[Slow heat]
Someone else brought the system with him through time travel, but he brought the virus with him through time traveling?
The dragon spirit of the Han Dynasty declined, and chaos began to appear.
Wang Shenzhi, wearing a modern skin, fell into the depths of this era.
He thought it was a joke of fate, a gift to restart his life.
Little did he know that what he brought from the future was not hope, but a blood-stained reply letter.
The moment he set foot on this ancient land.
Lurking, twisted.
The virus seems to be "responding" to the blood of this era in a way that transcends understanding.
The following year, the Yellow Turban Uprising occurred.
When millions of hungry people and rebels stirred up the chaos in Kyushu, when war and famine tore apart the order, when flesh and blood were exposed to heaven and earth... That "reply letter" finally found its most fertile soil.
Living in a hell filled with living corpses, Wang Shenzhi desperately tried to survive, but he suddenly discovered that he was strangely immune to this horrific disease.
A soul-freezing truth hits like ice: He, Wang Shenzhi, is not the savior, but the ignorant deliverer of this "virus reply"!
His arrival is the beginning of this apocalypse and the inescapable original sin of this era - existence is sin!
"Be careful, be careful"
Reader comments
Author, if you don't write one day, please! Send out the outline. I want to know the ending.
Don't just read the comments. Everyone has their own shortcomings. I enjoy immersing myself in them. It's ok. Why do you want so many bells and whistles?
Traveling through the end of Han Dynasty in the flesh, the mysterious symbiotic virus, worth a look if you are interested
The integration into the village in the first paragraph is quite detailed, and the technology is not too super. It is very practical, setting traps, modifying the grips, etc., And also making and modifying iron tools a little bit. It is actually not bad if you don't think about it carefully. The only problem is that the protagonist feels too internally consumed and easily exits the line. Those lamenting that the God's perspective is slightly opened, destroying some immersion. The Wubao part feels a little better, the characters have fierce conflicts, the pace is faster, and the protagonist feels that he has grown a lot. The protagonist of this book uses a technological rhythm, which is the most comfortable in this type of writing.
This comment is only an evaluation of the current article. I hope the author will still write according to his own words. Food and grass have the appearance of fairy grass.
After reading it, I guess if my guess is correct, either the author will finish it here, or he has finished the first chapter and is thinking about how to write the second chapter. I personally prefer the latter
And I figured out how the story would develop next: After Lu Zhi was defeated, he had to face Dong Zhuo in Luoyang. Dong Zhuo not only had the Xiliang cavalry, but also obtained the corpses, plus areas with a large population, including Chang'an and Luoyang. Especially with Lu Bu, the next step should be the alliance of princes to defeat the corpse Dong Zhuo. After beating Dong Zhuo, I think it can be concluded. I just want to leave an open-ended ending for readers to think about. There is no need to study "Shao Song" to complete the key battles, but the content of continuous battles and victories begins.
Also, the author, I just gave you a thumbs up. I hope you will reply after reading it and tell me if you will have a second chapter or how to write the next book. And I think you can definitely apply this template, such as writing about Wu Huan Hua ➕ Zombie, Late Tang Dynasty ➕ Zombie, Late Ming Dynasty ➕ Zombie, etc., Regardless of what those historical diode fans think. Because there are good online articles about zombies in history, and this is the only one I've seen so far. The author has to work hard!
After reading more than thirty chapters, I really understood what the author meant by slow warming [face covering]
From the front, there is actually nothing wrong with the protagonist's kindness. Distributing his own emergency rations and so on are considered in line with the character, and he has not suffered any consequences because of it. Naturally, there is no reason for the sudden change.
The early sense of immersion was well written by the author, but when I saw the Yellow Turban rally and felt that the world was about to be in chaos, I felt that the wording was not very good. After all, the protagonist is still familiar with the character design of the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, so he must have the understanding that the world is about to start. Therefore, this kind of gathering will only make the protagonist more aware of urgency, just like feeling that the epidemic is closely connected with him, which is an increasingly urgent feeling (purely personal opinion)
It looks good, the writing is very good, the sense of urgency at the end of the dynasty is very prominent, and the description of the ancient bottom is also very realistic
The protagonist is too naive, with a kind heart that cannot be expressed, sacrificing his own interests to help others
It's quite detailed, unlike many other zombie novels that describe the monsters as being indifferent. Yes, the virus is scary and scary.
I have read the latest chapter. The author's writing and description are constantly improving. The description and setting of the virus are very novel. I can only say that under the influence of the protagonist's halo, the protagonist's kindness and compassion are acceptable. In this aspect, the plot of high blood pressure is also relatively weak and sparse. I hope it can be written in the long run, and it will not be too dramatic [crying]
The author can learn more about medical knowledge and check some information
The pace of this book is very slow. Although the writing style is not very amazing, it unexpectedly caught my brainwave. I just like the protagonist who is not perfect, and his outlook is not crooked, at least he is a normal person. The subject matter is still quite new. Overall, it is okay.
This book is still okay. Don't say that the protagonist is timid/cowardly and you will be no different from him if you travel to the past (as for other books? There is no system; who are those protagonists?) Unless you travel to the past and you are very strong! ! Otherwise, there is no difference between you and the protagonist of this book.
This book is okay. It may be a bit nagging at the beginning, but it becomes ok later on [laughing]
The author mainly wants to try his best to describe the details, but not too much, which makes it seem a bit slow and bloated. However, excluding too many detailed descriptions, the atmosphere is still very good compared to the atmosphere of some novels.
I'm looking forward to the next plot, and I hope the author can reach higher levels [Blow kiss]
The idea is quite good, but I would like to give you a small suggestion. Can you shorten the number of words in each paragraph? Otherwise, the mobile phone version will not look good and the whole page will be filled with words. Come on, author!
It's better than those time-travelers who write about the struggle for power and profit of aristocratic families, the living conditions of a lower class
I just watched a little bit, it's very good! Five stars first
The plot is relatively new and the narrative angle is very immersive.
This book is very well written, as if it were written fifteen years ago
In the future, we can develop into the murderous prototype and add some extraordinary elements. It feels more conscious this way.
Very interesting, nice setting
Write according to your own ideas
Keep up the good work, I'm optimistic about you and I'll chase you [laughing evilly]
I haven't read it for a while, and I stopped updating it. Are you thinking about how to write later? Don't be anxious, work slowly and carefully. I like your writing.
So pretty, so pretty
The book is a good book, and the writing and subject matter are good. But the author posted it in the wrong place. Tomato mainly focuses on fast-paced fast food articles.
The storyline has ups and downs, and I won't get bored so far.
Okay, okay, there are quite a few zombies in this genre, and the atmosphere is very good. It feels very apocalyptic.
Not bad, worth a look
Logic and plot are both good
Invincible, good-looking, good-looking
New theme, support, support [like]
Needless to say, good looking
It feels very poisonous in the front, but feels much better in the back.
Author, if you don't write one day, please! Send out the outline. I want to know the ending. Don't just read the comments. Everyone has their own shortcomings. I enjoy immersing myself in them. It's ok. Why do you want so many bells and whistles?
Traveling through the end of Han Dynasty in the flesh, the mysterious symbiotic virus, worth a look if you are interested
The integration into the village in the first paragraph is quite detailed, and the technology is not too super. It is very practical, setting traps, modifying the grips, etc., And also making and modifying iron tools a little bit. It is actually not bad if you don't think about it carefully. The only problem is that the protagonist feels too internally consumed and easily exits the line. Those lamenting that the God's perspective is slightly opened, destroying some immersion. The Wubao part feels a little better, the characters have fierce conflicts, the pace is faster, and the protagonist feels that he has grown a lot. The protagonist of this book uses a technological rhythm, which is the most comfortable in this type of writing. This comment is only an evaluation of the current article. I hope the author will still write according to his own words. Food and grass have the appearance of fairy grass.
After reading it, I guess if my guess is correct, either the author will finish it here, or he has finished the first chapter and is thinking about how to write the second chapter. I personally prefer the latter And I figured out how the story would develop next: After Lu Zhi was defeated, he had to face Dong Zhuo in Luoyang. Dong Zhuo not only had the Xiliang cavalry, but also obtained the corpses, plus areas with a large population, including Chang'an and Luoyang. Especially with Lu Bu, the next step should be the alliance of princes to defeat the corpse Dong Zhuo. After beating Dong Zhuo, I think it can be concluded. I just want to leave an open-ended ending for readers to think about. There is no need to study "Shao Song" to complete the key battles, but the content of continuous battles and victories begins. Also, the author, I just gave you a thumbs up. I hope you will reply after reading it and tell me if you will have a second chapter or how to write the next book. And I think you can definitely apply this template, such as writing about Wu Huan Hua ➕ Zombie, Late Tang Dynasty ➕ Zombie, Late Ming Dynasty ➕ Zombie, etc., Regardless of what those historical diode fans think. Because there are good online articles about zombies in history, and this is the only one I've seen so far. The author has to work hard!
After reading more than thirty chapters, I really understood what the author meant by slow warming [face covering] From the front, there is actually nothing wrong with the protagonist's kindness. Distributing his own emergency rations and so on are considered in line with the character, and he has not suffered any consequences because of it. Naturally, there is no reason for the sudden change. The early sense of immersion was well written by the author, but when I saw the Yellow Turban rally and felt that the world was about to be in chaos, I felt that the wording was not very good. After all, the protagonist is still familiar with the character design of the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, so he must have the understanding that the world is about to start. Therefore, this kind of gathering will only make the protagonist more aware of urgency, just like feeling that the epidemic is closely connected with him, which is an increasingly urgent feeling (purely personal opinion)
It looks good, the writing is very good, the sense of urgency at the end of the dynasty is very prominent, and the description of the ancient bottom is also very realistic The protagonist is too naive, with a kind heart that cannot be expressed, sacrificing his own interests to help others
It's quite detailed, unlike many other zombie novels that describe the monsters as being indifferent. Yes, the virus is scary and scary.
I have read the latest chapter. The author's writing and description are constantly improving. The description and setting of the virus are very novel. I can only say that under the influence of the protagonist's halo, the protagonist's kindness and compassion are acceptable. In this aspect, the plot of high blood pressure is also relatively weak and sparse. I hope it can be written in the long run, and it will not be too dramatic [crying]
The author can learn more about medical knowledge and check some information
The pace of this book is very slow. Although the writing style is not very amazing, it unexpectedly caught my brainwave. I just like the protagonist who is not perfect, and his outlook is not crooked, at least he is a normal person. The subject matter is still quite new. Overall, it is okay.
This book is still okay. Don't say that the protagonist is timid/cowardly and you will be no different from him if you travel to the past (as for other books? There is no system; who are those protagonists?) Unless you travel to the past and you are very strong! ! Otherwise, there is no difference between you and the protagonist of this book.
This book is okay. It may be a bit nagging at the beginning, but it becomes ok later on [laughing] The author mainly wants to try his best to describe the details, but not too much, which makes it seem a bit slow and bloated. However, excluding too many detailed descriptions, the atmosphere is still very good compared to the atmosphere of some novels. I'm looking forward to the next plot, and I hope the author can reach higher levels [Blow kiss]
The idea is quite good, but I would like to give you a small suggestion. Can you shorten the number of words in each paragraph? Otherwise, the mobile phone version will not look good and the whole page will be filled with words. Come on, author!
It's better than those time-travelers who write about the struggle for power and profit of aristocratic families, the living conditions of a lower class
I just watched a little bit, it's very good! Five stars first
The plot is relatively new and the narrative angle is very immersive.
This book is very well written, as if it were written fifteen years ago In the future, we can develop into the murderous prototype and add some extraordinary elements. It feels more conscious this way.
Very interesting, nice setting
Write according to your own ideas Keep up the good work, I'm optimistic about you and I'll chase you [laughing evilly] I haven't read it for a while, and I stopped updating it. Are you thinking about how to write later? Don't be anxious, work slowly and carefully. I like your writing.
So pretty, so pretty
The book is a good book, and the writing and subject matter are good. But the author posted it in the wrong place. Tomato mainly focuses on fast-paced fast food articles.
The storyline has ups and downs, and I won't get bored so far.
Okay, okay, there are quite a few zombies in this genre, and the atmosphere is very good. It feels very apocalyptic.
Not bad, worth a look
Logic and plot are both good
Invincible, good-looking, good-looking
New theme, support, support [like]
Needless to say, good looking
It feels very poisonous in the front, but feels much better in the back.
Very nice. The author will edit it quickly.