Delta: Join GTI from Jiaolong at the Beginning

For those who came from the previous book, there are not many Delta fans, and there are even fewer high-quality ones. This book has good prospects so far, at least it doesn't have any poisonous points, nor is it too brainless. There is nothing to say about the heroine Mai Xiaowen. The positioning of the protagonist is also good, which is in line with my aesthetics. The most important thing is that she is patriotic and has an open mind about the world situation. The author depicts the Nanjing Massacre from a future perspective and does not forget the national humiliation. This is great! He's not a traitor to his country and seeks glory, he's quite passionate. The protagonist is also very personal and his positioning is also very novel. Even though the writing was not good at first, it turned out pretty good later on. I believe the author will improve little by little. If the plot can be connected more smoothly, I think the score will be higher. The interaction with Mai Xiaowen in the middle is very detailed. I hope the author can take his time and make every plot more vivid without being too rigid. Overall, I am very optimistic about this book. I don't like those "Delta for All" and so on, but prefer this kind of fan fiction. Anyway, come on author!

It is one of the few fine products in the Delta The original world view of Delta and the world view added by the author make people feel that the protagonist must not forget the national humiliation. Although the author's writing was a bit stiff in the early stage, the writing got better and better later. It was very well written and the places that should be omitted did not delay at all. The character's personality and characteristics are very well written (people can unconsciously get into the character) and the emotional description is vivid and true. 1. The description and details of the emotional scene between the protagonist and Mai Xiaowen are just right. 2. Character creation is also possible. Each has its own characteristics. Keep (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ ) 3. The single-line narrative is well written, but it is a bit boring to read alone (referring to the main line without character description, etc.) 4. Suggestion: It is recommended that the author appropriately add some foreshadowing and environmental close-ups to enrich the background and increase suspense (off-topic: the author can really try multi-line narrative) 5. It is also a suggestion: the author should practice more connections and transitions between things.

It's not too much for the anchor to give himself a five-star rating [Thinking]

It's good-looking, better than other fanfics. The protagonists are not so stiff when they come together, and it's like the heroine is a follow-up. They come together within a few chapters. All in all, it's a good fanfic. Come on authorᕕ(◠ڼ◠)ᕗ

I see it's pretty good now, no big deal. It's just that there are too few updates! Update soon! There are really very few Delta fans. I have high expectations for Zhibo. Please update me soon! I want to see the sweet interaction between Mai Xiaowen and Bai Xiao. Also, who said there are no female readers for this book? I just love watching it!

With the background of military special operations, the protagonist Bai Xiao is a Chinese soldier and a sniper of the Dragon Special Forces, and later joins the global emergency response organization GTI. His identity and the gimmick of "GTI Superman" are attractive. The single heroine, brotherhood and other elements enrich the story line. The interactive dialogues between the characters have a sense of the Internet, like Bai Xiao's "Don't be obsessed with me, he is a legend", which can shorten the distance. Overall, it is a promising military novel, suitable for readers who like special warfare themes and watching the protagonist act cool in international organizations. If the writing and plot depth are polished in the future, it will be even more brilliant. With the background of military special operations, the protagonist Bai Xiao is a Chinese soldier and a sniper of the Dragon Special Forces, and later joins the global emergency response organization GTI. His identity and the gimmick of "GTI Superman" are attractive. The single heroine, brotherhood and other elements enrich the story line. The interactive dialogues between the characters have a sense of the Internet, like Bai Xiao's "Don't be obsessed with me, he is a legend", which can shorten the distance. Overall, it is a promising military novel, suitable for readers who like special warfare themes and watching the protagonist act cool in international organizations. If the writing and plot depth are polished in the future, it will be even more brilliant.

Keep the book, now chapter 196, kick me to chapter 300 [thinking] Also, author, if you dare to stop updating, I will fight you to the death [smile]

Celebrate! The Origin Witch who brought out the first burst of light from the chaos has awakened! She used the void as paper and her first thoughts as ink, and wrote the first line of incantation before the world opened. She twisted the newborn nebula into spinning thread, and let the warp and weft of time form a web from scratch. Look! The dust of the beginning condensed into the first elements in her palm, and the first pulse of the universe was the prayer whispered on her lips! At this moment, nothingness has been ignited by her eyes, and the germs of all things are breaking through the ground in her breath; wherever she walks, chaos divides into clear and turbid, silence grows in mountains, rivers, lakes and seas, and even "existence" itself is the first drop of original dew dripping from her fingertips! Celebrate! This is the beginning of tracing the origin of all things. All laws and all creatures inherit her original gift! Welcome, the original witch who weaves the first chapter of all things!

It looks good, I have nothing to say, it's one of the best among Delta fan fiction, but the author seems to want to use knives, so I'll give it four stars. There's nothing wrong with the plot and characterization, but I simply don't like knives.

One less is because I am afraid that he will be too proud of his full star.

It's so beautiful, why are the ratings so low?

There are quite a lot of shortcomings in front of it, so many that I don't even know where to start. It will be much better later on, but this is the only one that contains more daily writing in Delta. It reads fairly smoothly and is worth a read👀

Not bad, not bad. It's the best book I've ever seen in Triangle. Come on, the author [like][like]

The description is very delicate and realistic, and the plot rhythm is also good [like]

The writing is super good ٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)ᵒᵏᵎᵎᵎᵎ, so beautiful [Admiration]

It looks good, come on author

I hope I don't have a knife When will they show their love? I feel a little uncomfortable watching it. , Please, please, let the two of them be together directly

All I can say about this book is that if you are afraid of poison and embarrassment, you can jump directly to chapter 37. Compared with what is written in the beginning, it can only be said in a few words, but the latter part is still worth reading. What is more worrying is that the author has said that he has thought about the new book, so this book will not end hastily or be unfinished (a little scared 😱) @nan

The writing was okay, but the part from being captured to being rescued was toxic. The protagonist was seriously injured, his knees were punctured, and he was tortured. After being rescued, he was not treated, but there was no trace of injury on his body. He could even run, jump, eat and lie on the sofa leisurely, and no one suspected it. (Neurostatic bees block pain and muscle contraction and are not mentioned to treat injuries)

Can you just feel aggrieved and fall into my hands?

The details are spot on and the writing is also very good. Good job, author! 💪 It's beautiful, I love watching it, and I'll keep watching it! ! ! [The masterpiece of bird food]

Favorite Delta fan

It's really good, why is it not rated high? I have been chasing

The eyes are on oneself. Does it look good? You'll know it when you see it. Believe me now, you won't regret it.

The writing is really good, the rating will definitely increase. The emotional scenes are well described and interspersed between battles. It has a good look and feel [like]

Haokang, the most appetizing Delta culture

Dear author, can you update more every day? I've already read it from the beginning to the second time, and I can't bear to go a day without watching it.

It's beautiful, especially the part about childhood. [Sinister smile]

Embarrassing, but the contrast is huge

It's really good.