Could You Stop Shouting First?

I saw it by chance, but I didn't expect it to be taken advantage of [admiration] [laughing] The interaction between Lu Sishen and Kong Yan in the family war contains both confrontation and undercurrent tension. The secrets are revealed layer by layer, making people unable to stop watching. Although the non-Shuangjie and fake cousins ​​were a bit off-putting at first, the plot was so interesting that I kept reading. Now I want to know how the issues between them and the Lu family will be resolved in the end. I hope the author can fill in all the pitfalls so that it doesn't end badly!

It's well written, but it's not popular. Let me help you, author! Big, although it may be a bit presumptuous, I can delete it if you don't like it, although you may not see it. The story of this book is very good, with both dark and light lines. The story in the light line is very common, which is very special and very stylish. The story in the dark line is very hazy and is still in its prototype for the time being. But I don't know why, but this book gave me a feeling that all the stories happened in a small, cramped and dark space. I wonder if you can understand what I'm saying. When people read a book, they will form various pictures in their mind that fit the content of the story, but this book feels too stingy and gives people a feeling that they cannot stretch. I think some scene descriptions can be added, including descriptions of the characters' clothing, appearance, expressions, etc. This should be relatively lacking in the book. I think we can write more about light. For example, when describing a house, we can write about windows, about how light penetrates into the room and spreads on the ground, etc. This will brighten the field of vision and make the content more vivid. I'm sorry if it has caused you any trouble. It's very offensive and I'm sorry.