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It's very good-looking, the heroine has a good personality, the characters are lively and interesting, there is no OOC in my opinion, and the emotional line is also very easy to break up. The male ghost smell that follows Yi Ermi is coming to my face. I hope the author can update 100 chapters and scare me to death! ୧⍢⃝୨

To be honest, a lot of hunter fanfics these days are either too Mary Sue. Or it's Tailong Aotian. When I saw the title of the book, I thought it should be the same, but I found that it was not about the detailed thoughts of the characters. Everything is done well, and the heroine is also very clear-headed and calm. She is not the kind of spoiled wife, nor does she belong to the type of heroine with particularly exaggerated strength. In short, the writing style is very delicate and it is very comfortable to read. It is a pity that it is still being serialized and cannot be read in one sitting. But I will keep chasing. You should also read it when the author releases a new book.

Teacher, I beg you to update quickly! ! ! Very nice! Super pretty! So pretty! I love Yi Ermi so much! The plot is very interesting, novel and not procrastinating, and the characters are not OOC. I like it! I like it! ! ! The heroine has her own opinions, she is not a noob. The emotional line between the two people is also well shaped, which is very interesting! ! ! Although there are not many fans of "Hunter", this one is the most interesting one I have ever seen! Maybe it's because I like Yilmiba, but the author's articles are really good, not a running account, I like it, like it, like it, like it! ! ! I rarely write long reviews, but I really like this fanfic of "Hunter"! While the author is updating, please don't forget to be healthy. Don't be idle all the time. Write more articles. Come on!

From Chapter 50 to now, it can be said that I have watched Leah grow up. [Love] Although I have not read Greed Island, I can understand a lot just by reading the plot in the book. The plots are intertwined and occasionally sprinkled with sugar. I have to say that Tokisa and Il are so close to each other... Il is such a cute guy (bushi, please praise the author, the speed of two updates a day is really great! Author, when can you suddenly update 400 chapters to scare me... I will continue to give gifts to Leah! I hope Leah can receive them in that world! In the future, if she becomes a celebrity [although she is now], she must write a separate chapter to praise me◟(˶> ᎑ <˶)◞Author, I will follow you forever! [Send heart][Love][Love][Love]

Overall, it is a good work with full content and dense information. The original character Leah is a strong girl and I like it very much.， [Like][Like][Like] But, to be honest, the ending was too rushed and left me feeling unfinished. There is basically no live broadcast to explore the ruins mentioned in the introduction, which makes me a little disappointed. However, the description and interaction of Leah and Ilmi's emotional lines are good, very delicate, and much better than my writing style. Yi Mi himself has not strayed too far from the original work, so fans of the original work can feel free to enjoy it. I look forward to the extra plot of exploring the ruins all the way, because I was attracted by the live broadcast of exploring the ruins in the introduction and Yi Mi's novel way of expressing emotions, so I hope the author will keep his promise and not let the extra story live up to my diligent pursuit of updates and the few power generation for love! ! ! I have never given up chasing updates. The author's writing style is also very good. This book is still worth reading. I hope that the author will have more successful works in the future [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] Extras updated! ! ! In fact, I hope to write more about life after marriage and having children or adventure life after marriage. This kind of warmth is very comfortable to read. If the author wants to open a new book, can it also be about adventure, or a sequel, or more extras to this book? I really like adventure stories and heart-warming stories [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It took me a day and a half to read it, and I felt that the ending was a bit rushed (I don't mean it was unfinished [making a face]) The writing is online and follows the plot, which makes up for some of my regrets. The interaction between Yili is also sweet [eating melon], everyone is cute, and Hisoka is also cool |･ω･｀) There is nothing OOC... I feel that Jin's image is more three-dimensional. In the end, I didn't expect that it was Xiaoyi who gave birth to the baby. Maybe he didn't want Leah to suffer. Xiaojie didn't listen to his mother's recording, so it couldn't be Jin's voice in it: "What are you thinking, brat? I gave birth to you with a pregnancy stone"... It's a bit weird.

It seems pretty good so far. Hunter stories for CP12 fans are really rare. However, the hunter assessment part is a bit difficult (I will change it tentatively after reading other comments and the author's reply). If you don't like to see problems solved with love or influence, you can skip it. The rest of it is pretty good. First give me a five-star [blow a kiss]

Although I have only read a little bit, I can definitely say that this is a good book. It is not written from the perspective of a time traveler, but from the perspective of a pure child. It is very real, because I also grew up as a child. [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] When I read this book, I felt that the protagonist was like my daughter. The description of the characters was not O C at all. I think the author has a deeper understanding of the characters. He definitely loves hunters.

A very, very, very good book. As a hunter fan, it is absolutely outstanding. The only drawback is that it is a new book. I read it a second time while waiting for the update. The heroine is Jin's apprentice and is slowly growing up! Worth a look!

It must be good-looking. The author is simply my god, okay? This book is simply my soulmate[Admiration][Admiration][Admiration]

The article is very logical and the character of the protagonist is well written. Although the number of words is small now, the progress is quite fast. Looking forward to the follow-up, the author will try his best to update! ! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It looks good and looks sweet, but is it really so? A high-quality fanfic that fits the character very well

The writing style of this novel is so delicate, every sentence is fascinating and makes people immersed in it. The most important thing is that the author never delayed the update

Finally found Hunter's article about Yiermi. It's great! ! !

The content is interesting and I feel that the heroine is career-oriented. Very good!

The character of the main character is very interesting and I like it very much.

Yilmina is very good🌚👊🏾

Canopy! Hit him, hit him!

Author, great. Your work is super beautiful. Especially beautiful.

It's very beautiful, you must stick to it [Sending heartfelt wishes]

It's really good-looking and the sweet interactions are so sweet. So it would really make me happy if you could update it fifty times a day [laughs]

It's beautiful, beautiful, the structure is very clear, and the thinking is also very good.

Good looking, super good

Very well written and very beautiful (♡ꉺ.̫ꉺ)

All I can say is that it looks great.

Five stars needless to say

Good looking! The author must not be fooled😭!

My eyes light up, Leah is so cute!

It's very nice to read [Flowing Kiss]. If you like to read hunter fan fiction, you must read this book. It's worth recommending~

It's beautiful, the plot is complete, I like the author's writing