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Well written, keep it up! Come on! Looking forward to the next article! You can indicate at the beginning of the first chapter that if you don't want to see what happened during the Chaos Period, you can go to the end of the chapter.

When do we get into the topic? It feels like it's all a commentary

It's okay, but the number of words in each chapter is a bit short.

The writing is good, but some of the descriptions could be shortened. They are too long and I think it will affect the rating. It's easy to get tired while reading. It's easy to skip chapters while reading. The author may try to improve it. The narration and some descriptions should be simpler.

Come on, come on, it's a pretty good book

Look at it. Look at it. [Like]

I just read a few chapters, why didn't I create the meridian points and Dantian?