Beautiful Straight Man Was Criticized as a Bad Dog Again 1

It's very interesting, but I can't get the official role. Instead, I really like the supporting characters and Snack Baby. I especially like the German Admiral (maybe because he is not human), but I still wish Lin Shi and Derek the best. The author's writing is very good, and the protagonist is free and easy and carefree, but also a little lazy. This is the heartthrob. (The cover is so beautiful, it is the Snack Baby in my imagination) Boss, have you considered a non-CP heartthrob or an all-heartthrob for your next book [crying]

It's very interesting. The protagonist is really charming. He reveals his charm from the depths of his soul without knowing it. His humor and his straightness are like steel. There are certain behaviors in getting along that can reveal the tension. Very nice✧⁺⸜(●˙▾˙●)⸝⁺✧

It's super good-looking. I really like Lin and Charles. It's a pity that they are not an official couple, but Xiaoke seems to be okay. Ah ah ah, can you all [cry][cry][cry] Alas, it didn't work anymore. After seeing the later part, I fell in love with German again. I also like Xiao Ke more. Oh, no, I should call him Dake now. Charles also likes it more [face covering]

It's super good-looking, so eye-catching, and it doesn't deserve to be a tomato. Compared with some famous books, to be honest, if you can buy traffic, buy more traffic. The retention rate of such a good-looking book should not be low. I feel heartbroken after reading such a small amount of traffic.

It's so beautiful, there's no unnecessary nonsense, there's no inexplicable plot, everyone in it is so vivid, it makes me feel like I'm reading a comic, it's awesome

It's so good, so good, so good. Why is the rating so low? I can't bear to rate it after reading it. I want to rate it now. It's so good, it's so good. You must read the book review before deciding whether to read it, okay? It's really good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. I haven't had such a delicious meal in a long time. I really want to be a dog for Snack Baby. He has a very charming personality, and this straight male heartthrob is so cool, so cool, so cool [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] It's really fun to watch when you're under control, but don't watch when it's about attack and control.

This article tells a series of stories that happened to the protagonist Lin Shi after he joined "Apocalypse". It uses concise, concise, vivid language to show us the love in the world - such as the deep family affection between Jiang Chuan and Lin Shi, such as the sincere friendship between Qianye and Lin Shi, and the love between Derek and others. Lin Shi's love... And his tenacious fighting spirit - Ru Jiangchuan's family was destroyed because his country was destroyed by the Federation. Life was hard for a time, and social inequality weighed on him like a mountain. However, he never gave up revenge, and instead became stronger through the hardships of life. The main cp's love is to protect you even if you can't protect yourself. The protagonist Lin Shi is set to be a heartthrob, and other men's comments to him are such as "If you are close to you, you will be close to pain, and if you are far away, you will be far away from happiness." Because I am a "straight man", I always feel that everyone is a brother, but the word "brother" often makes people more painful. The protagonist Lin Shi is the wind that passes through the gaps of every leaf in the world, unruly and free. He is the hard armor, the sharp blade, and the warm sun that encompasses all things. Underneath the young bastard's appearance is a delicate and soft light, somewhat uninhibited and frivolous, just for one sentence - young man.

It's really good-looking, and I really like the character of the main character. He's so natural, yet smart, and weirdly cute. Most of the supporting characters in it are pretty good, and the characters are not too thin. The personalities of the various characters are diverse and not uniform. The personality transitions of some characters are pretty good and relatively smooth. In itself, there are not many conflicts between characters. There are also some head-turning scenes between single arrows and single arrows or attacks. The conflicts between characters are also quite good and can be read as a daily sweet article. However, there are some small areas that were not handled well, but they are not really big problems. If it doesn't work, remember to protect yourself from lightning The overall flow of the article is quite high, there is no lag, and there are not many pitfalls, and they will be filled in one by one at the moment. There is a sub-CP in it, I don't like to remember to avoid lightning, but in fact, the drama described by the sub-CP is not too much, the whole thing is written around the protagonist and the main plot, they only appear occasionally, and they are not abrupt when they appear.

Why is the score so low? ? ? ? ? It's obviously super good-looking, with no problem with plot logic and writing. Moreover, Lin Shi's heartthrob is not only because of his physical beauty, but also because of his personality charm that readers can intuitively feel. It's much better than those so-called high-segmented books on Tomato. When I read it, I even felt that this shouldn't be a free article on Tomato. This book deserves better data and ratings.

It's a very delicious book. Our snack baby is like a little angel. He is beautiful, spicy, strong and has a good personality. If you like to watch the interstellar heartthrob team's pet training dog micro-redemption, you must not miss this book. It's a pity that it's 1v1. To be honest, I think np will be really delicious. Everyone is our Lin Shi baby Okay, the puppy is really good-looking. The only drawback is that some of the settings of the combat forces are not reasonable. For example, after walking two kilometers in the first combat unit, the legs are a bit weak, which is not reasonable. I hope the author can change it, but this flaw can be ignored. It is still a very good article and there are no surprises.

The writing is very good. The small details, characters and emotions are all very delicate and rich. The straight male but unintentionally flirtatious character of the protagonist is very natural. It can be seen that this book is born for the protagonist, rather than a tool for the development of the plot. I especially like the CP in it. They are all very easy to criticize. The evaluation traffic of this book will increase. Big boost to the author! I believe that the poor data is just a temporary problem. As long as the special period passes in June, it will be fine. Don't give up! ! ! "ψ(｀∇´)ψ[Adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

Very good-looking, very strong-willed, and he is still a very straight man. He still looks like he has no bones. He is very nervous and very good-looking. He has a good figure and has a succubus physique. He is a heartthrob. The more people go to the back, the more people there are. I really want to take CP, but he has an official match. He prefers an official match. Hahahaha. Gong has been partial since he was a child. Brain Bu Di. Love Brain. Green Tea. When he grows up, he will get more green tea. Shou takes Gong back to raise him. I am really afraid that he will raise others to death. Gong is also very lucky. Hahahaha. It was really funny in the early stages

I can't express my love in words😍The characters are all vivid and vivid. I love the protagonist and Qianye so much. The protagonist is very strong and his actions are neat and tidy. When it comes to relationships, he is so straight that he is like a succubus. He doesn't know how charming he is. Straight men do not take things lightly or seriously. The protagonist has a very unique personality. In addition to his outstanding appearance, he also has an interesting soul. Anyway, it looks good! Nice! Nice! It's useless to say so much. You have to see it for yourself to know how beautiful it is.

The characters are described very delicately and vividly, and the characters' personalities are also well described. I really like this kind of character. The overall structure of the article is tight, logical and orderly, and each character in the article is really well portrayed. [Shy][Shy] It's nice to read. The author's wife wrote it really well [Blowing a kiss][Shy][Smirking]

Super pretty! The author has done a good job of not making people think that snacks are like the image of green tea that is rejected but welcomed, and that it is a cheerful and unreliable image (the succubus doesn't know it hehe)

I really like the portrayal of the protagonist Lin Shi. He is a very vivid, vivid and out-of-the-box character! I was attracted by the cover at first and found it quite to my liking.

It's very, very beautiful. The plot is also very compact and not watery at all. I'm fascinated by Snack Baby [Shy][Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

Snack Baby is really good at sultry unintentionally. Just thinking about it makes me blush. She is so good at writing. The images of her black hair flying during battles are all in her head [shy][shy]

Xiaoke and Lin are both cute, and Lin has a very charming personality [please update]

I said how beautiful the writing is. It turns out that I have read another ancient novel by the author. It is so beautiful. It is so cool to develop it in the next year. It is so good. It is so well written that I am dying. It is similar to interstellar novels. It is fast-paced and makes me feel very happy. The next year is so good. Help, it turned out to be yesterday. I wanted to find a book to listen to while sleeping, so I gave it to me to read. Can you understand how good it is? I love Nianxia, ​​I love Nianxia!

I've finished reading. The writing is great. How could there be such a cute thing? Why are you so cute, Snack Baby! Snack Baby's personality is really three-dimensional. Sometimes he is like a master, and sometimes he is very straightforward, super insensitive, and super invincible and naturally cute. Most of the time, he has a cheerful personality. He really can catch fish without knowing it. The baby's force value is also very good. This book is simply a controlled welfare. The attribute of heartthrob is really specific. Many people like Snack Baby, and their first impression of him is that they like him (it may be different likes, but most of them are love) If you like heartthrobs, don't miss this one. Snack Baby is very easy to talk to. The rating of this book should be 9.0 Or above. Don't miss this good book.

It's a very good book that tends to shape the personalities of various characters. The funniest thing so far is when Qianye appeared for the first time and was criticized for being jealous of the protagonist [laughs]

It's very beautiful. I'm obsessed with the little snacks. I hope to open a big book about all

What an incredibly beautiful book! ! I don't know why the rating is not high! It's super, super good. It's the best novel I've found on Tomato recently! It's just that the extras aren't enough! I want Modo Modo

Lin Shi's unconscious teasing is sometimes the best thing! He is also very good at lying... Teacher, hurry up! It's already tied!

This book is so good, I probably didn't skip a chapter from beginning to end, they are all good! People who watch it feel warm in their hearts (๑•ω•๑). Very pretty! ! ! (;`･∀･,°) All sugar and no knife, people outside the main palace love it and cannot exclude it! Sometimes I really want to watch All (*^^*), but it doesn't matter (/ω＼)

Good-looking, this straight man is a heartthrob, and he is bent without realizing it. I wonder later when Lin Shi remembered that he fell in love just to make Derek dislike her, but suddenly found out that he liked Derek very much. [Sending Hearts]

I've read the main text, yeah, yeah, but haven't read the extras yet. This book is really delicious. It's really to my liking. There are no surprises in the whole text. I didn't finish it when I started reading it, otherwise I would have read it all the way to the end. [Sending my heart] Xiao Lin is really very youthful and charming. Xiao Ke and Xiao Lin are a perfect match 99.

It's really, really good-looking. I enjoyed reading it and found it very funny. It's a highly recommended novel. The score is too low, shouldn't it? The traffic should be higher I think you can choose not to watch it if you don't like the adult-oriented series, but I really recommend you give it a look. Xiao Ke was really cute and well-behaved when he was a child, and Xiao Ke is also very cute. Personally, I actually hope to be with All Lin. I really like Charles, Devin and Euan a little bit, but Derek is also easy to resist. Sister Qianye is also very gentle and doting on Lin. Like a mother, sometimes I feel very worried when I see a cabbage being raped by a pig~(＞＜)~ The extras are all good, but there are too few. Can you update them a little more? Uncle Jiang in the extra episode is also very fond of Lin, the little cutie is so cute🥰

It's nice to look at. The snack baby is cute and funny. The characters and the plot are all very good.