Stealing the Title of Duke, Starting from the White Horse Righteousness

Yesterday I read the front part, and there are indeed many problems. I admit it, there is nothing to avoid. The most mistakes corrected by the brothers were in the first thirty chapters. Thank you again [laughs]. Let me explain again, because it was my first time to write a book, I wrote it intermittently for half a year. I only got up the courage to publish it on September 2nd. Then because I didn't understand it, I wrote 90,000 words in one go. As a result, the verification period was immediately passed. None of the previous readers had accumulated anything. The verification period was terrible. Because I took the time to write it after get off work and didn't have much time to polish it, so please bear with me as I have many questions [laughs]

It's pretty good for this type of novel. What is rare is the combination of famous ancient Eastern troops and Western magical characters and races. This is a relatively novel writing direction, and the content is meaningful and not just made up. The author should have done serious homework on this type of historical materials. The story develops and the plot line is also very smooth. People can follow the text to describe the entire plot line and it will be presented in front of them. Occasionally there are foreshadowings. I hope the author sticks to it

It's quite interesting. I forgot to comment after reading this. According to the author's thinking, there should be a scene similar to the revival of spiritual energy in the future. However, I suggest that the author can push it to the point where the continent where the protagonist is located is unified or after occupying half of the area, otherwise it will be completely carried out. There are many changes, because the protagonist's basic base is not yet stable. If there is no continent as the basic base, some changes are prone to occur. Some people will also say that the protagonist of this book does not even have the same place and starts causing trouble. There are also too few soldiers.

The author's writing is quite good, and it can be considered a good book. However, there is a problem. The Western aristocratic system determines that the nobles are a group of egoists who put their own family interests first. It is difficult to produce loyal ministers like those in the book, such as the fourth-order knight who was defeated and committed suicide in the Grand Canyon. The author shaped the nobles into traditional Chinese loyal ministers and good generals.

The subject matter is novel, which is also the main selling point, and the writing style has room for improvement. Then, when writing a hegemony article, if you don't plan to write a clear emotional line, you should try to reduce the description of 'flirting' and the like.

Come on, there are not many good-looking lord stories anymore. They are either natural disasters of the undead or all-female military units. The most exciting thing about Western fantasy stories is to conquer alien races and coexist with all races.

Very good looking, fighting style, not laggy

The author can write the protagonist as a dragon knight,

A very good Western fantasy novel. If you are short on books, you can read it.

Very good, my type

No big brother, you only update two pages a day? Do you think it's enough?

The writing is wonderful, the thinking is smooth, and the ideas are very good.

It's well written and doesn't drag on. It's interesting. There are 78 chapters unread. Click on the table of contents to see that it has been updated continuously for 91 days.

The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work

Yes, the plot is fascinating

Come on, it looks great, but you still need to do some farming, otherwise you will be tired from watching the constant struggle for hegemony.

You can read it when you're short of books, so far it's okay

The writing is very good and reasonable. There are basically no surprises, but it is still relatively short.

A must-have five-star support, it looks great

It's well written, but the names and dialogues always make people laugh. I always feel like I'm not watching a Western fantasy but an Eastern fantasy [face covering]

A very good book about Ten Thousand Races Struggle for Hegemony

Very good combination of Chinese and Western.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! !

Very good, okay, come on

Pretty good, come on

Not bad, basically objective

I have the feeling that after watching "Beast's Blood Boils" before, the author's imagination has a bit of that meaning.

I think it's okay. Please support me.

Generally speaking, it's pretty good. Give me some insight.

Pretty good, pretty good