Dragon Clan: Pick up Jörmungandr at the Beginning

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ It's really well written, five stars for encouragement Let's talk about the advantages first: the writing style is very delicate, and the emotional portrayal is very good. It is one of the high-quality masterpieces in the Dragon Clan fandom community. Let's talk about the shortcomings: There are a lot of poisonous points. There is too much original content in the fan work. When you come to read the fan work, you are not looking for the plot of the original work. The original content can be taken over in one stroke. There is no benefit in reposting the original content. The author should give full play to his advantage in emotional description and enlarge it. In addition, Writing too many plots about Lu Mingfei's cowardice will not help retain readers at all. Changes are a good thing, but those who read the book are all looking for the emotional scenes between Xia Mi and the protagonist. If fans of the original novel can't understand the plot about Lu Mingfei's cowardice, it will lose points. Even if the setting is changed to let Lu Mingfei stand up? It is true that there are a thousand Harry Potters in the eyes of a thousand people, and it does not rule out that some people like Lu Mingfei's cowards? Anyway, come on

The brushstrokes are delicate and look a bit like the original.

Why was it taken down?

The character of the heroine changes so quickly, she looks like two people before and after, but the writing is quite beautiful.

It's great, I'm looking forward to how the story develops.

This book is really good, a treasure

I think it's pretty good, come on, author! ! 👏[Laughing]

@Who is the other heroine?

Very good, very good book