Pretending to Be a Superpower with Magic Powers in the Interstellar World

It's pretty good-looking and girl-friendly. It's just too short. Currently there are 3 women and 2 men in the main cast. There's nothing spectacular about it either. I just felt that there were too many descriptions of the two men's demeanor when they were talking in the classroom with the juniors just after they woke up at the beginning of the school exam. It was a bit cumbersome to describe their demeanor in half a sentence. I suggest the author streamline the description of those demeanors. Everywhere else is fine. I'll wait until the article is more informative before commenting.

It looks good, the protagonist is well designed and has a great personality, the friends all have their own characteristics, and several girls have already formed a bond (... This is an adjective for the second grade)! A small team of 5 people is complementary and fun [laughs] The plot is very good, the plot of the interstellar world is very interstellar (how can I describe it) [full], the setting of the mage world is rigorous and interesting, female-centered [blowing kiss], I hope the worlds will merge in the future! Or the protagonist can travel from both sides, otherwise it would be a pity that such a wonderful mage world is just a background board [Sending my heart]

There are no particularly big surprises at the moment, and the narrative rhythm is very comfortable. The characters' personalities are all outstanding and easy to remember (I think this is really good for group portraits! Some (not meant to be offensive) group portrait articles may not control the memory points of the characters very well, so I still can't tell who is who after reading fifty pictures ()). Another small suggestion (of course, the most important thing for the teacher to be happy is that he creates with the support of interest!) I hope to balance Yan's personality a little, in the first dozens of chapters It may be a little uncomfortable at times (it means that you don't play a big role in the team and you only feel like crying and apologizing after getting into trouble (of course, this kind of character design is understandable! (And you have to leave room for growth). Just balancing Yan's contribution in the team a little bit may make the reading experience better. At present, I see that Yan is also using his own abilities to contribute. I think it is really good. After all, group portraits are the kind of feeling where everyone makes progress together without anyone scratching the surface)) In addition, teacher, please remember to take a good rest and don't overwork your body (I feel that the teacher is really fragile, haha). I also hope that more and more people will come to see the teacher's works!

Today's 2025.11.11 Review of books. So far, there are no surprises for me. The author's writing is very beautiful. I particularly like it (ღ˘⌣˘ღ). The shortcoming is that it can be updated a lot, which makes me happy [full]

It's beautiful, please give it a try (﹡ˆoˆ﹡)

It looks good [admiration] When it becomes popular, I will be a long-time fan [you taste it carefully]

I think it looks great. There are not many books that I find interesting. Come on, author. Update faster, faster, faster.

It's good-looking and good-looking. It's one of the best-looking interstellar novels. Help the author. Come on.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Like [admiration], cheers up

Awesome! Very interesting, I will be waiting for it as soon as possible

Not bad, not bad. I finally found a book that suits my taste. The writing is also very good. Not many people read it now. If it becomes popular in the future, I will be an old fan. Hahahahahaha [Cool]

Okay, okay, no one has read such a beautiful article about group elephants, right?

The author writes so well