Doomsday: I Rebuild the Doomsday Barrier in the United States

The description is very good. The first person will give you a different feeling at first. In fact, after reading it for a long time, there is no difference between the third person and the third person. After reading more about systems and supernatural zombies, I feel that this writing is very good [Learned]

The writing is above par, ⭐⭐⭐⭐ He has excellent knowledge of firearms, but not much description. In the later stage, whether the plot or the gun will be the main focus, we need to find a good combination. The description of machinery and engineering is lacking. In fact, this aspect can be explored in depth. The overall rationality of the article can be rated ⭐⭐⭐⭐ The plot is okay so far, but the emotional scenes are stiff ⭐⭐⭐ Chapter 15 Evaluation

Overall it's good, hard-core, without any messy cheats, and most of the plots can withstand scrutiny. It's a rare breath of fresh air in the online literature world. Some chapters have minor problems such as incorrect character names, unfluent language organization and misuse of punctuation marks, but overall the flaws are not concealed. I hope Brother Gou will continue to work hard and look forward to more masterpieces.

It is a very logical, realistic doomsday novel, and the writing can be viewed as a TV series.

I had a great time watching it all night! It's very real from the beginning of Chapter 4 The plot and emotions are first-class, and the characters' experiences and growth are natural and smooth. It is said that zombies can think and evolve. It is already a struggle for survival between new humans and old humans. No matter old or new, everyone is the enemy except themselves. Advancing the clue [Betsy], Li is an ordinary person, and the heroine is one of the switches of the doomsday. Unless there is the endorsement of the military or the state (high probability of taking refuge🀄️), she will never be saved in her lifetime. Li controls the life and death of the doomsday? Countries around the world will not allow it. The book is not bad, but Li loses his mind and gets excited or yells when he gets involved with the heroine... From the rescue plan to B2 bombing BRI to self-destruction in the hospital, there is growth but not much. Occasionally, there are some giant babies and sincerity (which counts as charisma) without breaking away from the feeling of a clear college student. Guessing that the succubus is possessed later on, the female supporting character acts as a helper in order to retrieve the heroine, and then relies on 🀄️ to finally win back the heroine, and end the apocalypse with the efforts of 🀄️ and the heroine. End slipped away

The story is wonderful, and it feels like watching an American TV series. The content is compact, very different from the common zombie apocalypse novels, and has a more exotic feel.

It is well written. The author is very knowledgeable about military knowledge and writes about the powerful lethality of thermal weapons against carbon-based organisms.

This is a doomsday survival work from a first-person perspective. Thanks to the author's original skills in small arms, the description of small arms is very detailed, with physical pictures and data from time to time, which makes it very immersive. In addition, the description of the interaction with other people in the early stage surprised me a bit, the feeling of a boring science and engineering man [please taste it carefully]

The description of weapons is very detailed and highlights the author's expertise. It is not a general introduction, and the acquisition of various materials is very reasonable. It is not that the author has no skills and knowledge and can only rely on the system to make up for it.

Writing from the first point of view is a miracle, but not writing well is normal. Anyway, it's wonderful so far. I hope to continue to work hard.

It's very beautiful. It's the first time a newcomer writes so well.

I feel like this is the best post-apocalyptic gun novel I've read here.

The writing style and narrative structure are far superior to other online journals. The vocabulary is rich but not pretentious. The author's common sense of life and military knowledge are also integrated into the article.

It's very good. It's a completely different experience to be able to see such a more rigorous book with a certain military quality on Tomato. Most of Tomato's novels are basically monthly novels. They may be more attractive at the beginning, but in fact, they just stop there after reading it. It's very good. If you want to read Doomsday Survival, you can really read it [Like]

Brother Dog, the novel must be faster and more ✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻✍🏻😭😭😭😭😭

It's a pretty good first-person perspective zombie article, but I feel that the description of zombies in it is a bit ridiculous. I personally think it should be changed to the one in "Winter Solstice": it has a normal circulatory system, has the upper limit of human mobility, and some zombies have considerable intelligence and can also spread through the air.

It looks good, I love reading it, and I update it quickly. The author writes in the first person. I thought it would be poisonous, but I was wrong. The writing is very good. Good grass.

The writing is delicate and the details are excellent and can be scrutinized. It is a rare masterpiece among the apocalyptic novels I have read. The plot is fascinating and I almost believe it actually happened. A good book, I hope it doesn't end badly. Follow-up review: Wonderful plot, captivating description. I, the author, am as good as Zi and Jie, and I hope that there will be a movie and TV version of the finished book. I will definitely pursue it. Come on, author, don't let it suck!

It feels like watching an American TV series. The writing is rigorous, the content is rich, the plot is completely original, and the author has a rich reserve of knowledge. It is a post-apocalyptic life from an American perspective. The author should go to some place to publish the book.

I almost read it in one sitting, it is perfect, especially on the Tomato platform, books of this quality are extremely rare. First, the author has consulted a large amount of information to be able to describe some professional issues in a logically consistent and correct manner. Secondly, the rhythm of the whole book is well controlled, but the ending is a bit too fast (actually I didn't read enough [crying]). Third, the linkage with "SEAL Team" and "The Walking Dead" is an unexpected surprise (or even a linkage with "Sniper"? I personally guess, Mark's name comes from the actor Mark Wahlberg of the movie version of "Sniper").

Far above the average level of tomatoes, come on Hang in there, don't be too eunuch, don't be too late, we will see a masterpiece interview! Come on. In addition, why is the score so low? The details are inaccurate. It should start at least 9 points.

Real and objective, no system or rebirth, and very familiar with the operation of weapon names. It is a breath of fresh air among various system rebirth articles nowadays. Highly recommended.

This military self-media food blogger is still good, but a bit lacking [laughter]

It's so beautiful. Thank you to the author for your hard work. Please update it soon! Can you give the protagonist some cheats, otherwise it will be too difficult.

There is no system assistance in Real Doomsday, but the grasp of details is really great, and the first-person perspective is also very exciting.

I feel the author's writing is very good. The logic is rigorous and the plot has a real feel. I just don't find it interesting.

Very good emotional drama. The technical description of the apocalypse is top-notch. The only pity is that it is still a seedling. Keep up the good work [Salute]

The rhythm is tight, the plot is reasonable, and there are no major bugs. It surpasses 99% of apocalyptic novels. I don't know why the score is so low. Is it because the protagonist has no cheats?

Divine work, fairy grass. Full of details

There are many kinds of survival knowledge and professional details. This is the main reason why I gave it 5 stars. There are no powers, no systems, and no overly exaggerated settings. It belongs to the normal world system. The characterization is relatively immature, which is understandable considering the author is not a professional writer yet. The overall score should be about 86 points, and full marks are given as encouragement.