I have read too many books similar to the Naruto exposure video, including light curtains, live broadcasts, editing, all kinds of slander, or all kinds of abstraction.
I'm very helpless. I really haven't seen a normal Naruto article, so I'll just do it myself as a female Naruto fan.
The tempo is a little slow, and even if there are too many words, there won't be too much water.
The light curtain exposure will not interfere, and the showdown between the strong begins.
First of all, I can't even watch Boruto.
Then the light curtain fraud begins
Uchiha will not destroy the clan, the clan will not be destroyed, the clan will not be destroyed
Also, some ninja enhancements will be given to other ninja villages.
There will also be some strong confrontations, and Kakashi will also be strengthened.
A true battle between strong men becomes more exciting as you go to the back.
So without further ado, let's start the main movie
Every stroke and every picture is a labor of love, so please be patient and watch.
Reader comments
Not bad, keep going, but there are some loopholes in the timeline. For example, Shisui died in Konoha 53 years, and the Nine-Tails Incident was in 48 years. According to your time, Shisui was only 8 years old, and he was the clan leader. Deidara was 19 years old when he died, and Sasuke was 16 years old, only 3 years older. According to the time Minato Namikaze was alive, he should be only about 2 years old, so he couldn't have run away. Kurotsuchi should have just been born not long ago, and the Akatsuki members should only have no members now.
It seems that fan fiction related to the modification of the Sky Curtain Demon has become very popular recently. There are more and more similar ones, but very few can write brilliantly. This kind of view is unconstrained. It is difficult to adjust the setting of adding questions and answers or giving sky curtain rewards, and many fans have failed with this setting. In fact, it is enough to simply change the contrast between the front and behind the scenes to highlight the pleasure of reading, grasp the rhythm and character settings, and add some original plots appropriately. The current character settings of this book are in line with the original work, and the plot direction is also moderate. It is the setting of the sky curtain reward that will see if it can be controlled well in the future.
The author's soul is still very pure, and he has not yet come into contact with the big dye vat of society.
It's okay, but there's something wrong with the punctuation and it's a bit messy.
In addition, I still want to see the changing story of Sasuke and Naruto.
The pace is too fast. I feel that Black and White Zetsu's last chapter is not bad. I can only push it a little bit to make it more interesting. I hope the author can write better [Blow kiss]
In fact, it's not bad, but the pace is a little too fast. You may not know that you have written the plot later. You can add more daily dialogue and psychological description.
You can see that the description of emotions may not be perfect for a novice.
Uh, what should I say? After I read it a second time, the emotional descriptions were indeed not quite right, and the author is 100% a good young man who lives peacefully. (To put it simply, he has no political acumen at all)
After reading these twenty chapters, I feel pretty good. The author will also reply to any mistakes. Anyway, keep it up.
It's well written. It's my ideal ninja world. I never expected that the author's timeline is when Minato first became Hokage. It's a surprise.
Ok ok ok
Although there are many loopholes, it's still okay and I like it very much.
Uchiha Obito is one of the strongest people in the ninja world
It's okay, but the combat aspect is too sloppy, but everything else is okay.
If you give me a five-star review, please don't change your face. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
It's all redundant, and the support is gone.
The writing style needs to be improved, but it's very nice
Looks great, I wish there were more marquee content
It's beautiful. Come on.
Keep up the good work, author, I'm optimistic about you
This article is the first among all the Naruto articles I have read.
The plot is novel but the writing is a bit immature but it's very interesting to read.
New track novelty
Hahaha, author, all your punctuation marks are so strange. Fortunately, I mostly listened to the book, so I didn't feel much about it.
Not bad, keep going, but there are some loopholes in the timeline. For example, Shisui died in Konoha 53 years, and the Nine-Tails Incident was in 48 years. According to your time, Shisui was only 8 years old, and he was the clan leader. Deidara was 19 years old when he died, and Sasuke was 16 years old, only 3 years older. According to the time Minato Namikaze was alive, he should be only about 2 years old, so he couldn't have run away. Kurotsuchi should have just been born not long ago, and the Akatsuki members should only have no members now.
It seems that fan fiction related to the modification of the Sky Curtain Demon has become very popular recently. There are more and more similar ones, but very few can write brilliantly. This kind of view is unconstrained. It is difficult to adjust the setting of adding questions and answers or giving sky curtain rewards, and many fans have failed with this setting. In fact, it is enough to simply change the contrast between the front and behind the scenes to highlight the pleasure of reading, grasp the rhythm and character settings, and add some original plots appropriately. The current character settings of this book are in line with the original work, and the plot direction is also moderate. It is the setting of the sky curtain reward that will see if it can be controlled well in the future.
The author's soul is still very pure, and he has not yet come into contact with the big dye vat of society.
It's okay, but there's something wrong with the punctuation and it's a bit messy. In addition, I still want to see the changing story of Sasuke and Naruto.
The pace is too fast. I feel that Black and White Zetsu's last chapter is not bad. I can only push it a little bit to make it more interesting. I hope the author can write better [Blow kiss]
In fact, it's not bad, but the pace is a little too fast. You may not know that you have written the plot later. You can add more daily dialogue and psychological description.
Good-looking [shy][shy][shy] Please don't stop updating [smile][smile][smile]
So painful to read
You can see that the description of emotions may not be perfect for a novice. Uh, what should I say? After I read it a second time, the emotional descriptions were indeed not quite right, and the author is 100% a good young man who lives peacefully. (To put it simply, he has no political acumen at all)
After reading these twenty chapters, I feel pretty good. The author will also reply to any mistakes. Anyway, keep it up.
It's well written. It's my ideal ninja world. I never expected that the author's timeline is when Minato first became Hokage. It's a surprise.
Ok ok ok
Although there are many loopholes, it's still okay and I like it very much.
Uchiha Obito is one of the strongest people in the ninja world
It's okay, but the combat aspect is too sloppy, but everything else is okay.
If you give me a five-star review, please don't change your face. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
It's all redundant, and the support is gone.
The writing style needs to be improved, but it's very nice
Looks great, I wish there were more marquee content
It's beautiful. Come on.
Keep up the good work, author, I'm optimistic about you
This article is the first among all the Naruto articles I have read.
The plot is novel but the writing is a bit immature but it's very interesting to read.
New track novelty
Hahaha, author, all your punctuation marks are so strange. Fortunately, I mostly listened to the book, so I didn't feel much about it.