The Girl I Picked up Late at Night Turned Out to Be a Treasure?

As a pure love story, this novel has a few minor flaws in my opinion. The author arranges for the heroine to have a boy as her deskmate. Since the male protagonist and the female protagonist are not in the same school, the author probably arranged the tablemates to take care of the female protagonist and promote the development of the plot, but later it felt that there was no need to mention him from time to time in the school; there was a man named Lin at school who bullied the female protagonist and forcibly held the female protagonist's hand. This kind of touch was not necessary; the female protagonist's father has a low emotional intelligence and did not deliberately understand what happened at first and took her away by force. The male protagonist helped his daughter, so you should be polite to the male protagonist at least). The overall plot is okay. The guy surnamed Lin mentioned in the article that the ending was very tragic, and the heroine probably didn't swallow his anger later. The heroine's father reflected that he was too impulsive at the beginning, and his character was that of a slave to his daughter. Because his wife has passed away, he cares about the heroine very much, and his attitude toward the hero has improved slightly since then. After all, he is a new author, so it is normal to have some minor flaws. It is great to be able to write like this, and it still has great potential. I hope the author will pay more attention to the details and continue to work hard. The author listened very well and corrected the minor flaws I listed in a timely manner. I hope the author will continue to work hard and give me a five-star review! [Laughs]

This is the author's first creation. Please forgive me for any shortcomings. The author usually needs to go to school and does not have enough time to write novels, so the work will have slight flaws in the details, but I sincerely hope that readers can point out the shortcomings, and I will make corrections in time [laughs]

It's pretty good, pretty sweet [savour it carefully] It's a good work Just like the title, Treasure Sweet Articles, there are other places where the language is handled appropriately [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]

Brother, please, please update another chapter! Please, brother, I can't live without more updates, brother! Let's add another chapter! As long as it can be updated, I will do anything! Brother, please add another chapter! [Cry][cry][cry]

Come on, I mainly want to see the yandere transformation in the later stages [laughing evilly]

It's a very good book\^O^/It made me laugh in the middle of the night so much that my stomach hurt, my duodenum cramped, and my calf was broken.

Very nice, I wish there were more of them.

Yandere lovers can check it out

This is a pure treasure novel! [Laugh]

I read the revised version. I haven't read the first version. It's okay.

It's pretty good, the logic is okay, and the emotional description is also good. It's a good work.