Bengtie: Stuck Character, Non-Existent Envoy

It's a very good book. It's the Beng Tie fanfic I've read the most recently. There are three points that attract me more: 1. The plot does not follow the plot completely, but has its own micro innovations. For example, I briefly wrote about the space station, and the main character acting alone during Yaliluo gave me new ideas. 2. The writing is very smooth and the plot advances quickly. There is a clear division between different personalities and between games and reality. 3. Some details show that the author has put a lot of thought into them. For example, the exchange with Botio Ranpo made people smile. Moreover, the design of the protagonist's four-star card and the light chasing are also very appropriate. I feel that it is the level of four-star cards in the game that maintains their value. I really care about this, and I really can't stand the card design in fan fiction where the four-star protagonist is better than the five-star card, and the five-star protagonist is better than the six five-star cards, which has expanded to the 4.0 Version.

Aunt Jizi, I want to be the strongest pioneer [eat melon] [eat melon]

It's very good to watch, the main character is just like mhy's new character, the other characters' personalities are not broken, nor are they overly funny, the plot is reasonable, it's really good! ! ! Big cheers for the author!

When will Huang Quan appear [smile] By the way, will Huang Quan follow the protagonist and join the Star Train [smile]

Is this recommended on the Internet? Suddenly many people saw it and gave themselves a five-star rating.

It's very interesting, but there are a lot of game plots and live broadcast plots. The characters in the game speak and use "", which affects the reading sense. According to the writing style, it is definitely more than this. However, most of the others are live broadcasts of the main game. Here, it feels like the main live broadcast of the secondary game. After all, the double quote The problem with the number, and the game plot is more than the live broadcast plot. When a PV is released, the PV content and the barrage are mixed together. You can say that when watching the PV, the video barrage is watched together, but have you ever thought that when I read a novel, it is impossible to watch this one and the next one at the same time? There are also some details, such as when Kakamu came, Naraku realized that the Black Tower might have recruited her, but thought it was his own illusion. Doesn't she have the power of memory? He also copied Jing Yuan's memory, so why can't he check his own memory? Everything else is good. As long as you can ignore the influence of the double quotes and barrage, this book is still very good.

It's good-looking, and the protagonist is very vivid, a mature bug who is led bad by Botio and talks dirty.

The characters' personalities are really similar. By the way, I'm looking forward to posting about Huangquan and Fulibasi, Ya 1

Himeko: Freebas (Naraku) My journey is over. From now on, it will be yours. Now it's up to me to teach you the last lesson of pioneering.

Not bad, but I hope I don't have cp

It's quite good. It can be seen that the author is really careful. He reads the paragraphs and comments and corrects any mistakes in time. The characters so far are very consistent with the personality, and there is no OOC, which is very rare. The private design is also very novel, and I look forward to polishing the subsequent plot. The story can't be too bland, and there can be more plot designs. For example, the plot of Naraku "killing" Furibus in Pinoconi is pretty good, with a sense of impact and freshness. But this also tests the author's brain. I really can't think of a perfect plot, so I can write more, post it! ! ! I like this. I'm looking forward to the author's story. By the way, I want to see the persecution of Prison Yang. Don't go too far. Just have some fun. Let Naraku feel oppressed occasionally and be cool. It doesn't matter if he acts silly on the outside at ordinary times (*σ´∀`)σ. I want to see everyone know that Naraku bears the erosion of nothingness alone. Love Naraku♥ for me, and I want to post it!

You can add an easter egg. There is Huangquan in the team. Naraku and Himeko will be included in Walter later. Walter said they are so similar.

It's not that I don't watch, but I watch slowly, slowly, carefully, and in a rhythmic manner. Let those who are prepared to read it first, let those with a mature mentality read it first, and only then can we look at it first and then look at it, and we must look at the specific situation in detail. It is not a blind look, but a precise look, a scientific look, an efficient look, and a strategic look. Let people who know how to write participate in reading, let people who are good at summarizing take the lead in reading, use the power of wisdom to assist reading, and at the same time, take into account special circumstances and flexibly read.

So far, it's very good. The existence of the time traveler is just a tool man, similar to Hei Xi's existence, and the sense of existence is not very strong. Of course, I came here for Kiana's peer and the master of the dead water suit. If I really want the time traveler to take his place, I will run away [laughing] Also, the live broadcast sometimes makes me feel a little out of touch with the original atmosphere, but it completely follows the plot and feels a little less interesting. I don't know how to describe it at the moment, but it is still very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard [sending heartfelt wishes]

Very good, very good. The identity of the protagonist is very special. The two protagonists are one inside and one outside, instead of becoming the second personality of the original character. It's just that Naraku's appearances and highlights are too few. What a ring grandfather.

I rarely read Bengtie fanfics, because most of them give me the feeling of going through the main plot again, but this one is different. While passing the main plot, I also wrote my own stuff. Overall, it's pretty good [Chigua]

So good! The plot is reasonable and the characters are distinct, and the roles of other characters are not weakened for the sake of the protagonist. The interactions are also very interesting. It can be regarded as one of the few Bengtie boutiques in Tomatoes [Like]

I finally saw the peer of Kiana from Bengtie [crying]

I love watching it, but most of the dialogue uses "", which is quite uncomfortable. In addition, there is a lot of direct explanatory text to supplement the settings, which is not so smooth at this point. The plot is excellent and the ideas are good. It's worth reading.

Well, I saw a cat and a bug and I came in [thinking] Also, Qiyi is real

It's pretty good, but there are no knives, and it's a bit sparse, and not much more.

Book reviews that are true and objective, with multi-dimensional descriptions, clear structure, and clear content can help more book friends. Abba, Abba, Abba, Abba. I don't want to comment, because if you want to evaluate this book, it may be a bit controversial. In short, I think it's okay for me, and I may read it for a long time.

Very beautiful, equivalent to Qibao, the same body of Bengtie

Therefore, it is said that Naraku relies on reality to suppress nothingness. The longer he is in the game, the weaker his connection with reality. He needs to rely on attention in reality to increase the connection. In the article, Naraku said that once he confesses, he will feel that the world will become illusory and he will lose his own meaning. Can it be understood that Naraku is too close to the game and not too close to reality?

Very nice^ω^ @ Tower Isn't there a book circle in this book?

It's good-looking, very good, and very interesting, but it's too little. I'll tie the author up and update it hard [angry]

I started watching it a long time ago. I personally think it's pretty good, but Naraku's appearances are a bit less. I don't want to see the knife, the ending will give me a hard slap on my face [laughs]

The writing is really good and very beautiful. The author must work hard and survive (I gave four stars because all the ones that gave five stars have been removed from the shelves, and there is a shadow [crying]) って!

Bold assumptions and good writing style, a high-quality fanfic in Tomato

It's good to watch, but I don't know why it helps me sleep (not boring). It's okay during the day, but once I read it at night, my eyelids started to twitch after reading only a few pages [face covering] Maybe it has something to do with staying up late recently.