Western Crossover: Bruce's Beloved Daughter

The writing is very good and the characters are not too bad. It is one of the highest quality fanfics I have read recently! But there is still a small point. The previous article repeatedly mentioned that the heroine was born in a flower garden, respectful and polite, and she had been very polite and well-behaved before, and had a high emotional intelligence. However, in Chapter 18, under the system's cheating, she used Tony's mecha without permission without permission, which he did not open to the heroine. I think it was somewhat violated, the heroine. She looks like a five-year-old kid now, but she's eighteen or nineteen years old on the inside, and she doesn't feel any guilt at all. Although the heroine later apologized, I feel that the author's description is more like a compromise for a hero like Steve. It would have been okay if the heroine had explained her character as naughty in the first two chapters, but it has been emphasized that she is a flower planter. . There was a feeling that the heroine was too good at the beginning and the little devil in the following chapter couldn't show the heroine's naughtiness. It only allowed me to act as the person who was offended. I can't describe it. Anyway, I felt weird watching this scene. It felt a little inconsistent. Is there some foreshadowing or something like that? Ps: The above opinions are purely my personal thoughts. I just put forward the plot that I personally feel is unreasonable when I read this. It does not mean that this is right, nor does it mean that the author should greatly change his mind in writing, nor is there any threat or coercion! The author writes very well. I really like the imagination and writing style. Everyone's characters are suitable and the character interactions are also well written. I hope the author will get better and better!

I have only read Chapter 19. The image of the heroine is well created. The prison chapter is very well written and interesting, but in Chapter 19, I don't like the image of the heroine a little bit. Stealing the mecha information from the system without the permission of the mecha owner. I also didn't feel the cuteness and playfulness of the heroine in the part where she activated the mecha without permission and almost hit a plane. "She stuck out her tongue." I just felt that his impoliteness and lack of discipline might have resulted in someone's death if he hadn't stopped in time. I just feel like he's causing trouble. There is a sense of arrogance in playing a game and not treating this as the real world. This is just my feeling. I am a person who abides by etiquette and dares not go too far because I am very disciplined. This description made me feel uncomfortable. What I wrote above is very good and did not make me feel uncomfortable. These are my feelings. You can read this book for yourself. There must be some people who like the heroine's character, and the author's writing is quite good. It makes people watch. Let's give it 3 stars. I can't accept it. The heroine must have been a teenager before she traveled through time, but she was not a real child. Total disregard for the consequences. I don't understand what kind of heroine the author wants to convey. I read through the comments that the heroine should apologize. I feel that the heroine did not realize her mistake. Just need. Really disappointed.

I'm glad that I can travel with memories and the protagonist doesn't have to suffer, but where are the girls from the Bat family? I hope I won't be too partial to boys and add more scenes for Stephanie, Cassandra, and Harper~ It would also be nice if Duke could also appear.

It's quite cute. The heroine is a straight-shooting bird. She's very cute late at night. She acts coquettishly and cutely and grabs the gold finger with one hand. The opening is quite wide, so there are knives related to the backstroke in the back part, but overall it's still very interesting. I like the relationship between the heroine and the tsundere girl. It's really cute. However, you should pay a little attention to Chapter 17. There is a scene where the heroine uses the system to do tasks and takes away the mecha without permission. Although she apologizes later, there is such a task in Chapter 26 [Wearing blood-stained clothes, appearing in front of the Red Hood crying: "Dad gave up on me for the Joker!"] However, it has been reconciled. I personally feel that if you want to skip it, it will not have much impact.

Does the author dare to update 200 chapters in one day to shock us? It's like this. In the early stage, the heroine actually had a fun-loving mentality, which was a bit high-dimensional. But in the later stage, when the heroine realized that the tasks issued by the system would cause harm to her family, she never did them again, and she truly integrated into this world. It's really well written and a very healing book. Don't criticize the author when you see something he doesn't like. Our Hope is really a good baby.

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It's so good. I don't like American comics at first, but the author's writing is so good that I read it in one night. I really couldn't get enough of it. [Laughing][laughing][laughing] The author should not abandon the trap or mess up the ending. The writing is really beautiful. I would like to read more [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

The writing is very good, except for the last few pictures, there is nothing wrong with it. Then I think what the heroine did in Chapter 26 is normal, because before reading this book, I had never been exposed to DC. Like the heroine, my biggest impression of DC is Gotham and Batman. I didn't even know that Superman was from DC, and I didn't know that the Joker was also a DC IP [face covering]. So my mentality towards DC was similar to that of the heroine, so I felt that for the first time at that time When I read Chapter 26, I thought it was quite fun. I just felt a little distressed when I saw Jason's inner monologue before scaring the heroine. I can only say that I can understand the heroine's thoughts at that time, because if I hold myself to death, I only know that there is something wrong with the clown's brain. So at the time, I may have thought that pretending to be a victim was because holding myself to death would be a bit scary, and I would never have thought that the person in front of me was the victim of the clown. Then Jason also knew about this in advance, and I saw an inner analysis of the Red Hood before. It was probably that what he hated was not being killed by the Joker. It was that after having him, Bruce still chose not to kill the Joker and let the Joker hurt more people. However, my personal suggestion is that I have no understanding of DC at all as I did at the beginning. The best effect is to read this article.

It's a good read. I've never seen anything like it from Marvel. The daily life is very warm. The ending is he. I just feel that after becoming a human, my personality is different. It's quite strange. The heroine has a big golden finger. I really like the daily life of the Batman family. I love and care for the heroine. It should be said that it is a favorite of the group. The author's writing is getting better and better. He is really making progress. I have finished reading more than 30 chapters. Except for the love line, everything else is very interesting. Maybe it is because I don't like to read the love line. Family and friendship are the ones that poke me the most [Blow kiss] [Adoration] You can read other comments. The main reason is that I have not read the original work and only represent my personal views.

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