Mystery Revival: I Become the Origin Ghost by Gathering a Betrothal Gift

There are only a few supporting characters that I feel are well written in the original work. You still need to re-create them. In the original work, just because he dared to block the door of the ghost post office and kill ordinary people, it can be seen that he does not care about the lives and deaths of a few ordinary people.

It's just average. It's quite outrageous to encounter ghosts every day starting from the ghost post office. The ghosts all come to look for the protagonist.

The plot of the community in the front is very similar to the original work, but the back part is very exciting. I refer to the plot here, but the writing style is a bit weak and the details are not appropriate. There are so many tricks but not a particularly exciting feeling. . . . What's very strange is that the protagonist has used his ability many times when he was acting alone. It would be unreasonable if there was no other way to suppress it. . . . . . I went to No. 7 Middle School. I want to know if Yang Jian will appear without the parchment. I am looking forward to it, the author. . . Please give your best to the author, I hope there will be no interruption in updates...

Actually, it's okay. Tomato itself doesn't allow writing that kind of particularly bloody articles. This article is okay. At least Shafan is decisive. Whoever offends the protagonist kills the protagonist. As for the task of helping others, passerby A, to put it bluntly, it is similar to Yang Jian. The country assigns you tasks, can you ignore it? The author will improve it in the future. Try to control the ghost with the goal of staying alive, and then solve the task of the ghost.

I read Chapter 105 in one go. It's quite in line with the mysterious revival. There aren't many poison points, but the oppressive feeling of ghosts is weaker. I don't know if Yang Jian will be written about it later. Now that I'm writing about dealing with the knocker, I feel like it's interfering with Yang Jian's path to becoming a god. In summary, it's quite interesting. The author must not stop updating it [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The writing is okay, but the character design in the early stage is similar to that of Yang Jian. The later writing begins to have a personal style, and the progress is okay. Currently, it is the S-level supernatural event of the knocker, but now the protagonist begins to control the second ghost. The progress is much faster than the original work. Keep up the good work

Is this straightforward? Yang Jian has been replaced. All opportunities for Yang Jian are gone. Although they are still the original team, I still want to see Yang Jian appear and hope to fight side by side with Yang Jian.

It's pretty good-looking. The last one I could watch was "Conquering the Nightmare"

A good novel, come on, author.

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