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The author Jun Jun gave himself a score, hey hey hey [full] This is the author Jun's first book, and I will finish it no matter what [blowing kisses] Thank you to the readers who support the author Jun [blowing kisses]

If you like interesting and adventurous stories, this is indeed worth a read. Keep reading and it will become more and more interesting. The author's story outline is great and very thoughtful. It feels like a hot-blooded comic, and the psychological descriptions of the two characters are also very good. He also has his own thoughts and reflections. The advantages are obvious, and so are the disadvantages. The details are a bit immature. For example, the previous chapters were fast-paced, cool, and smooth, but suddenly the descriptions became too detailed, making people think they were important, but in fact they were not. It was like a sudden change in the style of painting. Some places are repeated, so it feels like a long-winded attempt to make up the word count. And if there is, it can be said in one paragraph, but when it is divided into two paragraphs, it does not look smooth. Sometimes you don't need one sentence, you can also use two sentences per paragraph. This paragraphing does look cleaner, but each sentence is one paragraph. It seems to be very tiring. It's better to highlight the character's personality in the details, or be bolder in describing the atmosphere of the general environment. The big rhythm is good, but the small rhythm occasionally drags and gets stuck, but it seems to get better later on. The author may be a science student.

No matter which race or world we are in, striving to become better can always change some people's views and gain more excitement. I really like the protagonist's little by little image of the original owner from a gloomy insect longing to be loved, into a fresh and warm two-way redemption of the insect that heals him and is given love in return. I haven't finished reading yet and will continue tomorrow. I hope that people who live alone can spend their lives with lonely and brave insects (≧∇≦)

Good looking! ! In the beginning, I slept with you, so I am willing to be responsible for treating you well, but I don't love you. I really like you! ! The young couple get along very sweetly. I hope the villain can be released soon. I still like to see the two protagonists get along with each other. The same goes for the female father of the two male protagonists. It is best to meet worthy love (the two male fathers can fly as far as they go). Although it seems now that Wei Zhazha's memory has been tampered with, which is pitiful, but after more than ten years of being together, the memory of the person is different from the person he is with. I have no doubt at all. I am afraid that having a second child with Xi will affect his IQ.

Now it feels like everyone is a villain, including the female protagonist. The only unlucky one is the protagonist who was dragged into it.

Not bad, obviously many of the plots are considered to be shocking, but somehow I just want to watch it

How to put it, in fact, it is more appropriate to say about 4 stars, because there are indeed some poisonous points in the early stage. The characters of the two protagonists are not very perfect in the early stage. Although people cannot be without shortcomings, it is a novel after all. Anyway, after surviving the early stage, the later stage was pretty good. And please update it quickly. I can't wait to see it. The hero's father is in great pain when he knows the truth. I don't know why but I'm really looking forward to it. So hurry up and write the main story.

The male protagonist is now from D to C, but according to the general routine, the finale is at least S, and the system tasks have just started, and the male protagonist's brother's line and the male protagonist's father's line are only mentioned a little bit, so... The author's wife still has a lot of plots that have not been updated! ! ! Hand over the manuscript quickly! ! ! ! ! ! [Cry][cry][cry][cry]

Quite interesting It is rare that both parties do not fall in love at first sight for no reason It's just that the story develops too slowly. Come on, author.

I just like to watch this kind of Zerg 1V1 with a plot and a good emotional line. The kind of awkward 1V1 that makes people dig their toes into the ground is totally unacceptable. I like the characters of the two protagonists very much. They know how to improve their own strength instead of blindly knowing what to do and then not doing it. As expected, those who work hard are the most dazzling. The author will continue to work hard and make more and more exciting!

Invincible is super good-looking, I like it a lot, but I have always felt sorry for Xi, so much. Leaving aside Xi's line, the whole thing is actually sweet, but the plot and the emotional lines are OK.

The plot is good but too short. The relationship between the two has come naturally. However, various mysteries have not yet been solved (are we going to open a big map?). The promised farming plot [face covering] was chased all the way. Super powers! Let's all fight! Warlike Races (Change Concepts, Let the Road Go Far) This book is much better than those embarrassing and embarrassing ones. The supporting characters are more vivid. I hope the female father of the protagonist will have a good ending. I feel that there will be a love variety show in the future [Love]

It looks good. I usually don't follow serials. This is one of the few. Come on [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

It's beautiful and the plot is well written. The stories about my father's generation are so sad. I am *** with the surname Tang, and you are ***…. With his memory tampered with, Wei Ye spent half his life with the murderer of his lover, and he still regarded the murderer as his lover. I can't imagine how devastated I will be after knowing everything😭. I'm so angry! Tang Yu, you****. I feel like I won't be a yandere in the future. I hope the author can do it faster, preferably by bursting out a large paragraph suddenly. Although the overall story may be a medium-long article [crying]. It feels like it will take a long time for Wei Ye to know everything [crying]. This kind of feeling is the most uncomfortable [almost crying]

It's nice to look at~ But this is 1v1, right?

Currently, I really like the author's articles. I hope you will continue to work harder and update more.

Very nice! I don't know why the rating is so low. I won't lose money if I invest in it.

It's also tied, okay, it's very beautiful! ! ! ! Why is it not being updated? The author must not stop updating! ! I finally found a good Zerg article [I almost cried][I almost cried]

The plot is quite interesting and I look forward to the author's next update [Sending my heart] I really like this kind of novel where the emotional line is developed step by step. It is so hard to find such novels nowadays. At least let me know what the two protagonists did to gradually attract each other. They won't fall in love with each other immediately because the two protagonists accidentally marked each other. Clecy has his own firm inhibitor and broke his hand and finally went to Wei Qianlan as a last resort. He won't easily bow down and endure until the last moment because of the Zerg gene and have his own arrogance. Even except for the protagonist, all the villains are the villains. The author openly admits that none of them are perfect people. (In many novels, I don't know how the two protagonists fell in love with each other and what did they do to attract each other to get together? They didn't write it clearly and just went to the back to spread the dog food. I was tired of reading it)

[Eating melon] I want to see the day when Clesis falls in love with the protagonist. I'd also like to see it if the protagonist returns to Earth and leaves the female insect behind to regret it.

It looks good, and you won't lose money if you invest in it.

Beautiful, very beautiful Although the rating is not high, the novel is actually very well written, and the non-brainy white text actually has a very high rating.

Author, can you sleep? I can't sleep. Hurry up and write. Woohoo.

I like it very much, and I feel like it is different from other Zerg novels.

I think the idea is okay, but the author didn't explain it clearly in the text and then explained it in the comments. I think it's a bit funny. Although it's understandable, Da Da has just started writing, and Shou obviously has a crush on Gong. Why did Shou pinch Gong when Gong went to find him? I feel like Da Da wanted to write about the tsundere type, but it felt a bit violent, haha.

It's pretty good, but the author is too slow to update it. Don't force me to enter the manuscript box.

The plot is very good, but there is too little content now. I hope the author can add more.

It's great. It would be even better if the author could update ten chapters a day [laughter]

The writing is okay, I like the plot very much

I like it so much! Come on, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see!