Quirky, useless disciple of an immortal sect vs. thousand-year-old villainous fox demon
By a twist of fate, Shen Qing transmigrated into a world called The Immortal Path. Worse still, aside from knowing a little about the characters’ relationships, she knew next to nothing about the story. The moment she arrived, the villain was chasing her down to kill her. After she died again and again, the System finally couldn’t take it anymore and gave her an item from the shop. Supposedly, if she called out someone’s name and they answered, they would fall hopelessly in love with her, and all their bad memories of the past would disappear.
But if he recovered his memories, wouldn’t she be doomed?
After all, the Dreambinding Spell only wears off when one of them dies.
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Shen Qing doesn’t love him. Xiao Yunshen knows that.
But he can’t help hating her. He hates that Shen Qing doesn’t love him. If she doesn’t love him, why use a divine artifact like the Dreambinding Spell on him?
He wants to kill her.
And he really does.
But why does his heart ache so much? Why does he feel so miserable? The divine artifact is no longer inside him.
Could it be that this love isn’t because of the artifact?
Could it be that he had already fallen too deep to escape?
It's very interesting, the plot is quite novel, and the male protagonist is a fox. The pace is also fast. In the early stage, the heroine has been chased by the hero. After controlling the hero, the young couple have a sweet relationship.
Areas that feel need to be improved:
① When the female protagonist initially accused the male protagonist of being a fox demon, she was a little selfish, mean, impulsive and reckless. This plot and the subsequent part where the male protagonist deliberately messed with her were not very comfortable.
② I think it's okay for the female protagonist to fall in love with the male protagonist. After all, she is so gentle and would risk everything to save her. But it's very inexplicable for the male protagonist to fall in love with the female protagonist. What's the motive? Did you fall in love with being controlled... Did you give your child Stockholm Syndrome?
③The male and female protagonists did not reconcile, and they did not resolve their misunderstandings. As a result, they inexplicably regarded each other as their fate and competed with the Demon Lord. This was really fast-paced.
④The ending is weird. The heroine dies to save the hero in the book. Then the author spends a lot of ink and spends more than ten chapters telling the story of the heroine's previous life. Then he turns around and the hero and heroine return to modern times. What happened to the hero in the book is not mentioned, and then he dies inexplicably.
At that time, I wasn't very interested in the heroine's past life, so I just thought about scrolling down and skipping it. However, I found that I was dumbfounded when I reached the last chapter. I watched the finale with no tears left but not yet finished.
The author writes very well! ! It would be nice if the emotional lines could be enriched, because the male and female protagonists were really successfully written by the author, and I want to see more of them.
The overall story framework is probably clear after reading it, but it is too short. I feel that I can write some stories and explanations of some characters later. The male protagonist's early behavior to the later emotions feel a bit vague in the previous explanation. It is not until the heroine's final memory comes back that I can understand it. There is also the relationship between the senior brother and the senior brother. I felt that he was quite nice when he was in heaven. However, the heroine's behavior when she came down to earth to survive the tribulation was a bit disgusting. She was really obsessed with it, and she didn't say too much about it later. The same goes for the Demon King. I feel that the heroine's time-travel story line is also a memory, and the real timeline should be modern times. However, overall there is still a lot of upper body space and I look forward to the author's progress [laughs]
I have finished reading it and I like this setting very much. (The male protagonist did not really want to kill the female protagonist in the early stage.) The bond and relationship between the male and female protagonists are also very natural. The female protagonist is destined to be extraordinary when she is born. She is gifted, practices very fast, and her path to immortality is bright. However, her love life is destined to be bumpy. As the Qingyuan Emperor and God of War in the heaven, her duty is to protect the peace of the three realms. She has a lively personality, innocence and kindness, although she is often naughty, but she has The master and senior brother doted on her, and by chance, the heroine met the hero. At that time, the hero became a sinner because he tampered with the fate of others. He was loose-minded, and his actions were not recognized by others. He felt guilty for changing his fate against nature, and he had invisible shackles on his body. So after the heroine gradually became familiar with him, he came to the mortal world. The hero taught the heroine many truths in the world, and the heroine's childlike words created cause and effect invisibly. Since then, she has grown a lot and started to practice spells desperately. She gradually became full-fledged and had a heart for all people in the world. She proved that she could protect the peace of the three realms on her own. The male protagonist gave her life in exchange for hers. Then the female protagonist's master exchanged a glimmer of life for the male protagonist. She went through reincarnations and tribulations. Later, she became the female protagonist. They took the initiative to go down to earth and endured tribulations, and finally let nature take its course. Although their identities would make them experience more hardships, her senior brother Yu Heng had an affair with the growing girl when he was in the heaven, and there were some setbacks in the development, but fortunately, they finally got their wish, and their lovers finally got married. In the end, the author's ending was a little hasty and a bit regretful. However, I personally liked it, so I gave it five stars. It's a bit long-winded, hahaha, it's the first time in my life to write such a long review. 💕💕💕
Although the chapter is not long, I listened to the story of Yun Shen and Qing Yuan, especially the part about them in the God Realm. I finally understood why Emperor Yu Heng also liked Qing Yuan, and Yuan Bao was naughty and cute at the same time. The plot develops reasonably, especially the plot, which almost becomes a clue throughout the whole text. It's quite good-looking, not bad, not bad, not bad [sending heartfelt wishes]
The author is great, I like it so much
It looked good, but the ending was a bit sudden.
It's quite good. I like this type of novel. Please give it a thumbs up to the author. Please update it soon. I really want to read it 😳
It's very beautiful, the author writes well
So pretty
Worth five stars, the storyline is very attractive 👍
It's very interesting, the plot is quite novel, and the male protagonist is a fox. The pace is also fast. In the early stage, the heroine has been chased by the hero. After controlling the hero, the young couple have a sweet relationship. Areas that feel need to be improved: ① When the female protagonist initially accused the male protagonist of being a fox demon, she was a little selfish, mean, impulsive and reckless. This plot and the subsequent part where the male protagonist deliberately messed with her were not very comfortable. ② I think it's okay for the female protagonist to fall in love with the male protagonist. After all, she is so gentle and would risk everything to save her. But it's very inexplicable for the male protagonist to fall in love with the female protagonist. What's the motive? Did you fall in love with being controlled... Did you give your child Stockholm Syndrome? ③The male and female protagonists did not reconcile, and they did not resolve their misunderstandings. As a result, they inexplicably regarded each other as their fate and competed with the Demon Lord. This was really fast-paced. ④The ending is weird. The heroine dies to save the hero in the book. Then the author spends a lot of ink and spends more than ten chapters telling the story of the heroine's previous life. Then he turns around and the hero and heroine return to modern times. What happened to the hero in the book is not mentioned, and then he dies inexplicably. At that time, I wasn't very interested in the heroine's past life, so I just thought about scrolling down and skipping it. However, I found that I was dumbfounded when I reached the last chapter. I watched the finale with no tears left but not yet finished. The author writes very well! ! It would be nice if the emotional lines could be enriched, because the male and female protagonists were really successfully written by the author, and I want to see more of them.
The overall story framework is probably clear after reading it, but it is too short. I feel that I can write some stories and explanations of some characters later. The male protagonist's early behavior to the later emotions feel a bit vague in the previous explanation. It is not until the heroine's final memory comes back that I can understand it. There is also the relationship between the senior brother and the senior brother. I felt that he was quite nice when he was in heaven. However, the heroine's behavior when she came down to earth to survive the tribulation was a bit disgusting. She was really obsessed with it, and she didn't say too much about it later. The same goes for the Demon King. I feel that the heroine's time-travel story line is also a memory, and the real timeline should be modern times. However, overall there is still a lot of upper body space and I look forward to the author's progress [laughs]
I have finished reading it and I like this setting very much. (The male protagonist did not really want to kill the female protagonist in the early stage.) The bond and relationship between the male and female protagonists are also very natural. The female protagonist is destined to be extraordinary when she is born. She is gifted, practices very fast, and her path to immortality is bright. However, her love life is destined to be bumpy. As the Qingyuan Emperor and God of War in the heaven, her duty is to protect the peace of the three realms. She has a lively personality, innocence and kindness, although she is often naughty, but she has The master and senior brother doted on her, and by chance, the heroine met the hero. At that time, the hero became a sinner because he tampered with the fate of others. He was loose-minded, and his actions were not recognized by others. He felt guilty for changing his fate against nature, and he had invisible shackles on his body. So after the heroine gradually became familiar with him, he came to the mortal world. The hero taught the heroine many truths in the world, and the heroine's childlike words created cause and effect invisibly. Since then, she has grown a lot and started to practice spells desperately. She gradually became full-fledged and had a heart for all people in the world. She proved that she could protect the peace of the three realms on her own. The male protagonist gave her life in exchange for hers. Then the female protagonist's master exchanged a glimmer of life for the male protagonist. She went through reincarnations and tribulations. Later, she became the female protagonist. They took the initiative to go down to earth and endured tribulations, and finally let nature take its course. Although their identities would make them experience more hardships, her senior brother Yu Heng had an affair with the growing girl when he was in the heaven, and there were some setbacks in the development, but fortunately, they finally got their wish, and their lovers finally got married. In the end, the author's ending was a little hasty and a bit regretful. However, I personally liked it, so I gave it five stars. It's a bit long-winded, hahaha, it's the first time in my life to write such a long review. 💕💕💕
Although the chapter is not long, I listened to the story of Yun Shen and Qing Yuan, especially the part about them in the God Realm. I finally understood why Emperor Yu Heng also liked Qing Yuan, and Yuan Bao was naughty and cute at the same time. The plot develops reasonably, especially the plot, which almost becomes a clue throughout the whole text. It's quite good-looking, not bad, not bad, not bad [sending heartfelt wishes]
The author is great, I like it so much
It looked good, but the ending was a bit sudden.
It's quite good. I like this type of novel. Please give it a thumbs up to the author. Please update it soon. I really want to read it 😳
It's very beautiful, the author writes well
So pretty
Worth five stars, the storyline is very attractive 👍