The Start Is Tainted? I Awaken the Sun Dasheng Sequence!

As a bookworm, this is one of the few stories that I can continue to read. It is very deep and appealing. This story really made me see a living character like the Monkey King. Of course, if you just like reading novels, this may not be suitable for you. This is a story that needs to be read carefully.

What can I say? It's not bad but the pace is a bit slow. I've read all the more procrastinating ones, and I've also read cool articles. The emphasis on Rotten Tomatoes is a bit different. Although there are golden fingers, your emphasis is obviously not big. It should be better in the later stage. Remember to fill in the holes, don't dig or bury them.

This book is worth it! It's not a fast food novel, but the protagonist has to work hard to gain faith. Everyone thinks that White Glove is an actor, but they don't know that he is famous and capable. The main character is caught off guard. It's beautiful. I love watching it! [Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts]#This novel is so beautiful#I haven't read such a simple and unpretentious novel for a long time #This book is worth it

Indeed, in the eyes of many people, the protagonist of this book does not look like our stereotype of an undercover agent and is sometimes quite nervous. But we have read too many books about invincibility at the beginning. These books are like an assembly line. The author's protagonist gradually grows up, becomes humane, and develops divinity. Do you want to be immortal in the face of such a disaster? Just like those who are invincible to the world at the beginning and soon invincible to the universe? Take your time and read it slowly. There is no need to spoil it. The characters have their own meaning of existence, and so does the setting. No good book is really exciting and resonant throughout.

It's very interesting. Compared with most fast-paced novels nowadays, this rhythm has just enough foreshadowing. When I saw the heroine, I was also impressed by the author's writing style. Different from the cookie-cutter routines of other articles, this author's writing is very good. There are so many forced lyrics in the later plots that I even wonder if it's just for the sake of word count, especially when I use songs to express my emotions more than once.

The storyline is good. As for the first volume, the author's writing power is slightly lacking. Personally, I feel that a small part of the description and plot are not well written, and sometimes it is a bit confusing, so that the sensationalism is not stirred up. The fast pace of the plot is what I like about it. I hope that the more I write in the future, the better it will be. I will write it as I write it.

It is a very good book. It can be said that it is quite thoughtful among Tomato authors, but it can be seen that the writing skills are a bit lacking. The characterization is important, but it can be said that it is a bit redundant and a bit cumbersome. Come on, author, some of the foils are unnecessary. Sorry, author, I can't stand it. I feel like something is missing. I wish the author will get better and better as he writes [learned]

How to say it? As an old bookworm, this book is quite to my liking. It also has foreshadowing and tear-jerking moments. It's quite good to stop and read it when you have free time. I highly recommend it here.

It's very good. The slow-motion group portrait is indeed not like a traditional cool article, or it can't be called a cool article, but the specific writing is indeed good. Come on, author.

The plot is very good, each character is well portrayed, and the foreshadowing will lead to the emotional pull of the character who dies later. I thought that the character who will always exist like in other books will also die. This is something I did not expect. This also reflects the author's delicate description of the characters and the plot. Unlike other books, everyone knows that he wrote it to die, like a dead person. Here I would like to say to all readers: As readers, we should quietly appreciate the works presented to us by others, rather than asking others to show you what you want to see. (In vernacular, if you are so demanding, you can write it yourself and you can read it.) Come on, author!

It is a very suitable book for old bookworms (if you like to read mindless stories, you can leave). It has been laying the groundwork to describe everyone in the early stage. The characters in it are not just walk-ons. The author has given them rich colors. I rarely review a book, but this one is really good. I hope the author will not be influenced by other people. I really like it - review from a 7-year-old bookworm

I'm a huge fan, and the plot is also very good. It's not the Riddler, and it doesn't have that frustrating plot. It's also the type of duck I love to watch.

After reading it in one sitting, the writing gave me a feeling of a strange beast! I really shouldn't have such a low rating. It's just that the abuse came too quickly and I died before my feelings for the characters were fully developed. Like Mayfly, as a war fortress, a so-called secret weapon, in the end it just blocked a wave of people and died just to set off the pig's feet. Moreover, Mayfly gave me the feeling of being a passer-by. The writing of the chapters where the abyss descends is a bit messy! There are three battlefields in total. The other two battlefields should not be described very much, as if to show off the writing style, and then create a big battlefield atmosphere, and write out everyone's perspective, which is to foreshadow the abuse. Then I don't know who to substitute [face covering]. Generally speaking, those few battlefields are just discarded and tasteless! Of course, the world view, characters, writing style, and logic of this book are all good, but the writing pace is too hasty. I want to write a cool article, and then add a little abuse, which will always make it look different [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]. This is just a personal suggestion. I really like reading this novel, otherwise I would be too lazy to comment so much, and my expressive ability is not very good. . Anyway, that's what it means! ! Also, the author, please bring back the pig's feet as soon as possible [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry], I want to see how Aunt Zi and Guan Mei react when they see him [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

It can be seen that the author is very careful, but the character creation, fighting scenes and plot arrangements are too deliberate and dull. Come on, author! Although I can't stand it, it's already very good if I write it carefully.

The author takes typos in the article very seriously and responds to readers' questions seriously. Moreover, I think this book is really good to read. It should be said that I basically read it at a slightly slower pace, so I think it is good to read and highly recommended.

There is a very poisonous point in this book. I suggest that everyone use this poisonous point to criticize the author severely. The author must feel pressure. The biggest poisonous point is that this book cannot be updated to 100 chapters a day. Can everyone put pressure on it? In terms of content, the storyline and character descriptions are particularly good, but there are few fights in the early stage. The world view is currently quite large. I hope the author will slowly improve it and dissect the system contents one by one. Overall, this book is highly recommended.

You can give it a try. There are no bad points that you can't stand. It may not be considered a very good-looking classic book, but it is definitely not a useless book. The outline is normal and the details belong to the author's own understanding. He will also listen to the opinions of good readers. It is completely qualified to read if you are bored.

How to put it, the world view is huge, and the villain is very strong according to the current foreshadowing, but I am not a lamb waiting to be slaughtered here, there are many forces, everyone has their own beliefs, and they are working hard for the goal. The protagonist is not invincible, there are many regrets, God is just a path, God is just a synonym for strength, just treat this as a high-level martial arts, and slowly develop it, the character has its own personality , but currently only a few characters have their own chapters, and most of the story is told from the perspective of the protagonist. Most of the early stage is about the setting, so the pace is a bit slow. Also, the protagonist is a semi-hot-blooded male protagonist. Sometimes he will say some hot-blooded words, but don't worry, it is used to promote the plot and sell foreshadowing. If you really don't like it, just quit. Overall, it is a masterpiece [OK]

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Mountain 108: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good! I haven't been able to find any comments for a long time.

Chinese language question: What does the clown refer to in the text? 1: Protagonist, implying that the protagonist understands the righteousness, but secretly insists on saving the common people... Two: Refers to all the unknown spiritual sealers like the protagonist, who guard the lights of thousands of families... Three: refers to the author, which is a true portrayal of the author's heart, showing the author's sincere heart that he wants to help the world and serve the motherland [love] Reader's perspective: The three views are super correct, the plot has ups and downs, the emotions are appropriate, and it is suspenseful. It has the emotions that keep readers reading [Like][Like][Like][Like]

The setting is very good. Many readers lose their patience halfway through reading and start to feel bad. This book should not only be a 7.3, It should be a 9!

To be honest, the author's writing is very, very, very good. In my mind, this book should be around 9.3 Or 9.2. I have read many of Tomato's books. Some of them were recommended by friends, some I wanted to read myself, and some were bought offline by friends. I have finished reading them. The plot and content are very attractive to me. The author is also relatively good. Tomato is a book that is very popular, and some of it is unexplainably popular. But those books have higher ratings than this book. I don't know why. When reading this book, you need to be a little more thoughtful, and there are quite a lot of puzzles. I like it quite a lot. Many of the sentences in it are also very good. It grows slowly, just like the author said. If you are invincible at the beginning, what's the point of reading it? The protagonist is not too dependent on the system and his thinking is very active, so I give him a 5-star review. I want to say to the author: update faster. As long as there are people who support, then write according to your own ideas. Just take your opinions into consideration and think about it later. Moreover, every character under the author has some physical emotions, and the description is very good. We can imagine what kind of people they are through the book, and the battle scenes are also very well described. You can almost imagine it just by thinking about it. How fierce and tragic the fight will be afterward. Finally, please come on, author.

The writing is very good and the writing is clear. It is a book worth buying. But after each paragraph, there will be a chat with the reader. I personally don't like it. I hope the author can add a reminder. Skip the chat chapter, purely personal opinion.

As soon as you turn the first page, you will be dragged into a whole new world by the author's delicate and powerful words. Different from the books on the market that pursue fast-paced plots, this book is like a patient old friend, using gentle but profound narration to unfold the people and events in the story before the readers' eyes. The book's portrayal of the characters' hearts is particularly moving. The protagonist's struggle and growth in difficult situations are not deliberately sensational, but they can always touch people's hearts in subtle ways - maybe it's a line he utters to himself while sitting alone late at night, or maybe it's the slight trembling of his fingertips when faced with a choice. These real details make the characters seem to jump out of the page and become a living presence around us. The thoughts about ideals, companionship and self-reconciliation hidden behind the story are more like a beam of light shining into those confused moments in life, making people unable to help but stop and re-examine their own hearts after reading. The author's writing style is both poetic and pyrotechnic. When describing the flowers in the alleys in spring, the words are full of life; when describing the fireworks in the market, people can smell the aroma of the food. This relaxed rhythm of text makes the reading process a kind of enjoyment. It will not be tiring due to being too obscure, nor boring due to being superficial. Put down the phone, the sky outside the window has darkened, but my heart is full of warmth and determination. This book is not only a book worth reading, but also a gift that can be collected. No matter when you open it, you can draw the courage and strength to face life from it. [Stare]

Regarding the death of the characters in the novel in the early reading, since ancient times, there has been no bloodless resistance war, and there are no unnecessary sacrifices. The fortress battle in this book clearly describes the heroic sacrifices, which can inspire the readers' feelings about their family and country. There is a battle of blood and tears in the front, and the peace of harmony behind. It further highlights the cruelty of war and the hard-won peace. When you and I are reading the novel, perhaps some countries in real life are experiencing war, the death of relatives, etc. This novel is quite good, really

Thoughts after reading: 1: Overall, it is a very good book. I read some of the reviews and felt that the male protagonist is already a god. Why not just become invincible? However, I think that since what everyone wants to read is the exciting feeling of pleasure, they should not ask for invincibility from the beginning. If there is no dullness, how can it be intense when the climax comes. 2: The characters all have their own stories and thoughts. I feel that the characters are brought to life without too much carelessness about the male protagonist. If you like the quality of the plot, I think it is worth watching. Disadvantages: 1: I think it's easy to get confused if you don't look carefully at the part where the male protagonist talks to himself after a mental breakdown. I think the author could add something like personality one and two. Otherwise, if you are listening to the book, it will be easy to understand this part. 2: The overall world structure can be added to the plot of the story. For example, someone explains to the male protagonist what is going on in this world, how many countries there are in total, how many cities there are in China, etc. (Maybe the author said it but I didn't pay attention) 3: The meaning and function of some departments can actually be told through the mouths of the characters in the book. I think no one will read it if it is told in a separate chapter. Expectations for later plot: I think the author can allow the male protagonist to continue to maintain the previous identities and use smoke bombs on the enemies. At the same time, the author can also make the plot more dramatic and multi-faceted. Then the identity of the male protagonist Gu Ming and his original name can be merged, or the two identities can continue to be extended, but the male protagonist's identities are too many, and the author is afraid that the writing will be confusing, so I still recommend merging them @Nine Levels of Thinking

It's a pretty good novel. Come on, if you can or have time in the follow-up, I hope the author will mark who is who in each god. After all, most people don't know about Western gods [face covering] [face covering]

The writing is great, but some people always feel that the setting here is not revealed enough and the plot is too vague. This led the author to reveal a small amount of content that did not affect the development of the novel along the outline for the sake of livelihood, but it still made me very unhappy. But if you ignore this point (this part can be skipped in the book, but I didn't react at the time. The solution is to jump to the next chapter immediately after seeing the author complaining about these things.) The author writes very well, and the writing style makes me feel comfortable to read. It is not embarrassing (I am embarrassed). The content echoes well. The only bit of poison is seeing Zi Liqing's family affairs, but the poem at the end brought my interest back to a high point. As for the knife, this is not a sweet or cool article. The pollution system is similar to Cthulhu. Do you want the whole article to be sans knife? What, you said the author said not to write about knives? The full text of "The Lost City of Strange Beasts" is marked as "No Knife", you can take a look. No one said a word. The above is a personal evaluation of the author's writing style, individual behavior, the knife in the article, etc., Lightly sprayed.

Generally speaking, it's pretty good. The one bad thing is that many chapters have to be forced to be sad or not to be sad at the end... How should I put it, do you care about yin? I can see that it is not easy for the author to write, so I won't give you a low score. Keep up the good work, author! (It depends on how long I have read, I don't mean to discredit the author) The more I look at the back, the more I feel a little uncomfortable. How can I put it... There are a lot of emotional scenes, a little forced friendship and love, etc. The writing is a bit middle-of-the-road. I don't say it's bad. Maybe it's because I feel a little uncomfortable watching it.

First give me a five-star review. I don't know if the author can see it, but I hope so. I have my own little opinion. First of all, this book is definitely a good novel. If you look deeper, you will find that the world view is very large and the subject matter is quite novel (although there are actually many books with similar settings). I haven't read much so far, but it is still very attractive. I look forward to whether the concept of time perspective will be added later. If so, it will be more exciting. Secondly, there are also shortcomings. The early pace is a bit slow. Considering that the author is setting up the plot reasonably to avoid too much confusion, but the foreshadowing is too tight, many new readers will not be able to see the huge worldview behind it, and it is easy to lose readers who are not interested in this kind of subject matter. Of course, this kind of foreshadowing is also very reasonable. For example, the author of the two books "Legend Administration" and "The End of Ten Days" is the author Zong Team. He is really good at writing plots such as foreshadowing and time observation. This also makes it easier for me to follow, so I am also looking forward to the subsequent plot development of this book. Finally, I would like to support the author. I have already followed this capable author. I look forward to your completion of this book and your future works.