I've read too many books like Naruto exposure videos, with things like screens, livestreams, and edited clips. They're either full of slander or so bizarre they barely make sense.
It's really frustrating. This young lady honestly hasn't found a single normal Naruto story, so I'll write one myself as a female Naruto fan.
The pacing is a little slow, but I won't pad it out. I won't add even a single unnecessary word.
The exposure screen won't interfere. The battle between the strong is about to begin.
First of all, Boruto is practically impossible to watch.
So let's start by making things up on the screen.
The Uchiha clan won't be wiped out. Won't be wiped out. Won't be wiped out.
Some ninjas from other villages will also get power-ups.
There will be more clashes between powerful fighters, and Kakashi will get stronger too.
The battles between true powerhouses will get more thrilling as the story goes on.
Without further ado, let's begin.
Every stroke and every page has been painstakingly crafted, so please read patiently.
Not bad, keep going, but there are some loopholes in the timeline. For example, Shisui died in Konoha 53 years, and the Nine-Tails Incident was in 48 years. According to your time, Shisui was only 8 years old, and he was the clan leader. Deidara was 19 years old when he died, and Sasuke was 16 years old, only 3 years older. According to the time Minato Namikaze was alive, he should be only about 2 years old, so he couldn't have run away. Kurotsuchi should have just been born not long ago, and the Akatsuki members should only have no members now.
It seems that fan fiction related to the modification of the Sky Curtain Demon has become very popular recently. There are more and more similar ones, but very few can write brilliantly. This kind of view is unconstrained. It is difficult to adjust the setting of adding questions and answers or giving sky curtain rewards, and many fans have failed with this setting. In fact, it is enough to simply change the contrast between the front and behind the scenes to highlight the pleasure of reading, grasp the rhythm and character settings, and add some original plots appropriately. The current character settings of this book are in line with the original work, and the plot direction is also moderate. It is the setting of the sky curtain reward that will see if it can be controlled well in the future.
Good-looking 😳😳😳 Please don't stop updating 🙂🙂🙂
The author's soul is still very pure, and he has not yet come into contact with the big dye vat of society.
It's okay, but there's something wrong with the punctuation and it's a bit messy. In addition, I still want to see the changing story of Sasuke and Naruto.
The pace is too fast. I feel that Black and White Zetsu's last chapter is not bad. I can only push it a little bit to make it more interesting. I hope the author can write better [Blow kiss]
In fact, it's not bad, but the pace is a little too fast. You may not know that you have written the plot later. You can add more daily dialogue and psychological description.
So painful to read
It's well written. It's my ideal ninja world. I never expected that the author's timeline is when Minato first became Hokage. It's a surprise.
Ok ok ok