Zhumenxi

The writing is very good, but it's a pity that the original author is such a talented person [crying]

The writing is quite good, and the protagonist becomes more interesting after integrating his original soul. Although the part of the soul of modern people is not pleasing to the eye, and what I wrote above even affects the perception a bit, the protagonist does need to grow up and needs a reason to gradually integrate into the times. It is impossible to say that a modern person will somehow perfectly fit in with the life of an ancient family. Although the writing at the beginning is a bit confusing and affects the reading, it is reasonable and reasonable, and it gradually starts to look good later on, and it is meaningful. It is one of the few good articles.

It's great. It has a rich family background under feudal ethics. The description is great👍🏻It's rare to find someone I like.

Reading this book during the fishing period during the exam week instantly makes people forget about boring books and immerse themselves in this world. Different from other systematic and templated ancient texts, this book has a unique writing style and a narration that makes people think about it while reading. While reading, I was also curious about how the author accumulated such a vast literary reserve. When creating, one has to rely on the works of predecessors or chance encounters with masterful hands. No matter which one, the attainments are unmatched. So why don't you update hundreds of times a day, and submit the finished version? Since you, Xie Daolin, are like an oriole in a golden cage, you should give the readers the best to feast on. [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile]

Those maids were written too much [crying][crying] Half of the chapter was filled with them. I almost skipped them and read them all in one day. There will be less in the later chapters. Do a good job in your career and put more ink on conflicts and events. They are so bland and the descriptions are great [Send my heart][Send my heart]

The reason for the low rating may be that fast-paced, refreshing articles in vernacular are more suitable for Tomato. Come on, the author, as long as he keeps updating and there are no particularly bad points at the end, I will keep pursuing it.

This book is very interesting so far. The author's writing skills are very solid. If I follow this pace, I will be enlightened sooner or later. I hope the author can persevere and have a promising future [Love]

This book has a very good starting point. Whether it is the study of historical materials and allusions, the understanding of Confucian culture, or the political game in the court, it has a complete system.

It lacks a bit of elegance at the beginning, but it is still very exciting later on. The background of the family's resistance to the general trend is also very historically involved. The research is detailed and the political appeal is self-consistent. It is not logically perfect but it all comes together. I give it full marks.

"The Interpretation of Flaws and Advantages in Ancient Rhythm" "Zhumen Opera" is like a slowly unfolding ancient scroll, outlining the unique style of the eldest son of the Xie family in Chen County in the long river of history. The author's writing skills are truly amazing. The prose is beautiful and elegant, like pearls falling on a plate, and every chapter is full of poetry. When describing the protagonist's talents and state of mind, the delicate brushstrokes seem to penetrate the page, allowing readers to truly feel his emotions, anger, sorrow, and joy. For example, when describing the scene of the protagonist reciting poems and painting at a spring gathering, "the ink rhymes with fragrance, the poetic heart is lingering, as if a breeze is blowing through the bamboo forest, and it is full of tranquility." A few words create an elegant and ethereal atmosphere, making the reader feel like they are immersed in it. However, the work also has some glaring shortcomings. First of all, the description of the harem is too long and takes up a lot of pen and ink. Although these contents show the life style of ancient families to a certain extent, they are too long and trivial, which makes the main line of the story blurred and makes readers easily feel tired during the reading process. Secondly, the male guards around the protagonist are almost uncharacterized. In ancient times, the eldest son of a family was often accompanied by guards with strong martial arts skills. They were not only the protagonist's safety, but also played an important role in his social interactions and actions. The lack of descriptions of them makes the background and character relationships of the entire story seem incomplete. In addition, the characters are relatively single. Although the protagonist has outstanding advantages, he lacks versatility and growth and changes. It is difficult for readers to see his inner struggle and personality changes when facing major challenges, which to a certain extent affects the appeal and depth of the work. Overall, "Jumen Opera" has its own unique charm, but it also needs to be improved in content structure and characterization to become a better work.

Seeing the fusion of the male protagonist's modern soul and the original protagonist's soul, the author is really knowledgeable and it gave me chills down my back. On the contrary, I think this part is wonderful. The author uses his pen to reflect the "cannibalism" of feudal society, reflecting that the people at the bottom were not human beings but "cattle" of the feudal dynasty. The children of high-ranking families were also just parts that kept the family running. Everyone can be said to be "human", but they are also not real people. Just like the male protagonist can't tell who he is after the fusion, because everyone has lost themselves under the suppression of so-called etiquette and has become a symbol of their own identity.

The writing is very good. It feels like the author has just gone to school or finished reading. His mind is full of ideas and his thinking is clear. I hope to keep it up. Come on⛽⛽⛽⛽

Come on, the author hopes that the quality of the work will get better and better, and also hopes to give the four maids a good ending. I hope that the update progress can be maintained, come on!

This is a rare good book. The author has profound writing style and quick thinking. I hope you can stick to it to the end.

The author's writing style is exquisite, and he describes the confrontation in the temple, the life of the aristocratic family and the details of maintaining the family very well. His writing skills are solid, especially the writing style can withstand scrutiny! The author must keep updated!

As far as I can see, this book is quite good, but I don't understand why the score is so low. At first, a modern person travels through ancient times without any relevant memories. He needs to work hard to play the role of a young man from an aristocratic family, from being unfamiliar to becoming proficient. From low means to high means. As a time traveler, the protagonist is growing up very quickly. Later, the soul of the original owner became one, and he mastered the talents and learning of the original owner. The combination of all the qualifications of the protagonist and the talents and learning of the original owner has taken it to the next level. The control of the current situation, the clever use of classics and the maturity of planning and modeling. This book and the book about Noble Master of the Southern Dynasties are both good books in this series.

Excellent article, if it is not impetuous, it will not be a good article. The pace is quite good and the plot is also good. It is worth mentioning that the author has a professional background? Or I just checked the information myself and figured it out.

IQ online. The problem with the book is that in many places it talks too much. The people watching were confused and confused. Idiom seems, seems, rule, just right. Check and balance these things. There is too much ink in the subtleties. To sum up, putting it into perspective makes me feel that I am full of calculations and petty. The layout is not big. But compared with other books on Tomato, it is already considered a high-quality product.

Tomato is of rare high quality, beautiful and unconventional. You can enjoy reading dozens of chapters. Good luck, author!

First of all, the information in this book is very detailed. It can be seen that the author is very skilled and has done a lot of work. The only thing worthy of discussion is that the male protagonist seems to have been completely assimilated into ancient society, much like a family gentleman. He does not have the interest of modern people who travel back in time? But maybe this is also the author's great realistic skills. Overall, it's pretty good.

This book is a bit slow to pick up. I am currently reading chapters 44 to 45. I particularly like the plot where the souls finally merge completely. It is amazing.

It looks good and feels very real [heartfelt], and it depicts the cruelty of reality, which is the same in ancient and modern times.

To be honest, there are not many such retro traditional historical officialdom novels on Tomato. Due to the subject matter, the protagonist cannot be as "free" as in other novels, and his words and deeds are subject to many restrictions. This may affect the rating.

I like the style of this book. Although it involves a lot of citations from classics when it comes to knowledge, it takes a lot of effort to read. But thanks to the author's extensive search for information, I also have the opportunity to get a glimpse of the ancients. Whether it is correct or not is not important. Future generations have their own views and cannot completely reproduce them. However, there are one or two novelties that are enough to pass the boring time.

I am really used to reading thousands of pre-made novels written by Fan Que. The author's "Zhu Men Xi" made me feel like I couldn't stop reading all night long. The only shortcoming is that there are too few novels now. I hope the author will continue to work hard. At the same time, I also hope that everyone will support the author a lot, so that everyone can continue the brilliance until the end.

Real fairy grass, the beauty and exploitation of the ancient nobles are all written down, and it is inspiring! Nice! The style has been maintained to this day!

It's very beautiful. Why aren't there many people watching it?

There's not much nonsense in this book, and it's a lot better than the previous one.

Quoting a lot of allusions, in addition to books such as "Book of Rites", there are also Taoist books such as "Yunji Qizhu", which shows the author's profound literary background, and does not always feel a bit showy.

Very well written. I rarely see such beautiful historical articles on Tomato. It can be seen that the author really has something. The articles and classics described are generally rarely studied by people.