My Brother, Emperor Qi, Was Regarded as a Murderer by Madoka at the Beginning

Also pay attention to controlling the number of female protagonists. If there are more than 3, it will be difficult to take into account the character creation (currently the female supporting characters highlighted include Yuan, Li, and Origami, and others include Yuan Shen's protagonist group, and the single model worker of Zongman Ten Thousand Years) The writing is actually average, but it's very comfortable to watch. There are no major plot points so far. Again, there's nothing terribly poisonous about this book. Possible self-greening points such as clones and rebirths are also avoided or explained. Regarding the heroine... I can only say that the author tried his best Tomato readers are too complicated It's hard to juggle everything There are two main genres of multi-heroine comics One is that you won't accept it after you write it. One is not writing after receiving it The former is actually quite normal. It is a writing method of early comprehensive comics to accept one after another. However, for now, it is a big poisonous point. In fact, after writing, there is a question about whether to accept it or not... My personal opinion is that you can not accept it, but at least do not describe any ambiguous interactions with other characters before the ending, unless it is the original official. (The author generally tries not to write if he has no fan base, except for the original official dubbing of a certain unknown heroine An Lulun, who would be self-destructive if written), and if you want to write the original official dubbing, then just appear on the scene and confirm it, and do not appear in your novels to describe the ongoing emotional lines of other male and female co-stars. The latter... Generally speaking, writing in the genre of comprehensive comics is basically a big poison, but for unlimited streaming, I think it is allowed (it has something to do with the unlimited streaming manga written by Luo Qing from QD. After all, it takes hundreds of chapters to describe a heroine in a world, which is completely enough in terms of weight) The three female protagonists were actually just random thoughts when I was reviewing it. I just wanted to control the number of female protagonists. After all, the author's writing style is indeed average. It is obvious that he cannot grasp overly complex emotional lines and character portrayals. Moreover, even if he is a powerful published writer, there are Given its popularity, the maximum number of female protagonists should be Hanayome, which is divided into five equal parts. It also only describes five love lines. Although I don't like its ending... After all, the description is basically the same, and each image is basically portrayed very fully. It would be outrageous not to include them all.

Shennong Tips The protagonist's time travel is set to travel through this world first Then die in order to reshape the world and then The protagonist's soul fragments are collected by the card Put together and be reincarnated in the new world Recover the memory later There's nothing poisonous about it at the moment I have to say that the pace is a bit slow. Everyone needs to urge the author to update [eating melon]

I give it four stars. Emmm, there is nothing wrong with the writing and plot, and the psychology of the characters is also very well written. How can I put it this way? When watching the daily life, you will feel very relaxed when watching the male protagonist chatting with those women, but when you see Qiubey, you feel strange for no reason. The female protagonist was tweaked. The male protagonist Eiriri in the front made a wish to become a magical girl as soon as they left after chatting. The male protagonist Mahiru in the back was stabbed in the back by his mother and wished to become a magical girl as soon as he left home. It felt like the male protagonist must always stay with those female protagonists. I feel like something is about to happen, and I also wonder if I can use a card with purification skills to purify the heroine into a magical girl. The debuff of turning the heroine into a witch due to pollution may be due to reading too many knife novels (although most of them are Half of them stopped reading because of the knife), I always feel that the author will backstab him and feel uncomfortable °¯᷄◠¯᷅°, so can you remove it? As long as this debuff is removed, I will immediately change it to five stars (I respect that I don't want to be stabbed or stabbed in the back) I promised the author five stars. Although I haven't read it yet, someone replied to me, so I changed it to five stars.

Good writing, good characters, but there are still a few characters, and it is not yet clear whether it will be a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

——Opinion Tower—— If you have any characters you want to add, or if you have any suggestions, or if you think something is poorly written, you can tell me here. I will make corrections to the author, so please don't leave negative reviews (ง •̀_•́)ง If you think it doesn't look good or the writing is bad, can you tell the author what's wrong instead of just giving a bad review and leaving? If the author has written a huge blockage that makes your eyes dirty, then I deserve the bad review. But I don't know what happened. I just gave a bad review out of nowhere. I will be sad for a day, baby~ (bubble sound. Jpg) ❛‿˂̵✧

Tomato is a rare masterpiece of comprehensive comics. The characters are not broken, the logic is self-consistent, the plot is touching, and it is non-toxic and can be eaten with confidence. By the way, I think Yuan Yan's pairing doesn't need to be broken up, they are both monogamous and fine╭(╯ε╰)╮

The ancient god Ruo Yemu has appeared. There are really no human beings in this novel. Another point is that the heroine should be introduced slower, or the pace of recruiting girls should be accelerated. After all, this is a multi-female novel. If there are too many heroines and one is not taken, it will lower the perception [Love]

Yes, it looks great. Xiao Yuan's writing is also very cute. But I didn't choose the cover well. I suggest you find one by Xiao Mingge or Xiao Yuan.

Usually I don't bother to give good reviews, unless I see something particularly unsightly, I will give a negative review, but this book's rating feels really low. Next, about this book, the emotional scenes and combat scenes are both good. According to this rhythm, 9.2 Will be almost the same (in my personal opinion). If you are interested in comics and knights, this is a good novel.

The writing is very good, and it suits my taste. How can I put it? This is the first time I have seen such an angel. It is very different from the angels in other fandoms. But I like it, but I feel that the plot develops too slowly. I like so many characters, which is really distressing. I won't talk about other things. It's okay if you don't accept it, but don't make it disgusting. The protagonist is the center, other men... Ugh Forget it, it's only the first hundred chapters, so let's just keep this pace.

The plot progresses very interestingly, the author has his own ideas, and the emotional development of the characters is not cliche. It is one of the few works worth reading among the Tomato comics books that I have found so far. Does the protagonist look like a human being to female characters other than Madoka?

Overall, it is a good comprehensive comic, but the beginning is too bland, the identity of the protagonist and the origin of the world are behind the scenes, and the front is very boring, mainly about daily love, with few fighting plots, and the emotional line is well written. As the saying goes, if you can read it for free, you don't need a bicycle. Come on, brother author, don't want eunuchs

It's not the type where the whole world revolves around the protagonist! If you want to read the kind of article where the whole world revolves around one person, please don't come in! What follows is a bit of a spoiler! Let me say it again here, the protagonist's ability is stuck! ! ! But the external performance is like: "Kamen Rider in Magical Girl 23 Things" Don't be led into this by idiot fans of knights who have no brains to compare their combat prowess. This book is highly recommended!

It looks great, and speaking of magical girls, has the author considered adding a magical girl version of Witch Judgment? I want to see Shiloh venting his anger towards Emma and the legendary martyrdom girl Shirley Tachibana's left fist, which does high damage and her right fist, which does high damage [sneer laugh] @burn out

It feels so sweet that I, the mouse, am almost drowning in the overflowing happiness. Can we discuss it as an author? I'll make an appointment and you'll finish writing it. It's really painful when a completion notice suddenly pops up halfway through the book. Please, I will do anything

How to say it? The author's writing is very good, otherwise I wouldn't be watching it now. Maybe it's because I have a bad habit. When I see a book I like, I just add it to my bookshelf and never think of rating it. Unless you like it to the extreme, you might just think of it and give it a five-star rating or something. Well, this book is also very good^ω^ I hope the author will update more, come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

Kadoya Genaki: Thirty million times of cause and effect paved the way for me to become a god. I paid the price of death for your return.

It's pretty good. I posted this comment after seeing the author complaining about it. The overall story and coherence of this book are pretty good, and the relationship development is natural. The characters can be said to be full-bodied. As for some people saying that it's a bitch, to be honest, I'm a god who stepped on Raven in my pants and I'm still angry. There are actually people who are more sensitive than me. The author also explained later that some people leave comments and leave. They are also gods. PS: The author said that she is not a girl, but a good friend. Note: I was lucky enough to read an article that talked about how my girlfriend turned into a girl. Fortunately, the book was sealed.

This book is very interesting, and the protagonist is well handled. If there are multiple female protagonists, it should be Master Duan Shui, rather than favoring a certain female protagonist. Then the protagonist can have a fight with Shikame Genaki, which will eliminate the obsession in his heart and become the real Genaki. The translation is that in order to open a harem, you need to cut yourself off from the past or let your past self identify with your current self.

Ten Years Rice Ball said that this is too much for my taste. The emotional entanglement between the protagonist and several women is so delicious. The plot is mostly logical. The protagonist is cold on the outside and hot on the inside towards most of the characters in the comic. He kills the enemies decisively. In order to remove parasites, he performed stomach surgery on 790,000 people. Staying up late to catch up with the army, I feel that the plot is quite novel, and I can see that it was written with great care. I support it with five stars!

So Mahiru currently regards the male protagonist as her emotional sustenance, right? I feel that the emotional line between the two is a bit thin (for example, Madoka and Homura still have a certain emotional foundation), as if Mahiru came from the sky and unilaterally seduced the male protagonist (although the male protagonist really took the bait). The author can later describe the change in Mahiru's emotional relationship with the male protagonist from a simple spiritual dependence to a deeper emotion. [Sending Hearts]

The author thinks that the story of the male and female protagonists in Angel Next Door is a good couple after all, and the story is also a story of mutual redemption. It feels inappropriate to just split it up like this. How about writing it with another angel. Just choose between Angel Come to Me and Garter Angel [laughs]

Great author, please update quickly Author update soon The author's soul returns. 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul has returned, driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles. 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul comes back. Comes over the mountain and sings. Comes back. The soul comes back. 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul comes back. It sings loudly and triumphs. It is the same robe and glory. 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back. The soul is back. Tao: Rebirth Mantra The Supreme Lord's decree transcends your lonely soul, all ghosts and ghosts, and is blessed by you in all your lives. Those with heads will surpass, those without heads will rise, kill with spears and knives, dive and hang on ropes. Die openly and secretly, die unjustly, creditor and enemy, beg for life. Kneel down in front of my stage, the Eight Diagrams will shine, stand out from the threshold, and transcend other places. As a man or a woman, you are responsible for your own responsibility. Whether you are rich or poor is your own responsibility. The order is given to save the people, and the people who are waiting for it are saved. The people who are waiting for the order are saved, and the people are saved. (Heart of the curse: The Supreme Lord's edict transcends your lonely soul. You can just recite these eight characters. If you can add: escape from the sea of ​​suffering and reincarnate as an adult, even better) [Sneaky smile]

Author, what is Xuan Zhang's dps? Are there any linking skills with Madoka? What is the rotation? Is there really a group attack? Is there a sure hit lock? Are there any special attacks on the biss? Is there a very high rate of drug abuse? Author, you have to take care of yourself😭 Write novels when you have a rest😇 When I'm hungry, I write a novel😭 When I'm full, I'll write a novel😇 When I'm tired, I write a novel😭 When you feel good, write a novel😇 When I'm sleepy, I write a novel😭 When you wake up, write a novel😇 Write a novel when you cry😭 When you feel excited, write a novel😇 If you lose followers, write a novel😭 After getting a haircut, I will write a novel😇 If you are angry with Party A, write a novel😭 Once Party A gets the rice, write a novel😇 When I stay up late and become bald, I write a novel😭 When you are radiant, write a novel😇 When you run out of inspiration, write a novel😭 After carrying the pot for initiation, write a novel😇 I suspect that I will write novels when I am born 😭 When you are free in this world, write novels😇 When I miss my family and friends, I write a novel😭 When relatives and friends come to visit, I write novels😇 Write a novel when you are besieged by keyboard warriors😭 The keyboard warrior writes a novel after being sanctioned😇

I have read more than a dozen chapters, and overall I am still having fun with it. There are no major flaws. The protagonist is a somewhat subversive character, and I feel like Wang Li and Xiao Ming brother sometimes. I just do whatever I want.

The protagonist captures the hearts of girls fiercely and turns them into his possessions. Each harem has its own story line and character building, and the strategy of the strategy perfectly suits my xp. The overall style, the protagonist is generally very strong, and the heroine seems to be weak and easy to bully, but this happens to be the point that pokes me the most. It is obviously an invincible novel, but it does not feel boring, and romance accounts for more of daily life. In short, it is very, very delicious to me

I quite like Madoka, but I don't really like the background of the magical girl Madoka world. It feels too heavy. This slightly everyday world of Madoka is great.

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Come on, author, I am a pure harem fan. It is better not to write if you don't accept it. I have seen a single chapter of complaints posted by the author. The author's writing is definitely not bad for a book I have read for so long. Give yourself some confidence, and the plot is not bad, although it is a bit cliche (there are so many genres in the book and there are so many genres). I will continue to control the subsequent plot well and give each heroine her own role [Like]

It's good to watch [laughing evilly] The pace is neither slow nor fast [laughing evilly] I feel very comfortable watching it [licking the screen] It's just a little bit after 100 chapters. What can I say? [Chigua] I don't really want to watch it [Chigua] because the main character is a little short and there are too many scenes with supporting characters [Chigua] But I still like to watch it [licking the screen] Come on, author [laughing evilly]