Hp: the Alchemical Poem of Hogwarts

I chose to read the story of my youth first. It's very interesting. Each character is well created. Nothing too OOC. The writing style is very good and the writing is smooth. It can be called a high-quality HP fanfic. After reading the story of Children, I think the heroine is very strange. You can say that she doesn't care about Snape. She is mostly the one who takes a step back when there are conflicts. You can say that she cares. She thought it was funny when Snape wore women's clothes in Lupin's class and didn't react. Sirius Black called Snape She didn't react to Snotlout. If she didn't react because it wasn't serious, then she didn't react when Snape told her that Sirius Black deliberately led him to meet werewolves and die. I really don't understand. For a normal person, she should have some reaction when someone close to her is almost killed! This plot is in Chapter 73, you can read it first, and then continue reading if you don't mind!

The relationship is progressing very quickly, and the misunderstanding is resolved decisively. The heroine is a genius alchemist and the genius potion master of Sri Lanka. They are really sweet. The progress is steady and sweet. They have been together since they were parents. They were lovers who reunited after their childhood. However, the heroine is a turbulent time and space, crossing time.

Very well written! Moreover, this year's update has just started and so many words have been updated, which is great! [Blow a kiss] See the updates in one go! The heroine here has no Eastern ancestry and is not a cultivator, and she and Snape are not in a teacher-student relationship! Isn't this the Snape fanfic I've been looking for so long? [Crying][Crying] Looking forward to the subsequent plot development [Sending my heart]

The writing is really good [heartfelt], both in terms of the grasp of the characters and the progression of the plot. The heroine Althea is particularly vivid. She seems to be living in this story, and she is perfectly integrated into the beginning and end of the story. Our male protagonist is not OOC at all. His pride, stubbornness and obsession are very consistent with the original work. I am very much looking forward to the development of the story of the child era and the pro era, especially the pro era. I am also looking forward to the author writing about how they broke up and broke up during the pro era. I am also very looking forward to how the appearance of Althea made up for the regrets of the original child era. [Sending my heart] It will be updated very quickly. It is not enough! ! !

It's really beautiful! The identity setting of this ex-girlfriend is really touching! The description of emotions is also very delicate, and there are also interspersed emotional lines from childhood, which is very rich! ! ! The author greatly appreciates the update! After finishing it, I will definitely have to play it twice.

[There are slight spoilers] A flowing plot🥺This ssoc has a very good entry point. The non-time-travel heroine (orphan from the Eagle Academy, Lily's friend) is inserted in the parent generation, but the story is set in the child generation at the beginning, so there is no need to write about how to hook up, only the rekindling of old love and the reunion😋 The part about the descendants is interspersed into the main text in the form of extras🥺I haven't read it yet, so I'll make up for it after I finish it. This book is basically not too OOC, and there is no obvious slander or academic bias. The author has given everyone's plot a he within the scope of what he can write (Hey, Nagini has lost her memory, at least she has changed back, poor Credence) There are some ggad that are not very obvious, but you can figure it out from the details🤤 Goldfinger 🈶But it's not so, it's the best that can be achieved within a reasonable plot. It made me feel so comfortable watching it. So happy (but my evaluation may be unfair, because I just read six books 💩 I immediately topped up the rating when I saw a good-looking one) Hey, the article is good but not popular, the author and the teacher are slow to update🥺The extra if line made me feel so happy and then it stopped suddenly😭😭😭😭I was so anxious

It's from the same generation, CP Si teaches that the male and female protagonists are in the same class, and the plot has been slightly adjusted. The two were in a relationship while they were in school. The female protagonist is an alchemist master, and they are both strong. But it's not a cool story, it's a coming-of-age story. It highlights that Sri Lanka's vicious tongue and stubbornness are not OOC at all. He has his own ideas and is not the kind who is forcibly influenced and then listens to the heroine. Give me a chance, come in and take a look. As the end is approaching, I'm really afraid that he'll be fooled [I'm about to cry]

It's pretty good to watch, but I can't get the point where the heroine is angry. It's a bit baffling.

It's so beautiful, with the son's period going on and the parent's period interspersed with it. I really want to watch the love between two people during the marriage era~twice a day is not enough [shy]

Very good! Like it very much!

Nice! Love is super sweet

For now, I like to watch [Sending Hearts]

Good-looking, good-looking, strong

It's really good. I saw Snape's non-ooc writings.

Good-looking, complete structure and complete content

I really like it. The writing is very detailed and the characters are very prominent [Send my heart][Send my heart]

The description of the pro-age period is so touching, and the young couple is so sweet.

It's really good. I haven't watched it for a long time. I picked it up today and wanted to check it out, but the rating was only around six points. It shouldn't be. I think it should be at least seven points. It's still very good.

Looks good! The description is very detailed!

Nice! As a critical person, I can't find any major faults! It's to my liking. There are a lot of intimate scenes and it's great! Being an adult means always doing what adults should do! !

The writing is smooth and it's a really nice book. It's much better than many books with a rating of 9 or above. It's such a pity that there aren't enough people to rate it low. When will it be updated again [crying]

It's so beautiful… The setting of the ex-girlfriend is really interesting! ! ! Teacher, please continue to update...

Very sweet! Sweet little article