A Mortal Girl's Cultivation of Immortality Begins with Picking up a Growth-Type Jade Pendant

The author's writing is very good and the reading is smooth. The heroine meets many warm female characters along the way. The only drawback is that I hope the author can replace "girl" with "boy" so that the heroine can meet more female characters in her daily life, because I feel that in addition to the friends around the heroine, some of the minor characters such as deacons and shopping are mostly men. Finally, I hope that the female character will have a more thoughtful name, instead of just abb-style naming. Considering that the heroine's father is a scholar and treats the heroine well, I think a name with a more meaningful meaning will be more in line with this setting.

It is well written, the girls are united and work hard to change their destiny, which is very different from the women in some previous novels. This excludes factors such as the infinite power of relatives offering sacrifices to heaven, the necessity of having relatives sacrificed in order to promote one's own growth, and the vicious female supporting role relying on sexual resources to rise to the top. It is slightly different from the previous male and female protagonists. It lacks a lot of secular stereotypes. Cultivation of immortals can also have a bit of human touch. It is slightly warmer than those dramas where people say that after entering the immortal sect, they will immediately cut off the mortal world. What is the difference between cultivating immortals and mortals? Maybe it's love.

Four stars are an encouragement. You don't need to use so many modifiers, which will make the reader's sense of involvement worse. Just jump when you need to, and don't describe everything so clearly.

I don't want to see you immortal cultivators engaging in low-level tactics there.

Chapter 255 is tied! Several good friends around the heroine are all girls, and most of the masters and elders are also girls. There is no female competition at the moment. Seeing the heroine and the female supporting characters get along with each other, get to know each other, fight, experience and progress together, it makes me feel soft [crying][crying]

It looks good, the writing is very detailed and the pace is slow. The female micro-group portraits are also very good, but the portrayal of the heroine is not so good. The heroine is full of truth, goodness and beauty on her way to becoming an immortal. Some of the heroines are a bit too kind and not cautious at all. Many times, if the person the heroine meets is a little less kind, the heroine will suffer a big loss.

Nice! I tied the knot in one breath, stayed up late and saw the present There are many outstanding female characters in it! I like this the most. I have read novels, so of course I have to read some of my favorite love-girl novels🥰 I like the heroine's golden finger, and I like her character very much, but she was a bit naughty when the ice dragon swallowed the ice soul, a little naughty devil I hope the author won't stop updating! I've been reading so many novels that I've stopped updating them and cried to death. I'm really looking forward to the sect competition with the heroine and the new master. The friendship between the heroine and her friends is also very good. It reminds me of the sentence "I don't know, a group of people rushed up to me shouting about friendship and bonding." Hahahahaha, cultivating immortals can also be done with friends. It also has its shortcomings. The ups and downs of the plot are sometimes easy to guess. The plot of the heroine refining a difficult elixir is similar. But despite its flaws, I still love reading it. Come on, author!

It is written like prose, which is actually good if you have the patience to read it, but Tomato readers are impatient. If the language is more concise, it will be more in line with Tomato's taste. Five-star support, come on [like][like]

A very good female-channeled novel that truly treats the heroine and female characters in the book as subjective people. To me, there are no surprises in it. There is no female competition in beauty, and there are many positive female friendships and female characters. I even see that all the bad guys are men now, and those who help the heroine are also female immortal cultivators. It is a novel that empowers female readers. When I read it, I was excited and felt that I could do it. The various psychological descriptions of the heroine not giving up and being rewarded for her hard work are very good. It is an empowering book. Female readers will have a good imagination about persistence after reading it, and it is not the kind that will be rewarded with huge rewards as soon as you persist. Instead, persistence will lead to a gradual qualitative change, and then continue to move forward down-to-earth. It is simply a mental health textbook. The heroine in the book has also experienced countless failures. Every time she comes into contact with new knowledge, she will experience failure. However, the heroine never gets discouraged, but thinks positively from all aspects. This is a very good role model for female readers. It shows us readers how to think positively when encountering failure in reality. The following is an original text: Three consecutive attempts, none of which succeeded. She felt a little regretful, but not surprised. This was consistent with the high initial failure rate she expected. But she also felt a sense of comfort that her spiritual power could play a role in alchemy, which gave her hope for the future.

The author writes very well. I'm just commenting on the plot: I really can't stand the fact that Xiao Qiongtian was taken away and the perfect golden elixir was destroyed. She escaped from death again and again and wasted so much treasure for Xiao Qiongtian. Also, the heroine felt very aggrieved in the early stage as she was constantly being suppressed and beaten. There were so many opportunities for magical weapons, but she still couldn't compete with those who were a little higher than her. There is also the magical elixir that the heroine has practiced, which has been upgraded to the seventh level of foundation building. There is nothing wrong with this, but why are her companions progressing so fast? Although Gu has dual spiritual roots, the heroine also has a jade pendant that can extract pure spiritual power, which is almost the same as the two of them. Why are the progress similar to those of the two senior sisters who are only disciples of the outer sect? They haven't entered the inner sect, so they should only have three spiritual roots. Could it be said that each of them has so many opportunities? Well, I was actually a little heartbroken watching it. I like the heroine very much and hope she is strong. Every time I see her being beaten to death, I feel uncomfortable.

Although there are some flaws in some settings such as the market, and the language description is not experienced, the author's seriousness and progress can still be seen from the author's replies and the richer content and writing style of each chapter. Five stars is not just love, but also an affirmation of the author's expectations for the complete quality of this book in the future and the author's attitude.

I really like this kind of slow-paced writing. It doesn't rely on golden fingers from the beginning. It's very powerful and very readable. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

A novel about female immortality. Finally, there is a novel about female immortality with a large proportion of women. Both partners and masters are female. Then you can also watch the heroine's growth and exploration bit by bit, and the heroine is not the same cold, ruthless, decisive, and so on. The heroine will benefit from her kindness, and she will also be hurt because of her kindness. But this is a kind of growth. The heroine is not a time traveler, nor is she reborn. She is just an ordinary rural girl. But it is still a good story, and she basically doesn't suffer any losses, so it is relatively easy to watch. It's just that the description of the battle is relatively immature, and the swordsmanship learned in the later period doesn't feel reflected in the battle, and the description is a bit too empty. But there are no other problems, so it's still very nice and recommended. [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

The heroine cultivates immortality in a low-key manner and is not exaggerated. However, the inner activities of the heroine are described too much. For example, the heroine insists on not giving up. This mood is mentioned frequently in the early stage, as if she is determined to join the party [face covering]. She exerts too much force, and even small things appear tragic and slightly heavy under the inner activities of the heroine.

I have read more than a thousand chapters. It has been a long time since I have read a book for so long. I basically gave up after a few hundred chapters. The overall pace of this book is very good. Secret realms, auctions, alchemy, tasks, and finding treasures are all interspersed. It is not too compact and has a lot of relaxation. Du, I occasionally write a few chapters about the warm daily life of the heroine eating and drinking with a few good friends. Generally speaking, there is nothing poisonous about it. The heroine is very cautious and will not do anything mindless. There is not even an ambiguous man in the whole process. This is a good comment [laughing] ][Laughing][Laughing] Later, the golden elixir was poached, and Xiao Qiongtian was also taken away. At that time, I was thinking about whether to continue reading, but I didn't find anything else good and came back to watch it. Although she was taken away, the heroine's strength was still there, and she was not bullied. Immediately after Qiongtian was robbed, the jade pendant opened up a more powerful space, and he was snatched back later. It was not a big problem [laughing][laughing] The author will continue to update [shy][shy][shy] Looking forward to the follow-up [adoration][adoration][adoration]

As a person who has been reading literature since elementary school, I am a heavy reader of novels. When I first read it, I felt it was a bit like a running account, and every time I would add some reflections at the end of the chapter, it even felt like it had been polished by AI, and it felt like a composition. But later, starting from more than a hundred chapters, the author would change the ending to connect with the next chapter, leaving a small hook, which made me feel that the writing style was also improving little by little, the ups and downs of the article were smaller, and the shaping and character of the heroine were consistent throughout the article. While watching it, I actually felt it was relatively bland. Maybe it's because I usually watch a bit more thrilling, but overall it's still very good. No cp. A lot of it describes the friendship with the female cultivators, and less contact with the male cultivators. Many of the male cultivators in the article are bad people, although it's cp-free. P, but I think some male characters can be portrayed. Basically, this senior sister helps or that senior sister helps. In the actual process of cultivating immortals, there will be some people who appear to be good, but will actually harm you. I think you can write about such people, which will make the article less dull. Basically, what the heroine encounters in the article is that the heroine knew he was a bad guy from the beginning and went to destroy him or eradicate him. I have read about 130 chapters so far. The overall environment is within one-third of an acre of my sect. There is relatively little depiction of the outside world. I hope that the overall world view of the world of immortality will be shown in the future, not only my sect, but also other sects. I hope the author will continue to make great progress! A very nice slow-paced story about cultivating immortality.

When I read more than 200 chapters in this book, I had the deepest feeling that the author's writing style is 1/6, 1/8, or 1/4 related to ancient fantasy novels. It's hard to tell which aspect is the same, but because I've read so many ancient texts, the more I read, the more I feel this way. Regarding the impression of the heroine in this article, "Brother, I am very compliant." This kind of Shun is different from the Shun that Long Aotian expresses directly, but it is also different from the kind of Shun that involves giving and gaining. The writing is very different. It's really hard to express my feelings in words. The more I read, the stronger my feelings become. Generally speaking, the author's writing style is very different. For now, it is relatively rare among the novels I have seen.

I like the feeling of cultivating immortality step by step, and all achievements are the result of my own efforts. I don't like the extremely exaggerated plot of picking up treasures from heaven and earth when I go out. Come on, author! Take good care of you!

It can be said that the author worked very hard to write this book well, but I can only let each person like it in his own eyes. If you don't like it, some people will. Although I don't like to read [face covering] very much, I just found a long novel when I was short of books. I was quite pleasantly surprised at first, but after reading it, I felt that it didn't quite match the genre I like to read, so I'll wait until the next book shortage to read it again. The mother saw the heroine persuading the family to move, which is Chapter 124. It's not that the writing is bad or anything, but it's just a straightforward and simple story that can really be used to pass the time. Because some settings are really not very ideal, for example, take space as an example. Maybe it's because I like to read space text, so I don't like to read this kind of thing. Well, that's it, keep up the good work, the author is great. (Actually, sometimes you need to cover your eyes and ears to see some things, which is good.) (The world doesn't just revolve around anyone. You can write whatever you want. There is no need to cater to others.) (Well, that may be wrong, so don't worry.) (Maybe I'll be back in the book drought after a while [laughing])

It's not a particularly exciting novel. It may not be very surprising at first, so it's easy to write it off, but the writing is very down-to-earth. The protagonists are all down-to-earth people, and the writing style also gives people a very down-to-earth feeling. Great support for the author.

Mark: Overall pretty good-looking, not too bad. Disadvantages: The heroine's training progress is too slow. The heroine's 6-person friend team has very close characters. Later, it looks like the word count is the same as water. Another point is that the heroine has worked hard for two years to find 9 precious genius treasures with four spiritual roots. After refining the pill, her cultivation level is on par with others. There is also a friend of the heroine who has four spiritual roots. He has the same spiritual roots as the heroine, and there is no chance, but he builds the foundation a little later than the heroine. In the same period of time, the heroine relied on nine kinds of genius earth treasures to refine it. Nine Turns Pill. Cultivation to the 9th level of foundation building. But the heroine's friend has almost reached the 7th level of foundation building by himself, and is a genius treasure that is as powerful as described. It's like giving it only to the heroine, which is two levels higher, giving people a feeling of getting half the result with twice the effort.

It is a very interesting book about cultivating immortals, and it constructs a story of step-by-step growth in a realistic way. The most attractive thing is the heroine's indomitable resilience and wisdom. After experiencing danger, he still retains his measured kindness, and his sincere friendship amidst complex cultivation.

The book is very interesting. It is a kind of down-to-earth cultivation novel with no CP. Many of the women the heroine encounters in the book are righteous and repay their kindness. Moreover, the heroine becomes friends with them and make progress together, making the boring cultivation life more lively and full of life. Although the heroine is very lucky, she works hard on her way to becoming an immortal. The female protagonist who cultivates immortality has a plan. When one method doesn't work, she will know how to adapt to realize the plan... I read three to four hundred chapters in one go today and found the latest chapter. The author is very happy. I feel that the later articles are more ups and downs and more readable. There are some very shocking scenes in it. Meng Ning's plan to destroy the heroine's golden elixir over the past few years is infuriating, and the heroine's courage to find hope and rebuild the golden elixir is admirable. I really like this down-to-earth novel about cultivating immortality.

The author's writing style can only be said to be average, but the steady amount of updates and the attentive attitude of writing make me think this book is pretty good. Now I am surprised to see the heroine lose her space here, because I thought this was a growth-oriented novel before, but I didn't expect such a big setback. To be honest, I still feel uncomfortable seeing the space being robbed, but if you don't break it, you can't build it. I hope the heroine will get stronger in the future, come on, author! ! ! I still gave up writing... I like to read long articles. The advantage of this article is that it is long. The author is very punctual in updating. It feels a bit bitter at the same time. The disadvantage is why the heroine lost more than 500 chapters and 800 chapters before she said she wanted to get it back. Did it take so long to prepare? I initially thought I could adapt to this kind of writing. It's a turning point, but it's still as uncomfortable as eating 💩, but we should encourage and look forward to the creation of such down-to-earth novels. Now Tomato's novels are all fast-paced and assembly-line-style. I always look for solid chocolate to eat among a lot of shit-flavored chocolates. It's quite uncomfortable. Come on, author, I can only accompany you here [crying]

Su Yue only has four spiritual roots, but the jade pendant she picked up at the bottom of the valley can help her purify her spiritual energy and speed up her cultivation. She is smart and cautious, she also works hard in cultivation and is transparent. She is very talented in alchemy and swordsmanship, and has a high understanding. She is down-to-earth in cultivation. She is looking forward to the next trip to the Liuli Immortal City Beast Tide.

I think it's okay. There's nothing wrong with the hostess setting, so I can continue watching. Mainly for listening to the book, the conflict in the Medicine Garden chapter is reasonable and has no flaws. I hope the author can keep writing and not be ruined by bad reviews. After all, it is difficult to agree with everyone and it is slow to satisfy everyone. The reason why I gave it four stars is that I didn't see anything particularly amazing, but I can continue to watch it and hope to get CP.

Thousands of words can be condensed into two words: beautiful

Not bad, it would be better if the following content was written more concisely [laughs]

The writing is good and the storyline is fascinating

The writing is very good and very realistic. It doesn't have a lot of cheats on the Golden Finger Space System right from the beginning.