Big Black Dog and Kitten

In the happy and passionate youth, there is no parting between life and death, only staying together forever. "I hope you can fly to the freedom you want in your heart like a free bird." This sentence really touched me. Freedom should be a meeting of the soul, not an imposed shackles. Babies must be well. I hope that if the author wants to open the next book, he can continue writing along this timeline [laughing][laughing]

Absolutely true review: I have actually read no less than ten HP fanfics, and I have read quite a few of them from my own generation, but this one really touched me. This is the first time I cried while reading an HP fanfic, and I cried miserably (the most important thing is that I didn't cry because of the knife, but because the author resolved the knife in the original work. I was really touched!) The descriptions of friendship, family, and love are very delicate, the youth of the predators, the mutual redemption of Sirius and Arya, the reconciliation between Regulus, Sirius and the Black family, and the tough-tongued but very human daily bickering between Grindelwald and Arya. . . Makes me feel the body is warm. All in all, it looks good and I recommend it.

It's a very good book to read. It's not packed with fancy words. It's a very passionate youth. They are all a group of good babies. The chapter where Alia and Lily met for the first time really touched me. I really can't get enough of the cute and beautiful childhood of girls. [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

After reading more than sixty chapters, I can't help but comment. It's really beautiful. It completely fits my understanding of the magical world. From the warmth of the Potter family to the slapstick in Diagon Alley, the bond between friends, and the Marauders forming a defense team to fight against the Dark Lord, the author seems to be not only portraying the story of Sirius and the heroine, but also constantly shaping the group portraits. A very, very valuable thing is that neither Snape nor Peter here are simply classified as bad guys. Slytherin and Gryffindor don't hate each other every day. Here there is the unique magical warmth of Hogwarts, the brave and fearless spirit of the Lion House, the trust of courageous friends, mutual support and beautiful vision [crying] [crying] [crying] I am looking forward to the next reading.

I read it very early, but the rating was a bit low and the introduction was not particularly attractive. I thought it was an ordinary mindless sweet story, so I didn't read it. But later I wanted to read the CP of Sirius, and I was attracted by the first chapter. And later on, when James and Arya were young, James' tone Naughty, the writing is super funny, and being friends with Lily is really good, and the writing about meeting Sirius is also very good. Other fans write about the daily life before going to school, but the daily life before going to school is boring in this book, but this book is very good and very funny about the daily life before going to school. The writing about the daily life after entering school is also super funny. This book is also edited The relationship between the Black family and Severus was restored. The relationship between Gellert and the heroine was also very touching. It was both funny and touching. The fate of Peter and Voldemort was also very satisfying. After Voldemort was eliminated, I thought the rest of the story would be boring, but no, it was still special. Don't be funny. Oh my god, it was so sweet to me when Sirius and Aria were in love. I couldn't help but smile at the corners of my mouth every time I read it. This book is the best I've ever read. It's a great story about family, love and friendship. There is no intense fighting and killing. It's very warm. Why is the rating so low? What a beautiful book it is.

I highly recommend this family fanfic. The author's writing is very good, the characters are vividly portrayed, daily life is full of joy, and it makes up for many regrets. For example, the story of ggad does not end in the tower, Regulus did not sacrifice and finally reconciled with Sirius. Harry has A complete and beautiful childhood (extra), including Severus not sacrificing himself in the end, and even... (See for yourselves, the ending is guaranteed to be expected but unexpected). The heroine Arya is very strong but not a love-minded one. The emotional story with Sirius is delicate, rich and interesting, and you will never tire of it!

It's very satisfying, and it describes Harry's parents as I imagined them. The description of them in Harry Potter is actually quite sparse and subjective. Besides, the characters in the book are really sweet, and the group portraits are also very good [laughing]

I'm afraid of giving it 4 stars because I'd rather give it 5 stars. But actually, every chapter is very beautiful and thoughtful. The male and female protagonists are also very sweet. Overall, every chapter of this book is very well written. Then every detail is written very well, and Arya is clear-headed. Sirius will also help Arya unconditionally. Arya's James and friends will also support unconditionally. The male and female protagonists are childhood sweethearts who met when they were young. The interaction was always sweet in the first grade. In the second grade, they confirmed that they had a crush on each other. They also confessed later. Moreover, Arya later also helped Snape. James and Snape were no longer rivals in the later period, and also helped Sirius and Regulus. The two later became good brothers and the estrangement disappeared. Alia also helped Sirius to improve his relationship with his family. Alia was injured by the opponent during the competition, and then the predators went directly to help Alia get revenge. Everyone in this novel is very good except Peter. Thank you to the author for writing a very good book. Now I've played through it three or four times and I still don't get tired of it.

Really awesome👍🏻 As a fan who strongly recommends Sirius, I personally think that this fan novel portrays Sirius in a very three-dimensional way. I like Sirius because when I read the original work, I felt that his experience was too tragic: a painful childhood experience. After entering Hogwarts, he finally found a like-minded friend and spent the happiest seven years of his life at Hogwarts. However, he was betrayed by Wormtail a few years after graduation, and his best friends James and Lily also died as a result. He was wrongfully imprisoned for 12 years, but he felt that he deserved it. He thought that since Wormtail was dead, he could be in Ah Zikaban atones for his indirect death of James Lily, but when he discovers that Wormtail is still alive, he escapes from prison without hesitation, hoping to kill Wormtail for no other reason than to avenge his friends. At the end of the third part, Wormtail escapes again, and Sirius also loses the evidence that can prove his innocence, but he is not sad about it. I think Sirius in the original novel lacks someone who can warm him, and he lacks a ray of light of his own. In this article, Alia, who comes to this world through the book, is such a character. She is brave and tenacious, always lively and cheerful, and becomes the first ray of light to illuminate Sirius. And the plot of this book is also very attractive. The characters saved by HP fan novels I have read before have never included Lily and James, because if they had not died, there would be no story about Harry, the savior of the next generation. However, this book advanced many things from the subsequent generation to the parent generation, such as the destruction of Horcruxes, the Triwizard Tournament, and the battle against Voldemort... Each of them made me stunned while reading, and the release of Grindelwald was really unbelievable. Arya and Grindelwald get along with each other just like real grandparents and grandchildren, with daily bickering and love mixed in the bickering... All in all, this novel is really refreshing and is sure to be a hit🔥🔥🔥 your loyal readers Eleven

I think this book is really good. The heroine is a relatively strong person. The story content and plot development are very good. The love affair with Sirius is also sweet! The other extra chapters are also good 😌 There is also a peaceful and happy ending (life line) and a career line that also has a sense of pleasure. When I saw the Ministry of Magic in "Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix", I really hated the trash like Fudge. Overall, I like it very much (don't comment on my personal opinions, thank you🙏) [In addition, I gave this rating because I feel that I can't fault it myself, and I sincerely hope that more people can read this book]

Wow, I really liked this book. I will consider publishing a new book. The writing is really good, the characters are not OOC at all and are very funny. The language in it is really suitable for the HP world. Sirius writes so well that the corners of his mouth never dropped. The author's group portraits of the protagonists are also very charming. I really like Ge Huang's setting and he dotes on the heroine very much. The whole movie is so heart-warming, and the daily writing is particularly good. I'm excited to publish a new book! ! !

I read this book after seeing it mentioned in the HP book list Amway. There are some unreasonable parts such as the timeline and the age of the characters. I hope the author can refine it as soon as possible. Overall, it is very sweet. James is really a character who will never be OOC hahahahahaha. Our little couple group is also very good, the kittens and puppies are so cute🥰

Okay, I recommend the whole book But I feel that the heroine is a bit naive, so to speak. Sometimes very mature Hmm. . . . But it's great. This is the only one I've read in its entirety. Hp books Well, it's probably just that it's super pretty, yes. Super ok

This is my first time writing a review for this book. This is so beautiful, the interaction between each couple is so sweet that I can't help but pound the bed! ! Big cheers for the author! ! ! [Love][love][love]

It's good-looking, it's really good-looking, it's just really good-looking, it's really good-looking, go check it out, check it out. I really like the ambiguity between the heroine and the two in the early stage, it's super sweet. When I played the second playthrough and the first playthrough, I just took a rough look at it and skipped a lot of chapters. Now, in the second playthrough, I have filled in all the chapters I skipped earlier. It's really good.

It's great!!! How about everyone! Harry was born into a happy family! Oh, I'm very curious, what would happen to this world if Harry from the original book came [laughing evilly] It must be very exciting, and it's so cute, every couple of CP James x Lily, Sirius x Arya!!! The extras are also very interesting [Blowing Kisses] Really, and very warm (*ෆ´ ˘ `ෆ*)♡

This book has been rated as TOP1 in my heart! I hope the author can write more HP fanfics. I really like the author's writing style. The dialogues between the characters are humorous, lively and natural. The plot of the story is not procrastinating. What I like most is that Voldemort was solved very quickly, and unlike many other fan novels that end when the war is over, I love that there are many chapters of follow-up descriptions of life and emotions after the war, which makes people like me who can't accept abuse feel extremely relaxed and satisfied!

It's super good-looking. I personally think the characters are very three-dimensional and the emotions are very delicate. The subject matter is also relatively novel, but not many people watched it.

It's really super super super, super beautiful! But I think the author who finished it very quickly can really add more, but it has already been completed, so there is no way to add more. It is really, really beautiful. I think the only drawback is that the number of words is too few˚‧º·(˚ ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ )‧º·˚

I really like this book more and more as I read it! I like the portrayal of Severus very much, it fits my image of a tsundere who is strong-willed, cold-faced, warm-hearted, and has a vicious mouth. It didn't open up his heart like some fan fiction. The relationship between him and Aaliya was gradual. I'm very happy that Sif has friends who can joke like this. Aaliyah really has some magic power! Ps The drunk part really made me laugh like crazy. Shock! That dark bat actually did such a thing!

It's a bit OOC, some of the plots are illogical or different from the original work. Some of the plots are a bit abrupt or the connection is not smooth enough. The heroine's character is not rich enough, but the interaction between the sister and the puppy is very sweet, and the ending is also very happy. The writing is not bad, so it is a brainless feeling. The sweetness of the article allows me to ignore some flaws and read it to give everyone a happy ending.

Overall it looks better, but I don't know why it got a bit boring when I saw the back part, but it still looks better. Sirius and the main character are particularly easy to relate to, very easy to relate to. I almost screamed silently. Overall, I think CP is the best one in Sirius. [Shy][Adoration][Admiration]

It's very good-looking, very good-looking, the plot has been changed from the previous generation to all the members, and it has a perfect ending! The young couple is also very sweet and good-looking, but I feel that Lao Dengtou and gg are a bit OOC, but it doesn't affect Hao Eat😋 Hao Eat, the after-sales service is also very delicious Hao Eat [give heart][give heart][give heart]

Although I like a lot of chapters, it's a pity that I didn't accompany the author Da Da all the way. The movie is so sad that I really like the happy ending, and GGAD is also very happy. Although Anna was not resurrected. Update speed (○ﾟεﾟ○) I love it (⑉°з°)-♡

It's really good-looking. Why is the rating so low? Woohoo-woohoo, it makes all my regrets come true. Moreover, the description of the relationship with Sirius is also very delicate and beautiful. Everyone's relationship is also good. I also enjoy ggad🥹 It's so well written.

Super pretty! The characterizations are detailed and vivid, and I like the big black dog and Professor Green the most! The story is not too laggy either. It is a good read, but there are no cheats to fix bugs. Alia seems to belong to this magical world. She will definitely continue to follow it! Come on, author [adoration] [blowing kiss]

I don't know how to describe it, but I just want to say, it's super beautiful! !

I really like this, the writing is so beautiful Anyway, it is very interesting to watch, the ending is really happy, and there are quite a lot of extras (the extras have two lines)

It's particularly beautiful. Everyone in the article has his own characteristics. James, although he looks like a little lion that wanders around, is still very cute. Sirius has the feeling of a rich young man, but not as good as me, Yangyang. Remus is also very gentle, and Lili also has her own personality.

I can't help it. This book is really good. [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy] The plot is really compact and super heart-warming. [Heart-warming] Sirius is also described by the author as having very sexual tension. I can't help it. This book is really heart-warming, and my body feels warm after reading it [laughs] Only fans of Harry Potter know how good this ending is [I'm about to cry] Although I know that Wolgarb and others will not be like this book, but I am really grateful for this book. Such an ending [satisfied] [top post] [learned] And the scene of the seven of them watching a movie together is really heartwarming and of course very funny [top post], but it is really the best ending in a dream [sending my heart] It is no longer the dead end in the original work [crying] Really There are more and more people hoping that this book will become popular [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] It's really a good book [Make faces] Some of the endings rewritten by the author really made me cry [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Our family, Rael and Sif, also have a Such a great ending, not to mention Rami, Sirius and James, Lily and Penny [Send my heart] Little Harry also has a family [Send my heart] Arr and Gellert are also remarried [Top post] I really like the setting of Gellert's female bishop [Send my heart] [Send my heart]