Are You Crazy?! The Immortal Maiden I Was Supposed to Flirt With Is Coming at Me with a Sword

Let me make a comprehensive analysis based on my experience of reading more than 100 chapters (must read by the author): This book is indeed good in writing and has quite ups and downs in the plot. If it is well written, it will be a good novel, but it has many shortcomings. I would like to make some comments: 1. Collapse of combat power. The demon in the early stage of becoming a god was actually unable to suppress the other three female protagonists, who are also of the top bloodline. Logically speaking, cultivation should be supreme, but Huan Die, who was in the early stage of Nascent Soul, was actually able to fight evenly with Yaoyao, and when playing the black mysterious man with more than 100 cards, he used 4 top bloodlines to play with crazy consequences. It stands to reason that at least he could have been seriously injured but only suffered some minor scars. This is definitely not normal 2 ( There are too many emotional lines and too messy, it's always a chase, and it always feels like there's no love in daily life.) Especially just wanting to complete the system's tasks is a bit robotic, running for his life crazily and being yandere, but in another sense, it's also a way of loving you very deeply. Let's not say anything else. At the very least, we need to change it, at least let the protagonist eat two, or let the protagonist take them all in, and let them fight. I think the harem would be interesting if this were the case, and it would not lead to constant hunting in the Shura field every day. In this case, the novel would become boring. The author can try to write some other flavors, (such as sweet daily love), which is also consistent with the name of the book. Here, I give the author a five-star review, and I hope the author can read my suggestions (the author will reply when he sees it)

It's pretty good, but I don't want to keep it up. I'm curious if the author should include yourself in it 😏 How many female protagonists are there in When to Eat Meat?

I feel that the current plot is a bit off topic and has become a traditional cultivation plot. On behalf of teasing, on behalf of teasing, I think the system should take over the task and let the protagonist do it (the previous plot is quite good). If I were to accept some flirting missions in the secret realm below, I would have nothing to say 🤔

The plot is quite good, but the male protagonist is a little too aggrieved 🤦 If not saying that he is invincible in the modern era, at least he has to eat one [pout] Please promise me when the male protagonist will eat it. Kick me. I can't read anymore.

Interesting but okay

Not bad, just a little bit toxic, I recommend you give it a look

It looks good, come on, the author is great 😄

It's not bad. I'm a sixth-grade graduate and can read more than 30 chapters at a time.

It's so beautiful, I won my heart [admiration]

Did I read it wrong? Why do I feel like everything was rewritten on the 15th? [What] To be honest, at this point in the book, some of the descriptions of the five people are too much and too repetitive. I don't know if I thought wrong. I feel that the author may not know how to write it down, because the current conflict between the five people has taken too much space, and it has been covered in the previous few chapters; I hope it is just me who is wrong.