My Little Pony: There's Something Wrong with the World!

Your rating is: A+! Your novel will shock the entire tomato pony circle and put everyone who sees it in the supreme artistic realm. Your novel will shine like the stars of Equestria. We need artists like you! The novel contains a lot of jokes, and the interaction between the author and the readers in the paragraphs and comments is very rich. The characters are not OOC. As a single heroine, Twilight's interaction with the protagonist is also handled very well. The persecution of Twilight from time to time is the finishing touch! The combat power has not collapsed, and the protagonist relies on his super wisdom to walk on the road of advancing from a disembodied magical creature to an alicorn. Therefore, this novel will serve as a model for pony fans, and I look forward to you creating more excellent works!

Yes, it is the only My Little Pony fanfic I have found that I can continue to read. Although I have abandoned this book twice, it is still very interesting to read later. This book can clearly see the author's progress, so it gives me a feeling that it is getting better and better. But what really stood out to me was starting from Chapter 17, which is where I am currently. The main problems at the beginning were that the segmentation was not done well, and the dialogue between the protagonists was also very stereotyped. The author has made rapid progress, and these problems have been basically solved. I won't go into details about the settings. After all, there seem to be conflicts between settings in different versions.

Among all the pony stories I have read, it is definitely unique. It is a work with its own plot and ideas. It is worth watching for all pony lovers. It just has too many jokes and is a bit abstract.

This is truly ecstatic! I have never seen such a fierce, domineering, strong, loyal and obsessed with abstract content! It's so exciting that I can't even speak of it!

So far, there seems to be nothing wrong with the pony. It should be such a warm and sweet daily mouth! ! ! [Hokage Shisui's eye expression]

The protagonist has the best early setting among the fanfics, and the logic is also very clear. There are some chapters where the three little ones only get their cutie marks, which is a little flawed. I hope that the following chapters can increase my favorability, but I can only have one cp. It is best not to have an officially confirmed cp. The Crystal Empire chapter will be Shining Armor Green later. In summary, although it is not finished, it is a very interesting book. In conclusion, this book is definitely rated low so far The logic from Chapter 1 to Chapter 208 can at least reach 8.9 Points

Suddenly I realized that I haven't written a book review for a million words, 666 domo, this is the author of this book [laughs] Readers with ninja vision must have noticed the way the plot of this book develops. Along the plot, but not limited to the plot, putting many places together... Commonly known as scribbling [laughing] (This then led to the book being assigned to the fantasy area by AI during verification) The author was very sad after reading Pony's ending, not only the plot of the ending, but also the ending itself. When the story reaches the end, it means the end, the adventure is over, the story is over, there is nothing new and interesting anymore, and we fall into a meaningless nothingness (author's self-perception) Therefore, the author has a habit of sometimes leaving the ending unread when reading a story. It's like in my world, the story has not been observed by me, so it has no ending. The same is true for Xiao Ma. I am looking forward to whether there will be a different development. When the protagonist is inserted, the story will go in a different direction, and even the moral conveyed will be different [Thinking] I think emotion and love are two-way and mutual. Although the protagonist of this book's brilliant sequence has been helping all ponies in the plot, this does not mean that he is perfect or anything. On the contrary, he also has many mistakes and omissions. It's just the experience he remembers as a human being that makes him appear mature in many things. And the truth is always easier said than done. But in fact, while teaching the ponies, he also learned a lot from them. Help them and be helped by them. While giving love, you also receive love. This is also a sentence in the introduction. I hope that this soul who came to Equestria from another world will find peace and happiness [Thoughts] This is the main idea, the following is the main line Just like the Brilliant Sequence in Equestria can create gems through the laws of the universe on the other side of the earth. The two worlds may seem similar, but they are completely different. What does a world without magic mean? The power of the Brilliant Sequence relies on his existence as an alien soul. His magical body, his Alicorn power, and his wind demon power are all born and exist based on the differences between the two worlds. Since I have no body, I can transform myself at will. Without a soul, there is no fear of broken thoughts There is no existence that can ignore the mercy of fate … But love is not, the love of the glorious sequence and everything known in this world is not. There is no difference in love in every world, it is the only thing in common. It's something so fragile that it passes away day and night. It is also something that is so strong that it lasts forever.

When I first read this work, I was amazed at how interesting it is! His writing is like a river flowing down the river, full of interesting stories, and the joy is like a tide that hits your heart. It is a private publication by a fan of Xiaoma, and it is truly a top-notch product. Therefore, I strongly recommend it to my colleagues - if the author actually finished this work from the beginning to the end, I will definitely hold it up and finish it!

The content contains a lot of memes, mixed with a small amount of plot. The world view is grand and expressive. The main story is dark and has some contrast. It is funny in daily life, the main story is serious, and the characters are vivid? (Crazy), daily descriptions often end with a bunch of jokes. The amount of information is actually quite low, but this is not a big problem in daily life. The main thing is that if you can understand the jokes, the paragraphs and comments in each chapter are very interesting. Good looking 2333

The logical thinking of this book is very good. When he introduces the story of My Little Pony, he also provides detailed supplements to My Little Pony's world view. The protagonist was originally a human, but he didn't know the plot of the My Little Pony animation, so he was able to integrate his feelings and thoughts into the story very well. At the same time, I also discovered my own way of thinking as a human being, and saw through the retirement strategies of big companies. It is a good choice for babies who want to watch a sane protagonist.

The recommendation is quite good. It has multiple female protagonists and characters that I like. There are some plot points but you have to pay attention to the ratio of the plot to the plot. The plot is slow but not bad.

Very good, very well written, abstract and abstract, and the story is quite reasonable. The following is just my personal opinion. The emotional line is too long, it is not unsightly, and the emotions of people who are on the right path have generally increased. Recently, I feel that there is no progress, like a straight line, and there is a little bit of running account.

I want to see if there can be more emotional lines in the post. When will the plot reach the human part? I hope that the next plot will be the ultimate Shang Yang Shura field where Twilight Yue super evolves into Green Yue (hehehe, it is always so happy to persecute Twilight Madness!

I like it very much. The protagonist is made of magic and can transform into wings and horns [Adoration][Adoration]

Taihao watched it! Taihao read it~(˶╹ꇴ╹˶)~, thank God for allowing me to try pony fanfiction for the first time "this year" and I saw such a beautiful book that suits my taste! It's simply the love letter of my dreams! (Excited jpg) Ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah, so happy ~, uh ah, cheating! I want it, I want it, I want it too! I still want to read, I don't want to sleep, I don't want to start school, damn it, how can I practice it! ! ! Woohoo, school starts in three days, what should I do! ? Hateful! There is too much homework, and I am already out of breath. Well, I can only get there by holding this book in my hand, as long as I can get there, no~~~~~! The monitor rejected me, no, everything became empty talk, I didn't, I couldn't, learn from it, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

From the author's first chapter to the present, I am very satisfied. It ranks among the top three My Little Pony fan works I have read. The jokes are also very good [laughing] and I feel that the author can write a thousand chapters at this pace.

It's good-looking, has lots of jokes, and has a protagonist who can be like my mother. However, the main plot has been pushed too slowly. We have only reached Chrysalis' wedding so far. I'm really convinced. The author should push the main plot quickly! ! ! ! ! !

It's not bad. I like this kind of abstract communication among all members. Maybe it's because our club doesn't like all kinds of messy exchanges. And there are currently no scenes of repeatedly overturning in one place (yes, Comet Duoduo, I'm talking about you). It's relatively warm, and it's good to take a few bites to remove corpse spots.

It looks good, update soon, hurry, hurry, hurry (｢･ω･)｢Hey Have you begun to enter the mystery of the protagonist's life experience? I'm really looking forward to it. As the name suggests, what kind of storm will it bring?

This is the best My Little Pony fanfic I have ever read! ! ! It's like no other, it's really great, but it's a pity that there are too few chapters! ! ! ! ! ~~~! ~! ! ! ~! ~! ~~~~! ~...~! ! ~! ! ~!

As a new book, the writing is good, but the first 100 chapters have discouraged many people. There are too many bad jokes in the front, and the plot has not changed much. The composition of this book is probably 60% text, 10% bad jokes, and 30% inexplicable narration. But it is worth reading, the updates are stable, and the author will also listen to readers' suggestions. There are too many words about "water" and I can't stand it anymore. I saved more than 100 chapters. I originally planned to read it, but it turned out that there were 20 or 30 chapters of water on the black crystal. But based on the number of words, I still give it 5 stars for Persistence.

It's a very good book. It seems like it should have a score of 8.4 Or higher at the moment. I just feel like it's missing something, so I still can't give it a score of 9.0. Since the score is too low now, I will give Manxing Lala points.

It's fun to watch. It has a lot of crazy parts, lots of emotional lines, there's a knife, and there's no jumping plot (I'm looking forward to it). If nothing else, I will finish it.

It looks good. I love watching it. I hope more people will watch it and I will update it a lot. I will recommend it.

It's good-looking, I love watching it, and it's suitable for babies of all ages. Most of the plots are original, and the process is fun, but it's just a bit of a struggle for Ziyue [please savor it carefully] The author has his own world view, and it is not dramatic. It is very interesting. Pain is an irrational thing, and love is a blessing. I particularly like the part. I hope the next plot will get better and better, come on, author! [Laughing out loud]

I'm too lazy to say anything more, just to read it, the designs that are mostly original and occasionally attached to the main line are very suitable for my current taste. The author's fits of madness from time to time made me see the shortcomings of AI.

It's pretty good among the My Little Pony fics I've read.

Wonderful writing and excellent plot. It's hard to imagine that such a beautiful book is free [Blow kiss]

The beginning is very good, I hope there are more female protagonists, I really like Pinkie Pie [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

The writing is very good, but the progress is a bit slow. It could use more parallel worlds and gangsters to speed up the progress of the protagonist's relationship. The daily life is a bit boring, so give me some sweets.