A Potion-Flavored Kiss

I have read 84 chapters so far, and the main story line is finished. I personally think it is quite interesting, and not very OOC. If more people watch it, I think it is normal for the rating to go up to 9.1. It can be simply summarized as the time travel conjecture of Snape's dream girl. It is a sadistic novel that does not suppress people. Zoe (the heroine) is crazy in love and has exhausted all the mechanisms. Snape (the male protagonist) has a crush on her but is unwilling to open her mouth to explain. Then the plan that meets all the mechanisms fails. She is unwilling to open her mouth to explain and loses my love. It is reasonable and logical. There is no problem. Regarding the possible highlight, Snape slapped Zoe in public when he found out about the scene where Zoe sent Potter to the prophecy ball. I think this is acceptable. Snape thought she was dehumanizing and sent her children to die in front of the Dark Lord. Zoe thought she beat the woman she loved so much for sending her children to the battlefield. The author gives a detailed explanation in Chapter 67, which I think is logically reasonable. In fact, I can feel the author's struggle when writing. In fact, sometimes I also think that the protagonist has traveled through time. I really want Snape to survive, but part of Snape's character charm comes from the fact that after he participated in the death of the only light in his childhood, he sacrificed himself to pave the way for the son of light. The author arranges for Zoe to ask Snape implicitly in the article whether he wants to change his fate of death and whether he should respect other people's choices. In fact, it has always been the case. Talking about "salvation" is blasphemy to Snape who has chosen his own path and is determined to follow it. He himself does not know how to live in the future except atonement. Therefore, the article respects the setting and destiny of the original work. The biggest change is how to let Snape live. It's still worth watching, although there's a high chance that I'll be abused and won't watch it more.

I cried until I died of dehydration. It was really a hearty knife-eating experience. It was really satisfying. Then I realized more and more clearly that small torture is pleasant, but big torture is harmful to the body [crying][crying][crying][crying] But I am still extremely grateful to the author for allowing this work to be born and exist in this world. Although I still hope that the author's writing style and the smooth and smooth logic of the writing-the next book, the next book, the next next book... The next countless books will all be sweet stories (even if they are both dead) ahhhhhhhhhh! ! ! It's fine if the knife appears in the extra episode, Xiao Shao Yiqing! ! ! Teacher must keep writing! ! ! ! ! !

I like it so much. After reading this book, other CPs seem to be blasphemy to Severus. The emotional line between Severus and the heroine is naturally smooth and natural, which is unforgettable (our inferior, awkward and restrained Severus needs to choose his heroine without hesitation). The heroine is a time traveler, which combines the sobriety and omniscience of people who have traveled through time. Finished spreading flowers! The work is very nice, I look forward to the author's next one

One of my favorite Sifu fanfics, my battle notes can be found on the bookshelf The reasons are as follows: Damn, it's so twisted, it's so right, this is what it tastes like. This thing can only be written by Twisted Dream Girl. Damn, it's so awesome. The same-married sister wants this kind of emotional tension of love and hate. Sifu's position determines that the best interpretation of Dream Girl is the most extreme, paranoid, powerless, and twisted love. I think so, and the author is the only teacher I have seen in so many years (maybe not, but definitely the best one) who can interpret this kind of emotion. It is so awesome. I want to take this book as a family heirloom and take it out and smash it from time to time. It feels like I am motivated in life. I beg you, author, please see that you have a little reader like me who regards you as a god, so you must finish this book, okay? I will follow you for the rest of my life🥺

It's super beautiful. It's the best Sri Lankan novel [Adoration] I've ever written in my heart. The author has very good control over Sri Lanka's character. Because of the suffocation of his native family and Lily's death, he will feel even more inferior and at a loss. He is very similar to Zoe. Both of them seem to be sacrificing themselves to protect each other, but neither one will say it out loud, because they know that "you can only choose when you are alive."

Be is a sad story, with sugar in the early stage, but from the appearance of the savior, it is all about knives, but the plot is very reasonable. In the end, Snape successfully atones for Lily, and Zoe also successfully saves the ending of Snape's death. When Zoe became an assistant, the ending of Zoe's death was already laid, but it is still heartbreaking, but cannot be stopped. Sifu, who is always stubborn and muffled, obviously as long as you take one step towards Zoe, everything may be different, but, everything is too late, there is no time, after all, there is no destiny.

The emotional writing is great, Si Jiao's deep affection is vividly expressed in this fanfic, and the heroine's emotional changes are not too blunt. The story is fast-paced, and the center is always on the emotional pull between Si Jiao and the heroine. It does not capitalize on Harry's story like other fanfics. Big boost for the author, it's very interesting [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]

I have read more than a hundred fan novels about Sri Lanka in HP, but I am still shocked by the author's writing style. Different from the stereotyped images of the characters in fan fiction, they are more flesh and blood, have their own souls, and have worldly force majeure factors. This is a novel that is completely consistent with the original work. It is more like a real person with the possibility of Zoe. The writing style is delicate and meticulous, and the plot is reasonable and ups and downs. The author's wife is very hard-working

It's a rare be text taught by HP (but there is also an if line at the end), but in the early stage, the knife and the candy take turns. The food was delicious, and the third roll was even more delicious. Maybe it was because I had a low tear point. I started crying when I ate the knife, but after crying, I had to say that it was indeed delicious😋, so delicious. I've read a lot of stories that changed the plot or didn't follow the main line. It's rare that I get to an chapter that sticks to the main line. I was stunned at first, but the author's writing was very good and made me feel the feeling of automatic correction of fate. I am still very emotional after reading the full text. I feel like "all the gifts given by fate have a price tag in secret". Whether it was the appointment between the heroine and Old Bee to eat a big melon in the astronomy tower but was cut off by the Sri Lankan teacher and returned to the main plot; or even though the heroine's father was no longer in class, the heroine took up the position and was still a professor with this last name (well, after so many years, I still can't remember the professor's last name). I really like this feeling of the regression line of fate [blowing kiss]

Come to think of it, I pursued it before, but then I started reading other articles. Looking back, I realized that I had already read part of it. Si Jiao, may countless "Zoe" protect you. May countless possibilities protect you, and may countless "Slughorns" bring you happiness. Stay away from pain, stay away from the gray and trivial matters of the past. Stay away from the heartache and sadness caused by all struggles. Stay away from the web of memories. Stay away from… Can't think of any more. There is no ink in my belly. Anyway, it's super good-looking, except that the heroine's character and speech are a bit extreme. Others are just too good to be true.

First of all, this is a very beautiful sad article! ! ! ! Finally found a heroine that I can bring into the story! ! The feelings are very real, but it's not as easy as other books to get it right, Lily's. Let go of your obsession, although you can ask for a better fanfic that is more in line with public tastes. Severus dotes on the heroine more, but I think this is actually a very real Severus, with very real feelings, very real obsession, very real regret, it is very real. This is Severus himself. I feel that and some of the actions Severus did after the death of the heroine are very Severus is really sadistic, but the extra chapter is okay. I think this article The length can be fine because I really don't like the very long one and then focusing too much on the savior's growth path. I think it would be very annoying, because whether we read the original book or watch the movie, we actually know some of the savior's path pretty much the same. After all, it is Snape's novel, so it would be very, very good to focus more on the relationship between the heroine and the professor.

When I read the first volume of Sister Bao's death, I was actually just a little sour and didn't cry yet. But when I saw the perspective of the ss in the third volume, I couldn't stop crying: Along with the victory of the war and his survival came the life of his apprentice and sweetheart. When he was desperately trying to control his emotions, in his sister's eyes, he was a professor who desperately protected the other's relics for that unattainable existence. Even if he cared about her, in Zoe's eyes: for him, Harry, Lily's relics, always had a higher priority than her. While neither of them opened their mouths, they were both too paranoid. Ss was paranoid about wanting the child of the girl he loved for the first time to survive, wanting to atone for his sins so that he could live in the sun, and wanting to place the beauty he could control in a safe world. Sister Bao is paranoid: she wants SS to survive. Obviously, the person who is focused on what he does wins. So what followed was the collapse of the SS world, and he fell from the normal world with his sister to a hollow and nothing world. He is trying his best to do what the other party wanted to do. Just like in "Go Where the Wind Is": The south wind cannot wait for the breeze in Dali. Zoe can't see the rest of the beauty in the world. I protected her (Lily) relic, but I became her (Zoe) relic. ————To her relatives and friends. But I don't know if I count as her relic, because after she left, I only had her dead things around me. No one came to me to miss her with me. I can only look at them to miss you. ————For ss

In the early stage, the heroine had a secret love for Sri Lanka, but she couldn't love her. I wonder if she will pursue her wife in the crematorium later? Otherwise, I will always feel sorry for the heroine's sadness and loss in the early stage. I've seen a big surprise now. Sri Lanka thought that the heroine used Harry Potter to send him to death and slapped the heroine.

It's really, really natural. A woman like an eagle is twisting in anger on the bed. Oh my god, it's really beautiful. The subtle description of the emotions in it will really make you laugh so hard that your aunt laughed. Then the depth of the emotions will make you smile very, very knowingly, and the rhythm is also very good, without any lag at all.

When I first read it, I was still practicing driving. As soon as I finished taking the exam, I saw the "Gulf of Alaska" from Rider Speakers in front of me. In the headphones was the novel "Destined to Be", the feeling of crying in the wind. The writing is so good, every word is filled with deep-rooted pain and regret.

Help me cry. The Sijiao described in this book is really the most consistent with the character of the original Sijiao among the books I have read. He is a very calm and can be said to be a cold and hard person. He also has his own arrogance, so he will not apologize easily, let alone actively express his love. So the tragedy between them is doomed I can't do it anymore, I keep crying [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Nice! This will be my first second-read novel. It's really no exaggeration. It's the one I like the most among all the Sri Lankan novels I've read. The emotional line develops slowly but is very touching and not abrupt (to be honest, I like this kind of slow-burning pull type the best, haha) Big boost for the author, don't end it hastily, write more and be more detailed, I want to read more woo woo woo [love]

Run quickly, it's a knife! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! But the author's writing style is very good, and Snape has no OOC, so he directly became my fanfic Bai Yueguang. I couldn't let it go for a long time after reading it, the emotions are very delicate, and Snape's perspective is simple, you can understand, and there are so many foreshadowings. After reading the text, I felt that it was really a pity. But I have to say that everything happened so naturally. The very good article made me spin and jump.

Overall it's pretty good, personal evaluation: 1. Overall: The literary quality is relatively strong. As a fanfic, the author should have a clear framework and write out the 16-year entanglement in short chapters, and have the characteristics of both parties. This can already stand out from the fanfic. But correspondingly, as a fanfic, more readers who read fanfic tend to read more daily-oriented and longer articles. I think this should be why the number of readers of this article, which I think is excellent, is very low. At the same time, it may be a little uncomfortable to read because the protagonist's character has some receptive abilities. 2. Problem: I personally think there is a small problem, but I can also understand how difficult it is to express it. Just like when I wrote a book, I wanted to write about the character losing himself in silence, while the readers had to shout hoarse on the shore, vast and quiet. This is too difficult, and it is limited to a small idea of ​​mine. After all, maybe the author really has the strength to write it in the next book? The emotions that readers can feel in the main line are far less intense than the if line from Si Jiao's perspective. To me, it reads like a vast mime, missing a trace of soul. The two people pass each other and go different roads, but leading to the same point. In the if line, I can clearly feel Sri Lanka's regret and other complex emotions in every word, but compared to the main line, it may be em or because of the character of the protagonist. For example, it is difficult for me to empathize with Harry's complex emotions. 3. Characters: As for the characters, when I read it, it actually felt a bit like an autobiography for the two of them. I personally think that some other fragments of other people's lives can be added appropriately, and some foreshadowing, environment rendering, comparison, etc. Can be included. If the narrative revolves entirely around them, the shaping of the protagonist's character will actually be a bit flat. I may read an additional aspect in it, that the protagonist's entire world revolves around the Sri Lankan religion (although it seems to be like this). But I feel that as a person with means and her own ideas, the protagonist cannot and will not let her entire world be the Sri Lankan religion. She can make the Sri Lankan religion the center of her world, but it cannot be the only one. Although it achieves the yandere feeling, it always gives me the feeling that I don't have enough control over the speed. 4. Summary: As far as the whole book is concerned, my evaluation is that if you don't look at the if line from Si Jiao's perspective, this book will be incomplete. It may also feel that you are biased towards opening a blind box. You click on what you want most and what you don't want. The result is a combination of half what you want and half what you don't want. It just feels very frustrating and uncomfortable, and it's a bit short. However, once the Sijiao if line is read, it can definitely reach a higher level among HP fans (it can even have good opinions in the fan circle). The problem I personally see is the above. Finally, I think the if line from Si Jiao's perspective is really good. The author expresses Si Jiao's final, uh, indescribable feeling very well. I think his level may be improving while writing. If the previous description of the protagonist's emotions and so on can also be as delicate as the if line, I think my evaluation of this book can be higher.

It's rare. I think this is the best book among all the recent Snape-related books.

This is a book I have read many times. I watched the cruel place many times in the middle of the night. Zoe is a very paranoid person, but she cries really well😭 After watching it so many times, the only thing I want to say is "My wife is here from God!" It's very, very beautiful. If you don't believe it, just tell me how long it takes to read this book!

It's really good to watch. I cried all the time. I cried every time I watched it. The withdrawal reaction is very strong and the stamina is great. It's the kind that makes me cry just thinking about it. I really like it! Zundu looks good⊹꙳ ˶˙ᵕ˙˶ ⊹꙳

I came here specifically for BE. I watched the ending first and cried until I finished crying. Wow, wow, it was so heartbreaking, so heartbreaking! Go and have a look. The last description is so delicate. I will name you after my surname. I will use your name and my surname. I will read what you want to see for you and maintain that memory for you. Wait, my writing is not good. Go and read it. Use her name to live her unfinished life and do what she might want to do. One name, two surnames, the combination of two people, the conspiracy of the living and the dead. He melted her legacy and the rest of his life into these two cold letters, announcing a silent and immortal connection to the world.

Super pretty! The author must work hard to keep updating [Admiration] But, I accidentally turned to the introduction and saw the IF line that can open HE, and I felt that it would be very cruel and knife-like later! Looking forward to looking forward to

The character of the heroine is very lovable. The most extreme character design makes me obsessed. The author is amazing. The various characters and psychology are very consistent and detailed. I'm not a human being, I just like to watch be. It's this kind of sick and crazy thing that makes me sink. I hope the author will be faster, and the ending will be more specific and more detailed. It's really not enough. I really love this book and have read dozens of HPs. If the ending is complete, this book will always be number one in my heart.

It's really unique. It stands out among all the sweet pets of the Sri Lankan religion. I think it's really not OOC at all. It's a fairy tale. I think the emotional tone of the whole article is be. Be is the best ending in my heart. I really want to see the extra story after the death of the heroine. If you can, I will definitely write some.

The plot and character settings are very unique. In some places, I feel that they are very consistent with Si Jiao's character and habits. Zoe's courage to make a desperate move is also admirable. It has fulfilled the wishes of many readers. She stubbornly stays by her mentor's side in her own way, protecting him who is powerful and complex, and making full use of all her understanding and ability of the plot.

Although it is be, compared to me, it is probably he in another sense? What I like the most is the extra story about Si Jiao. A dark and steady double agent who is good at controlling emotions goes crazy because of Zoe's departure. It makes me a little creepy and I can't help but feel a twisted sense of joy. It's simply a fairy tale.

The same but different professor, really good-looking, paranoid, and jealous,

I was lucky enough to watch Zoe's point of view and Si Jiao's point of view separately, and each one was still complete. I walked through their lives immersed through their perspectives. I felt that this ending was the destined ending in their situation, as if they were like this. I mean they are alive. Only such a Zoe like Si Jiao can let him live well.