Dragon Raja: Transmigrating to Save the World

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ The writing is really good, five stars for encouragement. Let's talk about the advantages first: the writing is very delicate, and the emotional portrayal is very good. It is one of the high-quality masterpieces in the Dragon Clan fandom 🈴. Let's talk about the disadvantages: There are a lot of poisonous points. There is too much original content in fan works. You don't come to read fan works to see the plot of the original work. The original content can be taken over in one stroke. There is no benefit in reposting the original content. The author should give full play to his advantage in emotional description and enlarge it. In addition, Writing too many plots about Lu Mingfei's cowardice will not help retain readers at all. Changes are a good thing, but those who read the book are all looking for the emotional drama between Xia Mi and the protagonist for the title of the book. Writing too many plots about Lu Mingfei's cowardice will be a loss of points. Even if the setting is changed to let Lu Mingfei stand up? It is true that there are a thousand Harry Potters in the eyes of a thousand people, and it does not rule out that some people like Lu Mingfei's cowards? Anyway, come on

The brushstrokes are delicate and look a bit like the original.

Why was it taken down?

The character of the heroine changes so quickly, she looks like two people before and after, but the writing is quite beautiful.

It's great, I'm looking forward to how the story develops.

This book is really good, a treasure

I think it's pretty good, come on, author!! 👏[Laughing]

Very good, very good book

@Who is the other heroine?