British and Americanbruce's Beloved Daughter

The writing is very good and the characters are not too bad. It is one of the highest quality fanfics I have read recently! But there is still a small point. The previous article repeatedly mentioned that the heroine was born in a flower garden, respectful and polite, and she had been very polite and well-behaved before, and had a high emotional intelligence. However, in Chapter 18, under the system's cheating, she used Tony's mecha without permission without permission, which he did not open to the heroine. I think it was somewhat violated, the heroine. She looks like a five-year-old kid now, but she's eighteen or nineteen years old on the inside, and she doesn't feel any guilt at all. Although the heroine later apologized, I feel that the author's description is more like a compromise for a hero like Steve. It would have been okay if the heroine had explained her character as naughty in the first two chapters, but it has been emphasized that she is a flower planter. . There was a feeling that the heroine was too good at the beginning and the little devil in the following chapter couldn't show the heroine's naughtiness. It only allowed me to act as the person who was offended. I can't describe it. Anyway, I felt weird watching this scene. It felt a little inconsistent. Is there some foreshadowing or something like that? Ps: The above opinions are purely my personal thoughts. I just put forward the plot that I personally feel is unreasonable when I read this. It does not mean that this is right, nor does it mean that the author should greatly change his mind in writing, nor is there any threat or coercion! The author writes very well. I really like the imagination and writing style. Everyone's characters are suitable and the character interactions are also well written. I hope the author will get better and better!

I have only read Chapter 19. The image of the heroine is well created. The prison chapter is very well written and interesting, but in Chapter 19, I don't like the image of the heroine a little bit. Stealing the mecha information from the system without the permission of the mecha owner. I also didn't feel the cuteness and playfulness of the heroine in the part where she activated the mecha without permission and almost hit a plane. "She stuck out her tongue." I just felt that his impoliteness and lack of discipline might have resulted in someone's death if he hadn't stopped in time. I just feel like he's causing trouble. There is a sense of arrogance in playing a game and not treating this as the real world. This is just my feeling. I am a person who abides by etiquette and dares not go too far because I am very disciplined. This description made me feel uncomfortable. What I wrote above is very good and did not make me feel uncomfortable. These are my feelings. You can read this book for yourself. There must be some people who like the heroine's character, and the author's writing is quite good. It makes people watch. Let's give it 3 stars. I can't accept it. The heroine must have been a teenager before she traveled through time, but she was not a real child. Total disregard for the consequences. I don't understand what kind of heroine the author wants to convey. I read through the comments that the heroine should apologize. I feel that the heroine did not realize her mistake. Just need. Really disappointed.

I'm glad that I can travel with memories and the protagonist doesn't have to suffer, but where are the girls from the Bat family? I hope I won't be too partial to boys and add more scenes for Stephanie, Cassandra, and Harper~ It would also be nice if Duke could also appear.

It's quite cute. The heroine is a straight-shooting bird. She's very cute late at night. She acts coquettishly and cutely and grabs the gold finger with one hand. The opening is quite wide, so there are knives related to the backstroke in the back part, but overall it's still very interesting. I like the relationship between the heroine and the tsundere girl. It's really cute. However, you should pay a little attention to Chapter 17. There is a scene where the heroine uses the system to do tasks and takes away the mecha without permission. Although she apologizes later, there is such a task in Chapter 26 [Wearing blood-stained clothes, appearing in front of the Red Hood crying: "Dad gave up on me for the Joker!"] However, it has been reconciled. I personally feel that if you want to skip it, it will not have much impact.

Does the author dare to update 200 chapters in one day to shock us? It's like this. In the early stage, the heroine actually had a fun-loving mentality, which was a bit high-dimensional. But in the later stage, when the heroine realized that the tasks issued by the system would cause harm to her family, she never did them again, and she truly integrated into this world. It's really well written and a very healing book. Don't criticize the author when you see something he doesn't like. Our Hope is really a good baby.

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It's so good. I don't like American comics at first, but the author's writing is so good that I read it in one night. I really couldn't get enough of it. [Laughing][laughing][laughing] The author should not abandon the trap or mess up the ending. The writing is really beautiful. I would like to read more [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

It's a good read. I've never seen anything like it from Marvel. The daily life is very warm. The ending is he. I just feel that after becoming a human, my personality is different. It's quite strange. The heroine has a big golden finger. I really like the daily life of the Batman family. I love and care for the heroine. It should be said that it is a favorite of the group. The author's writing is getting better and better. He is really making progress. I have finished reading more than 30 chapters. Except for the love line, everything else is very interesting. Maybe it is because I don't like to read the love line. Family and friendship are the ones that poke me the most [Blow kiss] [Adoration] You can read other comments. The main reason is that I have not read the original work and only represent my personal views.

The writing is very good, except for the last few pictures, there is nothing wrong with it. Then I think what the heroine did in Chapter 26 is normal, because before reading this book, I had never been exposed to DC. Like the heroine, my biggest impression of DC is Gotham and Batman. I didn't even know that Superman was from DC, and I didn't know that the Joker was also a DC IP [face covering]. So my mentality towards DC was similar to that of the heroine, so I felt that for the first time at that time When I read Chapter 26, I thought it was quite fun. I just felt a little distressed when I saw Jason's inner monologue before scaring the heroine. I can only say that I can understand the heroine's thoughts at that time, because if I hold myself to death, I only know that there is something wrong with the clown's brain. So at the time, I may have thought that pretending to be a victim was because holding myself to death would be a bit scary, and I would never have thought that the person in front of me was the victim of the clown. Then Jason also knew about this in advance, and I saw an inner analysis of the Red Hood before. It was probably that what he hated was not being killed by the Joker. It was that after having him, Bruce still chose not to kill the Joker and let the Joker hurt more people. However, my personal suggestion is that I have no understanding of DC at all as I did at the beginning. The best effect is to read this article.

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Suddenly I really want to have a good relationship with Superman, but is it really a perversion?

I really love, love, love, love this novel! I don't know how to describe it, but it happened to hit me! I hope the author will update steadily and update a lot! I will always follow this novel! ! Modo Modo! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The setting is interesting, the Sims is worthy of being a bat family, it is really the top of control, the bat cub is the player, both sides really suffer.

It breaks the stereotype of bats and creates a vivid bat family. Everyone has their own wishes and persistence. This is not just a book, but also Hope's world. I hope there will be some small extra stories.

I've actually finished reading it. You have to wait. It's such an interesting book. I have to wait endlessly. Wow.

It's so funny. The part where you accuse the clown of not paying taxes is so funny.

This is the best cook in our ten miles and eight towns!

The setting is very novel, but I didn't understand the first two paragraphs of the MOBA game without playing games at all. The author may not be very satisfied with it. I didn't even use this ability again later. Overall, it's not bad. A little more daily life between Hope and his family would be perfect.

The beginning is pretty good, the first two-thirds of the plot are very good, the characters, logic, atmosphere, etc. Are all very good. Those who watch it will have an appetite~ But when the plot suddenly changed about a third of the way in and then sped up (there were still hidden lines in the middle), I felt a little bit out of sorts. Especially when Hope recognized Shengsheng as a human later, I actually didn't understand why I suddenly recognized him (because it looked like he recognized the person first, and then had the ability to ask questions to confirm), including later when Shengsheng didn't actually appear much, as if Shengsheng turned into a human just to highlight that Hope was thinking about his friends, and because Shengsheng had no previous memories, Hope let the transformed Shengsheng sleep in his room or even on his bed, which was a bit forced and ambiguous. In fact, in order to maintain the status of a relaxed novel, Shengsheng can still be a system, and there is no need to turn into a human, and then work with debts. There is no golden finger, and we can still return to Hope to complete various tasks and work to pay off the debts. However, because the devil has also come to the world, the game producer has given Hope key n in order to restrict the devil. The identity of the PC also informed Hope of Shengsheng's death-seeking behavior, and Hope decided to share the responsibility with Shengsheng. This made Shengsheng and Hope continue to do tasks, but apart from the necessary human (unity) life protection, they were left penniless and so on... This is a little idea of my own. Don't worry about it, the author's wife [face covering] Because when I read the second third, it was a bit heavy compared to the previous one, and the style of painting changed drastically [facepalm], including the devil who I still don't know what my wife arranged [facepalm]

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Rating: 4.5 It can be considered as having no cp orientation and focusing on family affection. 1. I really feel good after reading the whole article, but some points/plots may encounter minefields for some readers. If you mind, you should read more comments before reading. 2. Sister Bao actually has a very good personality. She plays straight ball and is very good to every superhero. 3. What may be disturbing *Without Iron Man's consent, the system hacked into the armor arbitrarily and stole the actual pictures and data of the armor (although it was said that there was a reason, there were many readers who were concerned about this, and they were right, it would be better if this part could be done in another mode) *A follow-up time reset issue for Mei Bao, (although it involves a major direction of the plot, I have never really liked the idea of sweetness followed by bitterness, especially the kind that only after self-sacrifice can others survive) Looking at these two points, I don't feel very good about them (all are personal opinions) 4. In fact, you can write multiple endings in the follow-up, just write in the extra chapter. There is no CP in the main text. In the extra chapter, you can write some cookies or something like that.

I really like this kind of redemption story (don't you think so?). The transformation of a family from strangers to familiarity to closeness is really heart-warming to watch. Damian is beyond my expectation. He loves Hope so much [laughing][laughing]

I like the development of the plot very much. In fact, I can write more daily routines, because there are a lot of things that can be explored in Gotham alone. The first ones are really beautiful and have various interactions, but the later ones are a bit too heavy. I hope it can continue to be daily routines. Although it is unlikely, I really like daily routines.

It's very interesting, please don't give up on the book😘

It looks good, but author, can you do the same as other authors and write more than 12,000 words and also include a chapter of more than 4,000 words?

Come on, come on, come on, the writer is great

It's been a long time since I've seen such an appetizing Bat Cub article.

It's good to read, and the misunderstanding plot is also very interesting. It's just that I came too early, and the word count is small. The author will update it soon.

Quick update, I didn't expect DC to have a crossover with Marvel, who knew? I was really happy to see it! ! !

It's beautiful, it's so beautiful. It's the first time I've encountered such a good article.