Harry Potter: the Age of Awakening at Hogwarts

The magic power of Dali was awakened, and the awakening was forgotten and he was turned into an Obscurus. He just started doing it without saying a word [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh] As long as you say that the Obscurus is under control, forget it, you said that the Obscurus can still be saved, please respect the original work, Newt specializes in studying magical animals, and they are only separated after death. You just turned someone into an Obscurus without saying a word to anyone, and you only have ten years to live [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] The funniest thing is that Penny has to thank you for helping Dali transform into a wizard. I am really convinced. There are not many time travelers who see magic for the first time, and take the initiative to break their own prophetic vision, 6

The protagonist can turn the squib into a wizard. This setting is too big. With this ability, the protagonist is at the center of the whirlpool Either the protagonist has the entire magical world of squibs following him. A proper Demon King-level opening version. Either the protagonist is secretly abducted and turned into a wizard to build a machine, which slowly develops until another war begins. Of course, you can also choose to follow the original route to complete the level. Then after writing several years of wizard life, there was absolutely no need to include this setting. It's unnecessary.

There are reasons for the low scores, most of them are good, but the protagonist is completely ordinary, and it doesn't matter if he doesn't have rare talents. After all, there are not many rare talents, so he can tolerate it, but the protagonist has always been in a weak position. He is said to have practical talents, but this talent can't beat anyone.

Absolutely a five-star book. It combines Hogwarts and Under One Person very well. There is also the game Hogwarts Legacy. My favorite is the settings of Laotianshi and Sister Baoer. I hope there will be some domestic interactions in the future.

It's very interesting, and the main character stole Hermione, so the author added Anna to Ron! I have to say that I definitely [learned]

Why was the ancient magic gift given to Harry? The protagonist is just like a loser who just wants to learn ancient magic and requires someone to take notes.

The plot looks good, but it seems a bit involved in political games. It's like a magical story involving two countries little by little [thinking]. Seeing that the "mutual aid club" he established was suddenly dismissed by the vice president Hermione. Although I originally wanted to not participate, this was too outrageous. And what is most outrageous is that no one objects to what I have established [what]

The paragraph has too many lines! In Europe, there is no English name? So, in Europe, which name comes first, the surname or the first name? After reading the first few chapters, I thought maybe the writer is not suitable for writing Hogwarts fan fiction. You can try other types of web articles and take a look.

If you don't use your golden finger to strengthen yourself, you will be so lazy that you will be seriously injured every time, which has a high probability of hurting the source. You said it would be great if you use your own ability to perceive yourself and create a meditation method, or you might as well visit Longhu Mountain to practice the Golden Light Spell during the holidays. There are many magic methods, but they can only grow naturally, and there is no special skill to practice.

Poison, too poisonous

Starting from Chapter 129, the protagonist becomes a love brain and starts to swim, feeling like a different person.

That's ridiculous, wasn't Harry's childhood caused by Dumbledore? Who is a good person who just ignores the loss of his baby? ? Especially if you were rejected in childhood, can you avoid psychological distortion? And the protagonist is really awesome. Even if you criticize the squib, he can become a normal wizard.

How about retelling the plot of ancient magic [laughing and crying] and becoming a guardian [eating melon]

If I go back to my hometown and take a few days off, my power in the school will be gone. Knowing that the opponent is Voldemort, he indulges himself and ignores him, just like Dumbledore. Meiwa is already hostile but still indifferent, why do you think you are invincible? It feels like the whole book is just like Dumbledore, indulging his enemies to advance the plot.

Yes, it's really good-looking [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The first half is okay, but the last 80 chapters are worse than licking a dog.

Generally speaking, many routines do not work, whether it is age or magic. Can you tell me, was there a tablet computer in 1991 (I guess the author thought it had a lot of GB of memory)

I can only say that the part about the Sorting Hat was such a pity.

There is almost no pleasure, mostly due to disgust, especially after the gender reversal part.

Now it actually looks pretty good and has no poisonous points. It should be as rigorous as possible when combined with other systems.

It's pretty cool, why is the score so low?

Not bad, both inside and outside

The writing is good, keep it up [like][like]

Very good looking(¬◡¬)✧

The plot is smooth and the content is not boring

[Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] Very creative, a book worth collecting, very good!

Good, good, very good

Among the Harry Potter fans in Tomato, it is considered a very good work.

It's pretty good. Come on.

Good fan fiction