[Twilight's original work + dark plot + crazy criticism of the beautiful career heroine]
>Also known as "The beginning of Karen's adopted daughter, A Luo picks up the food and I flip the table!"
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Evelyn, who grew up in a lunatic asylum, was adopted by Carlisle Cullen and later came to live in the beautiful town of Forks.
Lively and cute human classmate, win!
Lucy&Bella: (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ ) Evelyn is such a good person!
Brothers and sisters with very different temperaments, win!
Alice & Rosalie: Miracle Eve is so fun!
Jasper & Emmett: We do the dirty work!
Edward: ... Then what is the role of my boyfriend?
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N long time later——
The most powerful and cold-looking stalker in the Volturi is the "sword" in Evelynn's hand.
The most intelligent young prince in the Irish royal family is Evelyn's "deputy brain".
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Arrow: Are you going to rebel Evelyn•᷄ࡇ•᷅?
Evelyn: That's right! Get your throne! Bring your wife, too! Get them all from your men! ⌓‿⌓
Reader comments
Well written
The heroine Evelin has a full character, lively and cheerful like a free bird. But he is not lacking in wisdom, being able to go deep into the Volturi's dragon's den and escape unscathed, putting Aro in a dilemma.
The most important thing is that the Karen family did not hold back, and there was no situation where they rushed to take advantage of the beauty and then came to kill her. They were Evelin's strong backing.
The heroine's ability is that of a natural mentalist. She can hint and control people's hearts, and she can see hundreds of steps with one step.
The interaction with Edward is super sweet, and the warm daily life between the family makes people melt. I hope they can live happily like this until the end of time.
So pretty! ! ! The author must continue to write more. I hope Eve will ascend to the "throne" soon. I really love this kind of super powerful heroine! ~At present, it seems that Bella and Jacob should be a couple. The author wrote it very well and did not make Bella black. The novels I read before made Bella very annoying. I don't like this. Author, please don't be fooled~! [Sending Hearts]
It's really good-looking. I really like Evelyn's setting. Although her personality seems a little sick due to her past experiences (I love her very much), her background is still that of a good and good girl. And the way she quietly plots against the Volturi and makes trouble secretly is really charming. I look forward to the update. (I want to complain, I feel like there is something wrong with Tomato's push mechanism, and it took me so long to find out about this new and interesting novel.)
Evelyn gives me the feeling of a highly intelligent Black Lotus beauty.
Originally, she came here for the male protagonist Edward, but later she felt that Edward was not good enough for her. She didn't know why [blowing kiss]
The portrayal of the heroine is very popular, far better than the original work, come on~
The writing is very good, not procrastinating but not too urgent. The details are described in detail, but there is no sense of verbosity at all. The descriptions from the character's perspective are cleverly interspersed to make the story line compact without being confusing. The most important thing is that the heroine's character is so popular! Come on!
It's very good. The characters are well-developed and the plot is naturally advanced. It ranks among the top three Twilight fanfics I've read. At present, it seems that Evelin's personal charm is much greater than that of Edward, and there is even some hope that there will be no cp. If Edward does not have a desperate change in the subsequent plot, then I really think Evelin is backward compatible, because she has a family, status, followers, and companions who are like soul mates. There is no need to fight against a male ghost who hurt her.
It looks good, but the author seems to have given up on it [crying]
The heroine's character is quite three-dimensional.
It's beautiful, the writing is superb, and the characters are very three-dimensional [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]
Well written The heroine Evelin has a full character, lively and cheerful like a free bird. But he is not lacking in wisdom, being able to go deep into the Volturi's dragon's den and escape unscathed, putting Aro in a dilemma. The most important thing is that the Karen family did not hold back, and there was no situation where they rushed to take advantage of the beauty and then came to kill her. They were Evelin's strong backing. The heroine's ability is that of a natural mentalist. She can hint and control people's hearts, and she can see hundreds of steps with one step. The interaction with Edward is super sweet, and the warm daily life between the family makes people melt. I hope they can live happily like this until the end of time.
So pretty! ! ! The author must continue to write more. I hope Eve will ascend to the "throne" soon. I really love this kind of super powerful heroine! ~At present, it seems that Bella and Jacob should be a couple. The author wrote it very well and did not make Bella black. The novels I read before made Bella very annoying. I don't like this. Author, please don't be fooled~! [Sending Hearts]
It's really good-looking. I really like Evelyn's setting. Although her personality seems a little sick due to her past experiences (I love her very much), her background is still that of a good and good girl. And the way she quietly plots against the Volturi and makes trouble secretly is really charming. I look forward to the update. (I want to complain, I feel like there is something wrong with Tomato's push mechanism, and it took me so long to find out about this new and interesting novel.)
Evelyn gives me the feeling of a highly intelligent Black Lotus beauty. Originally, she came here for the male protagonist Edward, but later she felt that Edward was not good enough for her. She didn't know why [blowing kiss] The portrayal of the heroine is very popular, far better than the original work, come on~
The writing is very good, not procrastinating but not too urgent. The details are described in detail, but there is no sense of verbosity at all. The descriptions from the character's perspective are cleverly interspersed to make the story line compact without being confusing. The most important thing is that the heroine's character is so popular! Come on!
It's very good. The characters are well-developed and the plot is naturally advanced. It ranks among the top three Twilight fanfics I've read. At present, it seems that Evelin's personal charm is much greater than that of Edward, and there is even some hope that there will be no cp. If Edward does not have a desperate change in the subsequent plot, then I really think Evelin is backward compatible, because she has a family, status, followers, and companions who are like soul mates. There is no need to fight against a male ghost who hurt her.
It looks good, but the author seems to have given up on it [crying]
The heroine's character is quite three-dimensional.
It's beautiful, the writing is superb, and the characters are very three-dimensional [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]