Apocalypse: Rebuilding America's Doomsday Walls

The description is very good. The first person will give you a different feeling at first. In fact, after reading it for a long time, there is no difference between the third person and the third person. After reading more about systems and supernatural zombies, I feel that this writing is very good [Learned]

The writing is above par, ⭐⭐⭐⭐ He has excellent knowledge of firearms, but not much description. In the later stage, whether the plot or the gun will be the main focus, we need to find a good combination. The description of machinery and engineering is lacking. In fact, this aspect can be explored in depth. The overall rationality of the article can be rated ⭐⭐⭐⭐ The plot is okay so far, but the emotional scenes are stiff ⭐⭐⭐ Chapter 15 Evaluation

Overall it's good, hard-core, without any messy cheats, and most of the plots can withstand scrutiny. It's a rare breath of fresh air in the online literature world. Some chapters have minor problems such as incorrect character names, unfluent language organization and misuse of punctuation marks, but overall the flaws are not concealed. I hope Brother Gou will continue to work hard and look forward to more masterpieces.

I had a great time watching it all night! It's very real from the beginning of Chapter 4 The plot and emotions are first-class, and the characters' experiences and growth are natural and smooth. It is said that zombies can think and evolve. It is already a struggle for survival between new humans and old humans. No matter old or new, everyone is the enemy except themselves. Advancing the clue [Betsy], Li is an ordinary person, and the heroine is one of the switches of the doomsday. Unless there is the endorsement of the military or the state (high probability of taking refuge🀄️), she will never be saved in her lifetime. Li controls the life and death of the doomsday? Countries around the world will not allow it. The book is not bad, but Li loses his mind and gets excited or yells when he gets involved with the heroine... From the rescue plan to B2 bombing BRI to self-destruction in the hospital, there is growth but not much. Occasionally, there are some giant babies and sincerity (which counts as charisma) without breaking away from the feeling of a clear college student. Guessing that the succubus is possessed later on, the female supporting character acts as a helper in order to retrieve the heroine, and then relies on 🀄️ to finally win back the heroine, and end the apocalypse with the efforts of 🀄️ and the heroine. End slipped away

It is a very logical, realistic doomsday novel, and the writing can be viewed as a TV series.

The story is wonderful, and it feels like watching an American TV series. The content is compact, very different from the common zombie apocalypse novels, and has a more exotic feel.

The description of weapons is very detailed and highlights the author's expertise. It is not a general introduction, and the acquisition of various materials is very reasonable. It is not that the author has no skills and knowledge and can only rely on the system to make up for it.

This is a doomsday survival work from a first-person perspective. Thanks to the author's original skills in small arms, the description of small arms is very detailed, with physical pictures and data from time to time, which makes it very immersive. In addition, the description of the interaction with other people in the early stage surprised me a bit, the feeling of a boring science and engineering man [please taste it carefully]

It is well written. The author is very knowledgeable about military knowledge and writes about the powerful lethality of thermal weapons against carbon-based organisms.

It's very good. It's a completely different experience to be able to see such a more rigorous book with a certain military quality on Tomato. Most of Tomato's novels are basically monthly novels. They may be more attractive at the beginning, but in fact, they just stop there after reading it. It's very good. If you want to read Doomsday Survival, you can really read it [Like]