn’t the perfect ending you had in mind, please forgive me.
And for anyone who’s confused, you can think of my story as taking place in a parallel universe. So there’s no rainy night from the beginning of the first book, nor the damaged voice, prison, missing kidney, and so on. Jian Tong is still the eldest daughter of the Jian family!
If everything started over and returned to their younger days, what would happen between Jian Tong and Shen Xiujin?
Would Old Master Shen’s schemes be thwarted?
What would Jian Tong do this time?
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This is my first time writing on the Tomato platform. Please be understanding if the characters seem out of character, and I hope you’ll support me!
I want to see the hero competing, I want to see the crematorium chasing his wife, I want to see the heroine playing with the hero's feelings, I want to see the heroine find an opportunity to send the hero to prison, I want to see the hero rip out his heart and lungs, I want to see the hero go to jail for three years, I want to see the heroine pretend to have amnesia later. Pretending not to remember anything, I want to see the heroine easily get forgiveness from the hero, I want to see the hero be willing to forgive the heroine in the end, I want to see the hero give birth to a daughter and a half for the heroine [smirking] 😜
This book cleverly connects the first part of Bone Erosion. The plot is coherent and the story direction is logical. Unlike Qi Lao's second part, which is completely abusive to women. It mainly focuses on multiple men fighting one woman. I can't wait to write 20 chapters for a female abuse plot🤣
Wow, the great heroine Jian Tong in my heart, you, the author, finally wrote it😭
I think this book is better than the one written by the original author. The original author had a grudge against the heroine. This ending is worthy of Jian Tong's story, and it also breaks away from the ending of the domestic novel where the male and female protagonists are together. I like this book very much. I think this book is better than the one written by the original author. The original author had a grudge against the heroine. This ending is worthy of Jian Tong's story, and it also breaks away from the ending of the domestic novel where the male and female protagonists are together. I like this book very much. But in my private heart, I hope that Lu Mingchu will also have a good ending. In the first film, it is undeniable that among so many people, Lu Mingchu was the least harmed. It is undeniable that he bribed the gangster, but we have no way to deny that if he hadn't bribed him, Jian Tong would have lost his virginity. For such a proud person, this is more uncomfortable than death. But it is undeniable that there is some harm, but I think it is the least harm. In the first part, I married someone I didn't like for Jian Tong. If Shen Xiujin can be forgiven, then let's give Lu Mingchu a good ending. (My own selfishness)
Much better than the first and second parts.
Shen Xiujin written by the author is very lovable. I hope Shen Jian will have a little emotional line in the later period 😳
It's great. Come on, the author is awesome.
Big cheers for the author
It's 10,000 times better than what the original author wrote! Be is the best ending! Let our heroine be the only one beautiful! It's so well written!
The starting point is very good, but the OOC is too serious and doesn't have that flavor.